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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby Desmond » Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:42 am

Tracker Dog Application Series 20
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Username: -3B-
Tracker Dog you want: #77
Name you'll give it:

Does not claim a name, but is often referred to by the team as Uklet.
[oo-CLAY]
[Croatian, "Haunted"]

NOTE:
Wiki wrote:*Some groups and individuals have used non-standard pronouns, hoping they will become standard. Various proposals for such changes have been around since at least the 19th century.
Ze (or zie or sie) and zir[25]|| Ze [He]// zir/zem [him]// Zir/Zes [his]// zirs/zes [Pos. his]// Ze likes zirself

[This is the setup of pronouns I would have usually taken, but for comprehension purposes I used the traditional standard masculine pronouns. There's a lot of text here; it's hard to read with these pronouns, unless you're really used to them - something that not everyone is.
I would have used “it”, but I find it extremely disrespectful. We don’t call neutered or spayed dogs “it”, we call them “he” or “she”, even though they’re sterile.
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Physical Statistics/Other

Height: 30" to the shoulder - About the same size as the Pyrenean mastiff, a common type of guard dog.
Weight: Not measured since his time at the base. He weighed about 200 pounds then, again a similar statistic to the Pyrenean.
Currently weighs less due to lifestyle.
Tail Concerns: If it were any other animal, his tail would be docked to prevent it from breaking due to wagging [causing him to become aggressive]. However, because he is able to become intangible, it is deemed unnecessary, as he can simply phase his tail through objects.
Size Concerns/Notes: He is large enough to let the smallest investigator ride him, though he is not strong enough to take the weight for long. He is built for stealth and speed, not power, and is therefore not an attack animal. His top speed reached thus far is 22 mph, during an emergency in which one of his investigating team was in danger. This is fast for a canine his size, though not quite as fast as a greyhound, which can run up to 39 mph.
Handler(s): Base team consisted of three members: his working companion, his training supervisor, and a vet.
Current team is, unofficially, a band of 3-6 paranormal investigators. The number varies on location; sometimes, half of the group searches a different, nearby haunting.


Reason why you want it:
First off, I am very much into spirits. I've had my own experiences with the paranormal, and I absolutely love ghostly characters. I feel a connection to them because of my passion, and always make a point to make space whenever I find one available for adoption. This has recently created an entire storyline about spirits, which is developing each and every day. This Tracker, if I receive it, would be the first canine for this story, and the first semi-malevolent spiritesque-type encountered by the two lead investigators.

I would also love to own Uklet because of the inspiration I get so inspired by him. He speaks to me, whispering ideas into my ear and pulling on my muse's attention. Similar to my spirit cat that I own, he would present a challenge that I am ready and willing to take. Already, he has started haunting my sketchbook as I doodle out ideas for this form - no other character has caught me this deeply, to have me start drawing them before I even own them... it's truly a unique situation for me.

I had thought about having him join the plotline that involves my other two Trackers, Ogosto and Seeker, but he wouldn't fit. He is far too unique to be in that plotline, and I feel that he would be much more comfortable in my newest one, which involves a team of paranormal investigators and their two ghost hunting cats. Dogs are commonly used in real-life investigations, because they are far more sensitive that we humans are, and have a nature that we can understand and interpret. I feel that Trackers would be similar; they are the pinnacle of working-class canine, after all, and would be created for the purpose of protecting their human counterparts. This need to protect, I feel, would be something necessary for a team.

I also love his mischievous nature; I share this in common with him. I, too, love sneaking up on people and scaring them, though I'm now obliged to wear keys and things that jingle as I walk so that I can't do this anymore; the people I care about just got too tired of me appearing out of nowhere. However, he would not get such a restriction; No bells, no keys, nor jangling dogtags will be placed upon him. He will only wear a simple leather harness or collar every now and again, and only because they are there to protect him from the crueler spirits, and to carry emergency items so that he can prevent a paranormal disaster.

I, myself, have been held down and hurt by spirits. To have a protective creature such as Uklet would have been a huge relief, especially when I woke up in my bed with a large kitchen knife lying under me. Uklet, if he was real and "on my side", would have protected me from that particular spirit, I should think. He would have woken me, or prevented the knife from finding its way in my bed.


Will it be used in any kind of story?
Absolutely - he will join the spirit-seeking group's story as a slight cross between antagonist and protagonist (or, rather, an antagonizing protagonist, as he likes to torment the other protagonists). He will also join my characters in my art.


The Team wrote:The paranormal investigation team that Uklet follows is large for a typical paranormal team, and it's still moderately amateur, though they still know what they are doing during investigations.

The human members don't often let themselves go by names, preferring to keep themselves professional as well as preventing spirits from latching onto them. However, the animals of the team, Spirit Seeker and his ghostly friend Solace (Soulless), don't really abide by this rule. They chose names after they learned the human language, and never really altered their ways.

The group studies spirits close-up, though they respect any and all that they come in contact with. Unfortunately, this also means that the negative spirits are allowed to attempt to take advantage of the team, harming or possessing them at times where they are left without the protective charms. This is the main part of Uklet's function - he is one of those protective measures that guard against these possessions and harmful physical manifestations.

As a result of this, the team treats Uklet with the utmost respect, believing him to be a hybrid of tracker and spirit - granted, they do not have the equipment to verify this. They do not try to restrain him, letting him roam as he wishes until he gives them a sign that he would rather be theirs - for example, not letting the lead investigator remove his harness or collar. If and when this happens, they would treat him as they do the other two animal team members - as family.


Members:
The Lead: The leader of the group. Male; unsure of himself until he is proven correct.
S.I.C.: The Second-In-Command. Female, medium; Quiet, rarely speaks, but is always sure of her words.
Tech One: One member of the Tech part of the team. Female; Slightly braver than Tech Two, and is willing to yell at spirits if need be.
Tech Two: The other member of the Tech part of the team. More religious than the other three humans, and is petrified of spirits after experiencing one too many negative encounters.
Spirit Seeker: Feline accompaniment. Male; Curious and braver than the humans. Anchor to Solace.
Solace/Soulless: Ghostly feline accompaniment. Shy, highly intelligent; speaks many languages, but can only speak through the Spirit Box (similar to Uklet). Holds a darker influence inside of him, named "Soulless". Attached to Spirit Seeker.


