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[Maddyoll]

Maddyoll; You can apply for both, but you can't win both. xD

Haha yeah I figured x3
So, I suppose I'll put my Solen forum here? x3

Username: Maddyoll
Ahzenai you're wooing: Solen
Woo:
"Captain Dewy is out, if that's who you mean." said Sandy, the unusual golden-blond wolf behind him. "But until then Corporal Sandy reporting for duty!" Sandy smiled. "You must be Sergeant Major Solen; I've heard alot aboout you." Sandy swised her tail happily. "This will be somewhat brief. General Eric is waiting for me." Sandy explained. "We have been training lately so he let me go. Though, I hate wondering these places myself.. So I have been searching for a companion."

"You seem like the type of animal who could be just the thing!" Sandy grinned. "I would really like you to consider joining our forces. We need a Sergeant like you!" Sandy blushed and looked up at Solen, and taking out a gleaming dagger. "This can be used for your duties, I found it helpful." Sandy saluted to the ahzenai before saying "I do hope you join us. This is a request, but I believe you will enjoy being with us. If you do decide, General Eric and I will be over there." Sandy motioned towards the rock that another wolf, this one huge and black with a metal mask and strange markings, was waiting. Sandy then slowly trotted toward there, only to turn around and salute once more. "Good luck Soldier!" ♥


If I do get Sergeant Major Solen, he will be used in lots of art, stories, and probably a series if it is okay with you. n_n
Also I'm so sorry that this is a bit short ^^; the series will be really long to make up for it, that is, if I do get Sergeant Solen..

Also I referenced the ranks from here:
Ignore the fact that they are Marine ranks, I just was looking for general ranks xD

(Sandy's ref:)


(General Eric's Ref:)

[Onyxeva]

That's fine Maddyoll. :3

Just a quick question regarding some of the woo's I've looked through so far. How did said character find themselves in Ahzen? xD

It seems to me that there just happens to conveniently be several miltary-type figures in Ahzen. :B

[Maddyoll]

Oh so convenient..

But hey, Sandy's been my charrie for awhile xD I just decided to have her journey to ahzen, I thought the idea was great because I used to rp with her on a different site and right now she was "journeying" off (I was too lazy to think of anything else for her to do xD)

So of course when I saw Solen I was like "Woot! Military ftw! xD I know just the thing!"

(Sandy's ref:)


(General Eric's Ref:)


(Oh yeah and the military RP was a completely random thing that my friend got me into. But it was fun while it lasted~!)

[Onyxeva]

I wasn't singling you out Maddolly, I had been meaning to say something for a while, but I just kept forgetting and while reading through yours, I was simply reminded. <3

I had no doubt that many of you had a story for how they had come to be in Ahzen, I was just wondering. xD

[ToastWhisperer]

The vortex started to spin again, the light within it changing from a simple glow to a steady beat. A few seconds later, a brown and green and white ahzenai emerged. Solen marched in step with the light from the vortex, his head and tail high and proud, as if he was on parade. He continued marching through the crowd of suitors who awaited him below. If they were so rude as to get in his way, he firmly stepped over them or pushed them aside. He didn't stop, hesitate, or wait, he simply marched on until he reached Valcyon. Then he stopped, standing still. "Sergeant Solen reporting for duty, Valcyon SIR!" he shouted as a good soldier should, sitting down to he could salute Valcyon.

"Excellent, Sergeant Solen," Valcyon replied, getting into the soldierly spirit. "I have your marching orders. You are to report to your new captain at once. Now," he took a deep breath, and shouted like a drill sargeant: "ABOUT FACE! FORWARD MARCH!"

Solen saluted Valcyon once more, and promptly obeyed orders until he had marched himself back to the group of suitors.

There he sat down again, saluted no one in particular, and said, "Sergeant Solen reporting for duty, Captain-" he paused, and looked around at all the faces as if seeing them for the first time. "Captain?" He asked, sounding a little nervous. Which one of these was his captain? "CAPTAIN?!?" he shouted again, looking about frantically and sounding nervous.

Created by Onyxwings, Written by Nimaine.

Judging will occur on October 20th.

Using a new character.

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I stood infront of the crowd. A watched the Vortex swirl. I couldn't help my smile. I adjusted the envelope hat on my head, lightly touching the tight bun in my hair. I gave a curt nod. I watched as a new Ahzenai lept out. Sergeant Solen. Just my type of guy.

When he stepped towards the crowd, I watched his every move. I gave a nod. When he frantically called out Captain, I shook my head slightly. I stepped for, one foot in front of the other, my fists curled at my waist. "Sergeant Solen!" I barked, my voice firm, steady. I kept my eyes locked in his, posture straight. I gave him a nod.

"That's Captain Hudson to you." I said, my tone only softening slightly. I looked down at him. "Im requesting you join me home. And then on my journeys at the base. That is, if you are willing to leave with me!" I saluted him, and stepped back.

[Onyxeva]

Judging for Solen will occur in 1 hour. Please have your forms finished by then. :3

[Onyxeva]

Now Judging.

[Maddyoll]

I wasn't singling you out Maddolly, I had been meaning to say something for a while, but I just kept forgetting and while reading through yours, I was simply reminded. <3

I had no doubt that many of you had a story for how they had come to be in Ahzen, I was just wondering. xD

Haha I didn't mean that you were signalling me out, I just wanted to somewhat-explain the (I guess) behind-the-scenes story :3

I loved writing this story 83 I enjoyed iit, and even if I don't win Sollen will still be a pretty awesome ahz that I will always remember~♥

[Onyxeva]

Solen eyed each suitor that approached him claiming to be his Captain. Surely not all were what they said? Yes they could be a Captain, but they were not his. With a huff of impatience he rose to his feet. Since his Captain was not here, he decided instead of sitting around and waiting for orders he would simply tag along with another group of soldiers until his Captain returned- whenever that may be.

He padded over to the rock where Corporal Sandy and General Eric waited. His head held high, he announced himself.

"Sergeant Solen, reporting for duty!"

He sat himself firmly on the ground and waited for his orders.

Solen has joined you Corporal Sandy/General Eric (Maddyoll).

5 entries, 29 slots.

[Maddyoll]

OOOOOHHHHHHHHHMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!
Sorry for caps lock abuse xD

Sandy grinned as wide as her mouth would let her as she said
"Welcome! ♥"

General Eric couldn't believe this eather. Of all people Solen picked Sandy? But General Eric just smiled as he said "Yes, Welcome sergeant Solen!"



Edit: First piece of art! ♥