Describe its personality:

Silent. Uklet 'speaks' on a frequency not picked up by man, anthro or animal alike. As a result, he is considered completely and utterly mute, unless the paranormal scientists that he follows [but is not 'owned by'] use their investigation equipment to communicate with him - not that he has much of anything to say that they could understand.
Haunting. Uklet has the tendency to follow those that he is curious about. As a result, he has this haunting quality about him. Those that try to escape him have to understand this part of him - it is impossible to escape one that can walk through walls, after all. They must divert his attention, or lose it altogether.
Frustrated. Uklet wants someone to understand him, though he cannot find anyone that can truly hear him, let alone comprehend. This has caused him a lot of frustration, of course - this, in turn, has sparked a slight temper, which flares whenever he is degraded into "some dumb [mute] thing*".
Longing. Uklet longs for respect and companionship, which he seems to find the most while he follows the paranormal investigators - though, even they aren't entirely satisfactory.
Mischievous. Uklet loves to sneak up on members of his team during nights that they aren't investigating. He also loves playing with the three cat members, though he does try to be gentle with them.
Thankful. He is thankful that he has found people that understand him. He doesn't want to let them down, and they seem to take care of him - he tries to return the favor by protecting and being helpful, even if that just means helping everyone unwind.
Caring. Uklet cares about the people that he has attached himself to. He genuinely wants to protect them once he gets used to their group dynamics. He especially cares about the vulnerable spirit cat Solace (Soulless), not only because he exists in the plane where the spirits have complete control, but because he actually understands his plight - he, too, has a hard time communicating with the others because it takes a lot of energy for spirits to make audible sounds.


Write an introduction for your Tracker:
The italicized words are written interpretation of EVPs - Electronic Voice Phenomena. Their translation is in brackets below them.

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Eskkkkkkkkkst.
[Escape.]
The tracker currently known as Uklet was meant for some task, not too long ago for memory, but long enough that everyone involved in the project is now dead or has conveniently forgotten. Well, all except for the tracker himself, of course.

The task was a top-secret daytime covert operations one, in which only those that needed to know were told, and only at the very last minute. but he was there. He knew his job. And he resented it. On his first mission, a freak accident occurred and the handler that would have brought him back to base was killed in the massive resulting explosion at Uklet himself barely escaped... and, seeing as he was his transportation, he could not return to base - not a tragedy, really.

It wasn't long before he realized that there was a problem - at base, his handlers used equipment to give his orders and act like they heard and understood him. Without that equipment... there was nobody that could even hear him, let alone understand.

And so begun the loneliness.


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[Uklet on an abandoned ship in the harbor]
Hhhhhhhu- hhhhelsssshkt.
[Help.]
Lost, he stumbled upon the wreckage of a town abandoned by its old inhabitants. Humans would have called it a ghost town; he had no choice but to call it home. He was trained in the basics of how to hunt back in the base, but soon found himself having to refine these tactics. Eventually, though, this mode of survival needed something... more. The tracker was lonely.

He tried to alleviate this need to communicate. However, trees, statues, buildings and skeleton hulls of ships floating in sickly colored water were not the best conversationalists, even as irradiated as they were. He began seeing things... hallucinations that would understand him. It was not the best of solutions... but it helped stave off the insanity that isolation brings.

Then the curious folk came from all over. Intrigued by the legends of the "Eyeless Ghost Dog" and the history of the abandoned city itself, they came with equipment that allowed them to film or hear the dead. One particular group, in fact, brought a mysterious box... one that he considered almost magical.

It could hear him.

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Ff-fffffffffffollhhhhhhssssssshhhhhht.
[Follow.]
This box, called a Spirit Box*, scanned the frequencies most commonly used by spirits... and the tracker himself. He found himself barking and yipping at the box and the group actually reacting to the noise as it came out, clear against the constant whir of the white noise.

He had found an outlet. A source of socialization. It would not be a wasted chance.

He shadowed the group as they investigated the city in the dark, his soft glow startling them as they looked for spirits. One member of the group, a wild-haired cat with a slight snark in his tone, named him Uklet, after one of the famous people that had once been known to live in the area. Nobody really knew the meaning of the word, but they decided to pick it up. The now-'named' Uklet didn't quite claim his new name, though he appreciated the meaning behind it - a name made him almost equal. He existed to these beings.

He would follow them, then.

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G-gooooooooooooooooosshhhhhhhhkt.
[Good? Ghost?]
Uklet followed the group even when they left the abandoned city. In return for tolerating his presence, he began protecting them from truly malevolent spirits. Animals, after all, are far more sensitive to the spirit plane than humans, and the creatures that had assumed an almost human-like status. He could sense when a dark, demonic force moved to strangle one member of the team when they were sent to check out a room by themselves - his reaction was to stand and 'stare' intently at the would-be victim, his teeth bared in a ferocious snarl. He backed the investigator into the hallway and out of the danger zone, raising his hackles and flaring his glow to emphasize those glaringly blank eyelike markings.

He proved himself a valuable ally during investigations, though he still has not been properly 'claimed' by any member of the team. He is currently fed and taken care of by everyone in the group, though this is merely to try and encourage him to stay around. The Lead Investigator often supplies him with a collar or harness covered in protective charms and devices meant to discourage demonic spirits from possessing or harming him, and allows him to carry emergency supplies to someone in need, though these are always taken off after the investigation, for fear that he would feel trapped and start hurting the team.

Outside of investigations, he has become close to one member of the team, in particular - the spirit cat Solace. The pair seem to understand the other's plight, one being a mute-to-human-ears spirit-like Tracker, and the other being a not-quite-dead ghost feline. They often sleep curled up next to each other, sometimes even lying through walls or furniture to startle the others, as per his nature.

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*This is a real-life contraption. It does exactly as I wrote.


Story Excerpt:

1. [Uklet saves The Lead]
Uklet's ears pricked up at the sound of distant clattering in the huge, decaying mental institution. There was an evil here that was not worth encountering, though the team would try to do so anyway. It had swallowed countless of the criminally insane as they wasted away in here, screaming and muttering, or perhaps staring and twitching as they were tied up and kept restrained or isolated in this proverbial hell on earth. The Lead Investigator walked toward the sound, his sweaty hands grasping the small, seemingly magical box as the camera in his hand emitted a steady, low hum that only Uklet himself could hear.

"Uke, stay close, please.... This place is just... full of bad things. I can sense it."

Full of bad things? No, no. Uklet barked - not that The Lead himself would hear it until he played his voice recorder back - and followed, his soft glow illuminating the floor in front of them. This place wasn't full... all of the evil contained in this place was one being... and then there was the countless echoing cries of the insane as their spirits were tortured for all eternity. It gave him the creeps... he was completely on edge.

He suddenly stopped, feeling the air thicken rapidly. He pointed his horns forward, the skull marking flaring in danger. The collar he wore... it wouldn't stop this. It wouldn't protect him this time.

This investigation, according to him, was over, no matter how little they had done so far. He stepped in front of The Lead, his head and tail lowered as he walked sideways, gently pushing him not-Master out.

"What are you doing...? We haven't even begun...!"

"GET OUT."

The spirit box in his hand flared to life, turning itself on and emitting the ferocious growl from the Other Side, clear as day despite the constant ring of static that the device always gave off. Panicked, Uklet took The Lead's shirt and dragged him out, feeling the danger directly behind him, and closing in. The pair made it out of the ex-institution just in time; as soon as they got out, the door slammed shut and a thick haze of smoke appeared around the door.

The building... was on fire. Except it wasn't burning. Soot wasn't released into the air for Uklet to smell; instead, the thick, burning odor of smoke and heat scorched its way into his nasal sensors.

"You... You saved my life, buddy.... I... I could have d-died...." The Lead's hand found its way to Uklet's head, the rough, dirty fingers stroking his thick, matted fur.

After the fire department had been called, and the 'fire' went out, the team looked at what little evidence it had. The demon that had chased The Lead and Uklet out appeared as two burning pits of toxic green orbs on the camera, with twin shadows reaching out with pointed fingers. EVPs threatening death and things far worse were mixed in with screams of terror on the voice recorder - The Lead's voice was barely understandable with all of the noise.

"We have to go back. We have to go in there and clean that place out. But we can't... we can't do that."

Uklet let his head hang as he nibbled on his personal chuck of meat that they called 'dinner'. He wouldn't let them. They couldn't go back.

Not if he had any say in it.


2. [Uklet starts following the group]
"Something is following us." Tech One's voice was soft, her blue-green eyes scanning the dark warily. There were spirits of the type that they had never encountered in this wilderness, and all six of them - human and feline alike - were wary. Spirit Seeker's hair was on end, his tail bushed out in alertness. He, too, was afraid and alert. The stories of a mysterious feral guardian ghost dog echoed through their brains as they searched.... It was out there, they knew. It had to be.

A crash from where they had set up their camp. They started running toward it, Solace and Spirit leading the way. The cameras strapped to the cats' backs would catch evidence, and their collars, inscribed with Christian, Wiccan, Judeo, Islamic, and a hundred other religious symbols for protection, would ensure their safety... to an extent.

Unfortunately, what they found was one of the things that they could not defend against.

A glowing being stood in their camp, its long, gaunt face buried in Tech Two's bedding, sniffing around. Its ears were pointed in their direction, but it was brave enough to not quite care - yet. Suddenly, it jumped toward them, its mouth opened and its long tongue hanging out. As it did so, the spirit box in The Lead's hand sounded a loud, startled bark. Then the being sprung back and went - through the wall?

The group stood there for a moment, their chests heaving as they tried to understand.

"It... it just... didn't it?"

A low growl from the spirit box, and the crunch of leaves behind them... the dog was back, his head lowered and the skull-like marking with those haunting blank eye-spots staring at them - or staring through them.

"What is...?!" Tech One never finished his question before the animal jumped toward them, kicking up dirt as it landed. It was huge that close up - without strain, it lifted its head to snuff the spirit box, then gently took one of the corners in its mouth and tugged.

"N-no... this is mine...."

The animal's tail tucked down as it gave one more gentle tug before letting go. The box let out a soft whimper, then it moved back, running off toward the old power plant that had made this city evacuate.

"Sh-u-d I foll-foll-o?" Spirit's voice still formed English words with some difficulty, though he was getting better. He was in position to run, his chest low to the ground and his back legs set to spring.

"No. He'll be back. Let him go." S.I.C.'s rarely-heard voice was soft. Her dark brown eyes stared at the top of the plant, contemplating. "He likes us. And he doesn't like to be called 'it'... though he doesn't... belong to the other genders...." She trailed off, her brow furrowing. The medium of the group, she was usually relied upon for things like identifying characteristics and motive. But to see her confused worried her partners - she was always sure of herself, and didn't speak otherwise.

"Uklet." Everyone turned to the spirit box again, then their ghostly feline companion. Solace's voice was just out of their range of hearing, hovering just inside the typical range for a spirit.

"Strong name. Historical. So shall it be, unless he has a different one."
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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby winter. » Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:48 am

I have a few questions about # 77;
Could he (it) not have a job? As I don't really imagine him (it) as having a human partner/owner.
Also, can he vanish/turn invisible if he desires to not be seen?
Lastly, can he be a deceased Tracker's ghost?

Thanks in advance for answering!
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whose woods these are I think I know
his house is in the village though
he will not see me stopping here
to watch his woods fill up with snow

the woods are lovely, dark and deep
but I have promises to keep
and miles to go before I sleep
and miles to go before I sleep


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i'm a lonely teenager who spends all her time on the internet
but you can just call me winter
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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby DoctorDraca » Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:55 am

Wolves Run Free wrote:
Can 77 die, then? After all, it is like a ghost.

He can die, he's not immortal.

Bliss. wrote:
I have a few questions about # 77;
Could he (it) not have a job? As I don't really imagine him (it) as having a human partner/owner.
Also, can he vanish/turn invisible if he desires to not be seen?
Lastly, can he be a deceased Tracker's ghost?

Thanks in advance for answering!

A Tracker must be paired up with a human(oid) that'll control it, but it doesn't have to have a specific job.
For all your other questions, use your imagination. Little info was given, so it's up to you to fill in its specifics. :D
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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby Kaylawolf » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:07 am

Tracker Dog Application Series 21


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Username:
Kaylawolf

Tracker Dog you want:
I would love number 76. <3

Name you'll give it:
Jack.

Nick Names:
Lil’ Jackie
Jackie
Lil’ Jack


Reason for Name:
When I first saw this amazingly adorable Tracker Dog, Jack was the first name that popped into my head. I know Jack is a simple name, but it just seemed to fit this energetic, puppy like, Tracker Dog. I didn't really think twice about his name because this little cutie looks like a Jack-o-lantern.

Reason why you want it:
Well, when I first saw Jack and his little grin on his muzzle I was like 'Aww! <3 He is like the cutest little Tracker dog I have ever seen!' And he is the cutest Tracker dog I have seen. He seemed like the type of energetic puppy who is happy to see everyone all the time.

His smile seems like it can turn everyone's frown into a smile, no matter how sad they are. Jack's ears, just how they curl at the tips, seem like they are floppy like a puppy's ears are, thought they are kind of floppy, but they stay like that all year long. His leafy tail and little leaf sticking out on the top of his head just make him look more like a pumpkin, a cute hyper pumpkin.

Jack's personality is just perfect for his body. I can so see Jack fallowing behind a group of people threw a corn maze or pumpkin patch, scaring the crap out of them. But of course you can't stay mad at Jack for long, seeing his adorable hard-to-be-mad-at face. Or running up to little kids and jumping up on them, licking their face and the children laughing.



Will it be used in any kind of story?
Probably, whenever I feel inspired to write Halloween themed or anything really Tracker related. But, so far I haven’t been inspired to write anything Tracker related or not. Thought, I would love to draw and order art of this cute Jack-o-Lantern. <3

Describe its personality:
Tracker Dog #76 I Available Until the 30th
A playful and hyperactive little boy, he loves scaring people who spend to much time around the pumpkin patch.


Likes:
~Halloween
~Scaring People
~Fall Crisp Air
~Pumpkin Patches
~Corn Fields
~Haunted Houses
~Hay Rides
~Pumpkins
~Cold Nights
~Orange Moons
~Laughing Kids

Dislikes:
~Hot Nights
~Spring
~Hurt People


Hyper
Lil’ Jack is a hyper active pup. He is crazy when it comes to Halloween, even if you say pumpkin he will get so excited, and his tail will wag 100 miles per hour. Jack loves to the people who come every year

Loves Scaring:
When Venus puts up a haunted house, hay rides, and a corn maze up in the month of October, some of the people come for the haunted house, hay rides, and corn maze and some come to see their hyperactive little pumpkin Tracker friend, Jack. While you are in the maze, don’t be surprised that you will be scared by this sneaky Jack; and when you recover from that scare you can just see that he is amused with his smile on his muzzle and his leafy tail wagging vicariously, and happily. Also, you can find little Jackie in the Haunted house fallowing you, then disappearing and while you are looking for him, who knows what will pop out of that closet in front of you. >:)

Friendly:
Jack is probably one of the friendliest living thing that would ever meet, besides scaring people on the weekends. When you arrive here he will come up to you and wag his little tail a million miles an hour and smile up to you. He has a smile that can turn anyone’s frown upside down. One of his favorite people are children, Jack just loves the sound of their laugh when he licks their face when they come to the haunted house.




Write an introduction for your Tracker
"Jack!" Venus shouted out the door of her medium house, surrounded by the Wisconsin woods, now painted with the colors of fall. Tonight was the last night of the haunted house that she opens every year in October, the last night when Dominica and Jack can scare the living daylights out of people until next year. Dominica, Venus’s first Tracker dog, had been lying on the porch looking out at the corn field maze, and pumpkin patch.
A cool brisk fall wind blew through the trees, followed by a rustle of the leaves, and the corn moved in the back left corner of the field. It had started to get closer and closer to the house, you could see where the corn was moving a glow of orange had been getting brighter as it came closer. Soon, the little orange light became brighter, then Jack came bounding out of the corn field, and ran up to Venus with his excited smile and tail wagging vigorously. “There you are.” Venus smiled and patted his head before all three headed into the house.
Inside of her house there were about 15 people putting on makeup and costumes, getting ready for the last night of the haunted house. Some of the costumes were clowns, bloody lumberjack, witches, vampires, zombies, scare crows, headless horsemen, and butlers. Honestly, after the actors put on their costumes and makeup you can blearily tell who they really are under the frightful look they have on now.


WIP
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It was different when there was a Stark in
Winterfell.

But the old wolf's dead and the young one's gone south

to play the
Game of Thrones,

and all that's left us is the ghosts.

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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby dragngrl1122 » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:04 pm

I have a quick question about Tracker #77. Could it possibly have an ability to exorcise ghosts? I have an idea brewing, although I'm not sure if this would be ok.
If not, could he perhaps be able to sense demons?
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We pray for our sorrows to end,
And hope that our hearts will blend.
Now I will step forward to realize this wish.
And who knows?
Starting a new journey may not be so hard,
Or maybe it has already begun.
There are many worlds out there,
But they share the same sky,
One sky,
One destiny.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V3.0 [Available Trackers]

Postby CaptainHiccup » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:06 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 22

Username ⊱ ChiCha (FieryFilly & ChiCha) -I- Tracker Dog you want ⊱ Tracker Dog #77 I Available Until the 31st

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Tracker Information

This mysterious and sterile demon tends to wander around the facility and seemingly goes through walls. It has no classified gender nor does it like to spend time outside during the daytime.


Name you'll give it ⊱ Idolon

Meaning of Name ⊱ Means phantom in a language which I forget... Sorry, the page closed! x/

Theme songBy Myself - Linkin Park

Dos and Likes:
✔ Not that he likes it, but being alone is all Idolon has ever known...
✔ Breaking people down, hitting at all of their weakest and most vulnerable spots
✔ Outsmarting everyone and everything, especially the technology that humans ever so praise and rely on
✔ Simply walking away and leaving the past behind, because what's done is done
✔ Traveling to the second dimension to be at peace
✔ Figuring people and things out

Don’ts and Dislikes:
✘ Thievery
✘ Being looked down upon
✘ Being wronged
✘ Any and all happy thoughts
✘ Long Conversations or anything that includes talking excessively
✘ Mornings, Afternoons, anytime with light and sun


Describe it’s personality

Overall Personality
Idolon has always had a cold, ink black heart, it's because of it's past really. They never wanted it, 77 was a mistake, always was and always will be, or at least in it's mind. Idolon has a crude personality, things that make it laugh, would seem overly malicious and spiteful, but that is only who 77 is, because of what they did to it, it was how they made it. It tries to leave all people be, even if they directly want it, Idolon considers itself doing them a favor by trying it's best to ignore them and let them forget him. It's is unsure if it should follow it's instinct all the time, because it knows it's mind better than anyone else, or so it assumes. It can't stand to be outsmarted, even if it's thoughts are truly maddening. One thing that is a plus for Idolon though, is he doesn't stand for thievery of any kind.

-- Idolon POV --
(In some parts of it when it says "you" it may mean my character, this will make more sense once you read the story, other times it's doesn't always mean to her, so don't always assume that, if that makes any sense...)

The Blackness Inside of Me
My insides are hollow. There is nothing to be found. So why is it you keep looking? You say that there is that one last sliver of hope. Of good in me. I've been alone all this time, so why should I need you? I know- but you say think- I don't, so I'll leave you behind like everyone else, that brings my content- though you disagree. You've always been dragged around by your masters, living to serve, even if it is forced. I do as I want, if they try to control me, I'll bring them the true hell that they're looking for, no holding back. I know my lacking of compassion, but you say that I lie, (which is in fact true), and that I do care, but it's tucked tightly in-between the rest of myself. I am curt, cutting off any flicker of light inside of anyone.

My Intoxicating Nature
I am alone. I speak little to none, because I'd rather not speak to myself and heighten my already overly maddening thoughts. I hate the saying of how everyone has a place on this earth. Honestly, it just makes everything seem to have to have a happy ending. Which we all know is never true. More than ninety percent of the people alive are useless. Their lives being thrown away just by their very living presence. If you are not useful, I throw you away.

The Fire Burning Humor I Obtain
Humans. They're too soft. Too malleable. Too vulnerable. I love tinkering with their minds. Seeing what barrier I can break next. What I can pull out. What I can insert. What I can replace. Though it is also true, that humans fascinate me. I want to know how they work. What makes what function. Which nerves when activated cause what to move or become in pain, or become entirely dead? And I will go as far as it takes. For knowledge, is the key. You then say that this makes me as bad as them. But my darling dear, I'm so much worse..

What I Do For You Ungrateful Brats
I try and restrain myself, I honestly do. Excuse me, but I might just have another laugh, one which most would consider maniacal. It is quite funny how you cannot protect yourselves from me. How I have gone through all this trouble of holding myself back, not hurting you as I should, even though I could destroy you with just a clink like that of a glass wall completely broken and on the edge of shattering completely. I stay hidden from this world, dealing with my problems by myself. My madness, my constant doubt, the beast inside of me hungering for revenge. I do it all for the sake of believing that the day will come that someone will be able to finally unhook these chains that I have bound myself with, and release me from my inner, rotting, pain...

The Things I Expect
The truth, and nothing less, never half, always the full story, every hair of a detail included, though do not expect such things from me. I want the utter most respect. I do not tolerate any snide comments or what you would think sly coughs or gestures. Yes, I want you to fear me, but do not dare quiver in my presence, it is an outright appearance killer. Do not try and con me, because if you ever manage to, and I find out. I. Will. Find. You. Do not manipulate me either. Or try to at least. It won't work. It never has. And never will. I absolutely despise thievery of any kind, of any simple task such as stealing a tool, and especially taking a life. For that, I shall give and show you no mercy.

How to Understand Me
You say, I am very hypocritical, not taking well to being lied to, manipulation, and being wronged, because I do it to others all the time. I enjoy quiet. I like it very much. It surrounds me all the time. Always has. Always will. Intoxicating my very nature. My very life... I prefer observing that to doing. It is the way I learn. I am short spoken, and my point is always made. Speech is for the weak. It is the first sense I would get rid of. We rely on it too much. We rely on the "truth" it is meant to give. But seldom delivers. True conversation, and truth in itself is found within the interior and exterior of the body. Someone's movements, their breaths, their current state of mind. I don't trust, unless it is pure, which is never to happen. It is only natural. I doubt most of my feelings, because they cannot be proven, just as it is half said that species and occurrences of paranormal nature are non-existent. Instinct is also non-existent in my mind, if there even is such a thing as a mind, which is why I do not rely on the "natural instinct" that was left in the Tracker genes that all regular dogs seem to obtain, inherit, and withhold. If you value your sanity, and more so your life, you're better off without me...



Physical Properties

Age ⊱ Unknown, though we do in fact know that 77 isn't
immortal, so we suspect a fair age, in human years
somewhere in it's twenties or thirties, so anywhere
from two to four years for regular dogs [2-4 years]

Gender ⊱ Neither

Height ⊱ 3 ft and 3 inches - to the shoulder
(39 inches, 99.06 cm)

Weight ⊱ Hard to know, though in "solid form"
we have come to think around 115 pounds, seeing as it
still does have some "weightlessness".

Overall ⊱ Slightly smaller than a large Aerial Tracker, tall,
and lanky. Facial appearance seems to be that of a mask,
a demonic one, with medium holes where eyes would have
gone, and with small, stout, but deathly pointed horns
protruding from the top of the head an inch or two of
space in between each one and the ears of 77. It's entire
body is a base of a dark slate gray, just as it's tongue starts,
but it's skeleton seems to "glow" a dim cyan blue through his
fur, then same color and glow found on the bottom half of his
tongue. Strange as it is, 77 also sports a shaggy mane around
it's neck, starting at the base of it's head and ending at it's
crest and underneath on it's chest, slowly thinning out to
match the rest of it's fur.
Paranormal Properties

⊱ As the now much deceased Tracker Dog employees'
records have shown, and with our experiences, we
have proven that 77 can move easily through walls.

⊱ It is unknown whether the paranormal or specter part
of 77 is the cause of it's glowing skeletal form and
tongue, or if they are the only two "body parts" that
obtain that feature.

⊱ When some highly detective cameras were set up, and
with a few of our students and gifted employees
connected in, during a time of 77's appearance, it has
been identified that 77 can call upon, or what most would
call summon, other spirits and others of the second
dimension and freely converse with them.

⊱ After one of our machines had an overload, we have
considered the possibility that 77 can create other
portal-like phenomena that may allow not only it,
but other solid properties such as humans to venture
over to the second dimension...

⊱ 77 can see things in the past, in the fact that if he
is standing in a hallway, he can see the light/ghost-
like figures of the workers walking around, conversing,
and going about their daily work as they would have
before in their actual life.



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Client Information

Name ⊱ Laveda, though she doesn't go by it, she prefers Ave
Age ⊱ Eight, [8]
Gender ⊱ For a human she would be considered a Female, (of the double x chromosome [xx]), but seeing as she is not, we have labeled her as a pure Paranorm, of the double y chromosome [yy], which unlike her other peers and befores who were only partial Paranorms.
Breed ⊱ Even though her DNA was derived mainly from humans, we used the unknown factor or paranormity in her creation as well
Height ⊱ Three feet exactly, not a hair smaller or taller, [3' 00"]
Width ⊱ Just about twelve inches all the way around the waist, [12 inches]
Weight ⊱ More or less forty-two pounds, but that's nothing of importance. [42 lbs]
Paranormality ⊱ Trance medium, fully communicating with spirits, ghosts, and the paranormal.
Location ⊱ Currently a part of our Parapsychology Lab, it's exact location is classified.
Extended Information ⊱ Though she is only an eight year old, this Ile is the smartest of her class, possibly that ever of any generation we've dealt with. We currently believe her IQ is ranging in the upper eight-hundreds to early thousands, our computers cannot quite calculate the exact numbers, but we gave a decent estimate, so comparing her to us regular humans would make us nothing more than primal microscopic organisms. Her strongest abilities are with problem-solving, data, numbers, and we also believe her to have the ability to use every square micron of her brain, giving her not just a sixth sense, but even higher to a twentieth sense, or more, which is why we have assumed her remarkable intelligence to be linked to her communication with "the other side". Anything else concerning her is restrictively classified.


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Other Application Information

Reason why you want it ⊱ Well for one, just with the number of applications, (after searching around some I do believe it is the most submitted ever), very many people do of course want him. My actual reason though: I've always had a fascination with beasts or beastly-looking things and ghosts, (though I'm not allowed to believe in them due to my parents...), and BAM! He's the best of both! My second favorite color too is cyan blue, which is why I squealed with delight. Also, I guess it's kind of funny since Vilmos is a seven Tracker (67) and 77 is a seven Tracker as well. It's also odd though, that my life circulates around 6, 9, and 7's, mainly sevens. My birthday has a seven in it (and the rest of those numbers), all the digits in my phone number (except area code) have those numbers and 7's in it, things at school have 7's in it, such as four of my six classes, two of which are in building 97, etc... Creepy isn't it? But anyways. There is only one other Tracker that I love just as much as my Vilmos, but now I can definitely say I now have a second I love as much as him, because 77 is amazing! I feel kind of bad and greedy for trying to go after yet another alternate lined Tracker, but I honestly want to give it a try! (I can't say I can't help it, because essentially everyone can help it, just don't post, just don't steal, etc. :P) If I win him, I'll spoil and baby him, like I would to my own dog, getting him art and everything. It's also quite possibly that I may not apply for another Tracker after him, because honestly I would feel quite content with both him and Vilmos, they would be my big boys but also my cuddle buddies too! xD jkjk, they both would probably try and bite my head off in real life if that were to happen. Ahh, what a sigh-moment, too bad Trackers aren't real, :P

Will it be used in any kind of story? ⊱ Well I definitely will continue this story of him, though I will probably have to think of other special stories for him, maybe include him in Vilmos' gamer story, (but in there the year that his introduction is in wouldn't apply). I would also take care to get him in some RP's and anything else that I can think of, ^^

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Write an introduction for your Tracker

-- Year 7777 --

Day/ 7
Month/ 7
Time/ 0100
Place/ Cell Room


I wriggled in their grasp. The Icious, as we called them, only because they call us Ile. They had just destroyed another one of us, we called him S.D., his full anointed name by the scientists being Suicide Detector, because he for some reason could only connect with those on the other side who had committed suicide. Why did they kill him? Because he was brave enough to fight back, to try and overpower them, to try and put it into their titanium heads that we were not tools, machines, or pets to be tinker with, but that we were humans, with a mind further excelled than all of the thousands of workers put together. And he almost did it. He almost won. S.D. had indeed managed to harness the core feeling of the deepened sadness that brought on the final key note of suicide, not the feeling that brought the thoughts, but the feeling that brought the final confirmation and longing of death. He had killed so many of them with his new-found power, he was the most headstrong of all of us, always had been, and one of the most intelligent. He was only a year and a few months older than me, and yet had been here at the facility since he was two, almost his entire life.

I came in at five and a half, by then he was in his early seventh year. I was so quiet, scared, and unknown to this place, these other children in rooms and cages around me, these people... But he was the first to come to me, to talk to me like we weren't locked up like wild beats, and just two people having a conversation. I always wondered the extent of his intelligence, but he was never tested, for every time the Icious tried to, he would either sit there or stand there and do absolutely nothing, completely motionless and inactive. All that mattered though, was that we all knew quite well that he was one of the top class...

They finally threw me into my cell, oh yes, did I mention I was "upgraded" to a cell, instead of a cage. But it was only a small six by six cell, not much difference to my cage, and it was pitch black, no light what-so-ever. My skin has always been a slickly pale with a greenish tint to it, not the beautiful glowing pearls, peaches, or creams some of the other female Icious had. I knew this was their plan, it was all just a test, or plan, or game to them. They secluded me from everyone. So much that I would be forced to go into the other side more. They wanted me to become a living specter.

Instead I sat, and picked through my mind to that one single memory. My first day here. They dragged me in, and threw me in a cage, causing it to flip and tumble to the other side of the room, with me in it. I went into an immediate fetal position as soon as it had stopped, scratches and bruises littering my body as I shivered in the 50 degree Fahrenheit room, with only jeans and a thin T-shirt on. Then, I heard the quiet sound of something moving along the floor, but it was so silent, and it wasn't until I looked that I saw it was another guy in a cage. He made his way over to me, his eyes locking onto mine and mine to his. He took off his jacket and handed it to me through the bars.

At first I didn't grab it, only because I didn't want him to be cold, but he simply said, "Take it. You're not used to this, I am." But it wasn't in a mean or demanding tone, but closer to a reassuring tone. I took it, but still didn't speak. After we began going through tests in groups and in partners with the other children, we became the best of friends.

He began a rebellion less than three months ago, and yesterday it all went down, but they were defeated, through a deflection device the Icious have. One we never knew about... I had helped him. Gone every step of the way with him. Once we were overtaken, they took us both. Our hands were bound behind our backs, and we were both kneeling on the ground facing each other, five feet away. I watched him, and he mirrored my stare. I then heard a shuffle behind me, though no one moved behind him. I closed my eyes and smiled, crying. I was first, and it was better this way. I heard his telepathic voice screaming throughout my mind to struggle, that it was him who should be punished. I looked up at him, tears covering my eyes, and I shook my head. A smile pulled itself up to my cheeks as I last said, "It's for the better..." I felt the injection, and just as it began to seep into me, I saw one of the Icious behind S.D. pull his retainer out of his neck. The retainer for us was the only things that kept us alive, or that at least kept us attached with this world. Everything became slow around me. S.D.'s body dropped to the ground like a feather would, slowly and in a swooping motion. Everything came back, and with my last breath I let out a blood curdling scream, and then everything went black for me...

But I'm not dead. They lied. Again. As always. They took his life for nothing. I slammed my fist against the wall, slowly breaking down until I was kicking and screaming. They came in after an hour of this, and injected me. I was out cold again...



Day/ 7
Month/ 7
Time/ 0300
Place/ Unknown, Inside A Moving Helicopter



As the medication wore off I could feel the vibrations of the blades of a helicopter pulse through my body. Where were we going?



Day/ 7
Month/ 7
Time/ 0600
Place/ Tracker Dog Facility, Abandoned



We had stopped, and I was fully awake. I sat straight in my cage looking around in the black space, unable to see or sense anything. And Icious opened the cargo door and pulled my cage forward, opening the gate wide open. I looked them dead in the eye then said telepathically, Die. They backed up at my malice, but slowly came forward, slamming the gate shut and bolted it shut, carrying me out, but holding me as far away from them as possible.


Moments later we approached a building. Old. Unused. Overgrown with vegetation. Abandoned. And walked straight in, passing through a few corridors and entering a huge office. Notes were scattered everywhere, and at the desk with his feet propped up and looking through and ancient device, probably once considered a desktop, was the head of the Parapsychology Lab. Mr. Delore. My teeth clenched, but on the inside, I was frightened. I was distracted so much by his presence that I didn't notice some Icious taking a reading from me. It flashed manly positive symbols and they nodded to Delore, which is when I realized they had just been taking my levels, happiness, sadness, fear, my entire current state.

He looked at me and started speaking, "Now little Ile, we understand you are upset for your loss, and we are ever so compassionate enough to allow you to find a replace-" I spat on him, no one could replace S.D., which resulted in a hyper shock to my temples, Delore continued with him previous word, "-ment." He looked cross but wiped off his face and continued, "You see Ile, we have made a discovery that could help not only us, but you as well. This facility used to be home to mutated dogs, called Tracker Dogs, they were all interesting creatures, some quite amazing, but nothing of novelty consideration, or at least that was how it was for us. We have however, made a discovery of a Tracker that was made on this exact day, at 0700 time, thousands of years ago, that was accidentally frozen-transported to this time, but it will only be on this year of this day at 0700 time, that his entirety will be present." He paused and then after minutes of taking breaths said, "We place the task of finding this Tracker, body and soul, on you."

HA! This oaf of a dog is SO going to help me! Not! They just want him for another one of their experiments that's it!

And you are quite right little one.

I froze. Where did that second dimension connection come from? I saw something flicker, and after pushing my black-grey-cyan colored hair, (grey due to the chemicals they have polluted me with, and cyan because of my paranormality), I saw a canine-like figure in the reflection of the glass bookcase. I stared at it. Stock still. Everyone in the room noticed this and looked to see the being in the glass of the bookcase. Special cameras were pulled out, pens and papers were being readied for notes, but before any picture of letter could be made it's voice flooded the room,

Leave now imbeciles, I want nothing of you, and you may have nothing of me.

It let out a roar, and then it's image disappeared.

Everyone's mouth were left agape, but Delore's soon curled into a smile. "Well done little Ile. You have already found it's soul. Now run along to discover the body. Oh, and don't worry about running off. We have all the exits covered so that if you get lost in this maze of a lab one of the lovely workers can point you back in the right direction." After finishing his last oozingly sarcastic sentence he gave me a sarcastic smile to top it off, and then I was pushed out.

Great. I'm supposed to find a thing, who I have no information of, have only seen it's head, briefly, hazily, once!, and in a place completely foreign to me. I felt a shock and a speaker in my head which said, "Hurry up now Ile! Do not waste your time! At 0700 we need that body!" Geez! What was with this whole 0700 thing anyways?



Day/ 7
Month/ 7
Time/ 0647
Place/ Tracker Dog Facility, Abandoned


I had been sprinting around the facility for at least half an hour already and I was running out of time. I received a shock every ten minutes, plus whenever I slowed down. I ran up some stairs and when I reached a door an Icious came out of the corner and pushed me back, grunting and spiting out that this was a waste of time. I went back, the sound of my footsteps pounding through the halls. I tried to stay half connected, to at least see if I could sense this Tracker at all, but alas I never found a thing. This was complete madness, and I myself was full aware of this. But what other choice did I have? If I refused they would torture me, up until the last hair of death. Then, they would bring me back to health only to torture me once more. I would never die by their hands. Never. I was their slave. All of us were. Always doing as they say and it having to be done moments before they would even say it. They pushed us further past our limits than any of us could go, and they never stopped. But someone can only take so much... I finally collapsed into complete darkness...


Day/ Currently Unknown
Month/ Currently Unknown
Time/ Currently Unknown
Place/ Currently Unknown


I awoke, but it wasn't a physical awake. I was in the second dimension. Was this a dream?

No.

I swiveled my head in the direction of the voice, even though it was telepathic, it still had some reality in it. My cyan eyes landed on a figure, only being able to half see it as the rest of it's body below it's shoulders was concealed by the mist of the second dimension. I shivered, even with a sweater on, in the cold, suction of the place, I never got used to it. I rubbed my shoulders and looked down to only see barely the top half of my body.

Image

I looked back up and thought mildly, Hello stranger.

For a moment it seemed to think and finally counter-acted my spoken words with,

Well it is only true that we are. For the most part. Tell me, now, did you come all this way and think you could just convince or even trick me to come with you?

It laughed cruelly. So that's how it wanted to play it. Because honestly, I could now just be myself,

Indeed we are strangers, but the rest of your useless thoughts might as well be shooed away. If anything, I know you brought me here, in my state. For what reason? I don't care. Though I know I'll hate you even more once they pull me out.

I saw a slick inhale from it's nostrils, almost as if it were choking on the very air polluting this scene.

They?

The Icious.

It gave me a blank stare. And I returned it equally. Then, something changed. It finally realized I was with it's level and have easily over-thrown it's words. I knew it spoke only to conquer, but it's odd looks that it held to me were ones of inspection, just like the Icious' machines. It wasn't one to speak, neither of us were, and we were both plainly curt. Although neither of us cared to show it, I know we both were exploding inside, with anger, rage, confusion, and outright laughter, not at each other, but our own selves.

I see we both have much in common, but more to learn.

Indeed.

I rolled my eyes,

Anyways, we both understand each other now, and we both assume our positions, so I only want to warn you, wherever your body is, pray that it is hidden well enough from the bastards that are running this operation.

I also wanted to add "and me" to the end, but I take it that this Tracker got the message.



{{ As it sadly turns out, the rest of this story which was about 4 pages long got deleted off of my computer and I have no more time left to re-write it in all of it's awesomeness -.-' so as a summary in short, they keep talking and eventually he says he doesn't care about them, and she deserves better, and gets angry with the Icious, so he joins her, saying his body is as it is, he can change from solid and ghost form. They come out and he kills all the Icious (sorry for the violence, xP), and then they begin their long journey of tracking down the Parapsychology Facility to free all the rest of the kids. So yeah, if I win him, this story will continue further ^^ }}

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Dictionary/Reference Section

● Parapsychology is the study of psychic phenomena.
● icious : [Pronunciation: ῑ - kē - ōs] The nickname of the lab workers and scientists. It a suffix meaning "full of" because they are full of lust and want to be the ones to discover and control the second dimension and the other side, but they will soon come to see they are one in the same...
● ile : [Pronunciation: ῑ - l] The nickname of the students there at the facility/lab. It is a suffix meaning "pertaining to, capable of" because they can connect with the deceased, spirits, and other paranormal beings.
● micron : a thousandth of a millimeter


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{{ Also wanted to mention, Idolon isn't the nicest Tracker you'll meet, and this is all how he is, nothing of me, I am only 3% like him, 5% at max, other than that we're complete opposites! So please don't become mad at me or depressed if you read what he is like... }}


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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby winter. » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:22 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 22

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This mysterious and sterile demon tends to wander around the facility and seemingly goes through walls. It has no classified gender, nor does it like to spend time outside during the daytime.


Username:
Bliss.

Tracker Dog:
Number Seventy - Seven

Name:
Grim; also known as 'The Demon'

Gender:
None; though it is often referred to as a 'he', as it is perceived to be masculine

Age:
Unknown; fairly young

Reason why you want it:
First of all, Halloween, or All Hallow's Eve, is my absolute favorite holiday. I adore everything about it, especially the demons & spirits. So when I caught sight of Grim, I was blown away. He (it) is everything I am looking for in a Halloween character, though I would use him for much more than that. It's design and lineart are extraordinary, so much thanks to the astounding Nex for creating him. The whole skeletal concept of his design is gorgeous, and the anatomy is very detailed. I also love the illuminated, ghastly blue color of the 'bones'. Furthermore, the shape of his (its) head and nostrils are awesome, in that it looks like an animal skull. Combined with the claws and horns, it really makes him demonic.

More than his appearance though, I connected with him. I really felt its pain and loneliness. At that instant, a story and personality began brewing in my mind. Grim inspired me, and I hope he will be able to inspire me in the future.


Will it be used in any kind of story?:
Absolutely! Maybe some poems also. I am hoping to - if I win Grim - finish his story, and add a couple more "chapters" to it as well. Like I said before, he really inspires me.

Abilities:
Grim has a few supernatural abilities in common with ghosts and spirits, though he is not one himself: such as, the ability to become invisible at will. Also, he can pass through solid objects, like walls, as if they are not there. Grim also possesses the power to read peoples' emotions, and though he cannot see them, he can tell they are there, which will be explained further in the history. However, despite common local belief, he can not communicate with or summon ghosts, spirits, or demons and is not in any way responsible for death, sickness, disappearances, or other tragic events.

A negative effect that Grim has on humans - it has never been tested on animals - is that he causes an unknown sickness to plague them, which can be lethal if the human is exposed too long (usually 6+ days, depending on their age and initial health). This will be elaborated on further in the "Introduction".


Personality:
Grim is generally very altruistic and despises others - mainly humans - for a number of reasons. However, he does have a kindred spirit; it is just that no one has ever really shown him any kindness, so he doesn't feel obliged to show kindness to others. He keeps to himself usually, though he really has no choice in the matter, as he is unable to speak with humans and lacks the desire to communicate with animals, as they - for the most part - lack his intelligence. Grim is a rather simple fellow and often dwells in his past when he is alone with his thoughts, which is often. He can seem depressed and pessimistic, but it is not that he tries to be; in fact, he tries to think of his happiest moments. It is just that he doesn't have many to remember. As you are most likely well aware, his looks are rather frightening and certainly demonic, which is the reason for the name the villager gave him: 'The Demon'. He often uses this to his advantage, by acting hostile and malicious when he wants to be left alone or intimidate his enemies. Grim is a lonely soul: never having any family or friends, nor simply being acknowledged as an actual being, not just something to be feared. He longs for companionship and dreams that one day he will find a master, who is truthful, intelligent and caring, yet assertive. He hopes that someone will be able to bring him out of his shell to be able to trust others again.

Likes:
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Dislikes:
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Introduction:
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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby cazio » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:55 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 20

DISCLAIMER: Certain sayings/words in this form may not be politically correct. They are not meant to be offensive, but I am trying to be historically accurate. I have avoided stronger, more offensive words/ideals that were used in this time.

Username: Cazio
Tracker Dog you want:
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Name you'll give it: Siteen Kèitl (Seeing Dog)

Reason why you want it:
Well, I'm obsessed with event adoptables, particularly halloween ones. Skeletal/ghost dogs are always awesome-looking, no matter how much this kind of design is used. 75 was tempting, but this guy just seems so much...spookier. I already have a scene of him (it? I'll just refer to it as a him, though he obviously has no gender) in my head, his mythical-like appearance makes him that much better. He isn't like any other Tracker, and of course, that's incredibly rare and desirable.

Though the design is fantastic, I have ulterior motives with this Tracker. I have Lamina for last year's Nanowrimo story, and I'd love to use Keitl for this year's, so he can actually be in my story. Lamina is going to be used for my next installment of my previous story, but I've wanted to have an adoptable that I actually write in. I'm not going to lie, he won't have an exceptionally big part, but he'll definitely add a bit of wonder to my rather grim, vengeful plot.

The Office of Dr. Harold McClusky
Stronebrook, Texas

Journal Entry #43
1904

Height: He's a massive 36 inches at the shoulder.
Weight: Unknown
Gender: None
Breed: Unknown
Age: It seems this animal just appeared. Its impossible to tell how old it is or how old it may live. When blood samples were suggested, the canine was pricked, but no blood came into the syringe. Perhaps is blood is too thick? We suspect that it can be killed however, it skirts away from sharp objects such as hammers, scythes and guns.
Habitat: Seen wandering through fields and going into the forests and mountains, no den had been reported.

Beware, this creature attracts children, it is unwise to let them approach. It has also been seen around Indians, so it may carry unknown diseases and poisons in its fur. It also appears to be a satanic canine of demonic origins. To be avoided at all costs.


Will it be used in any kind of story?
Yes, yes he will.

This story takes place between 1909 and 1915 in the rugged wasteland that is the American West. More specifically, Texas, the heart of the Wild West movies and folklore. in 1909, a young man named Devon Ackler travelled to the city of Stonebrook, the New York City of all the surrounding counties. He was there to bring in his yearly roundup of cattle to sell, and as he returned home, his house was surrounded by soldiers and men in tailored suits. Worried for his mother, he began asking questions, only to find that the government was taking away their ranch to use as a US Army outpost. Enraged, Devon tries to fight back, but the men turn their guns on him and threaten not to give them any money for their property. Devon's best friend Jessup Boone fires a shot, killing one of the soldiers. he shoots again as the soldiers scatter, and gets a government agent. Devon gives chase as a group of men ride off with his mother, and Jessup follows. Jessup shoots again, and this time he accidentally hits Devon's mother. Jessup flees, and Devon is left to assume that this is what Jessup wanted all along.

Fast forward 6 years and Devon is endlessly searching for Jessup, who has become the most notorious outlaw in the state. Every time he gets close, something goes wrong and Jessup manages to escape. Devon has become obsessed with this chase, turning him to alcoholism, sleepless nights, fights, excellent sharpshooting skills, and the title of the best US Marshal in the county. He got married, and his wife left him because he was almost never home because he constantly fell asleep at the police headquarters. Finally, he decides to go on an all out hunt, but ends up lost and wandering through unknown prairies with nothing but his horse and his rudimentary camping supplies.

Historiality (a fusion of history and personality all in one!)

Most of us do not look as handsome to others as we do to ourselves.
- Assiniboine Proverb


Despite his ghoulish looks and demonic cranium, Keitl is actually very mellow. He's grown up wandering in untamed country with no human interaction whatsoever. Thus, when he was the strange animals that trotted erratically on their hind legs and only had fur on the tops of their heads, he became curious. He has a puppyish was of looking at things, the way a shy child hides behind their mother's legs when a strange person approaches. He has never been aggressive, there was never any need; everything that came across him shriveled and ran away in terror. He's grown to see this as a sort of positive greeting, and he often trots along after the fleeing creatures, sending them into fits of hysteria, which Keitl perceives as laughter.

Do not judge your neighbor until you walk two moons in his moccasins.
- Cheyenne Proverb


When he first encountered humans, they were frightened of him, as usual. But soon, these humans began to offer him tokens of friendship. First it was brightly colored beads and feathers, then it became bison skulls filled with a sweet pulpy juice. He didn't really know what to make of it, so he would sit on his haunches and cock his head. He could not see the humans of course, but he knew what they looked like in his mind. You see, Keitl sees through his entire body. Whenever he walked through an object, his mind creates a sort of 3D model in his head, a picture that lacks color. The humans seemed to be very in tune with such supernatural happenings, or perhaps it was their relationship with nature that allowed them to understand how Keitl sees the world.

"A long time ago this land belonged to our fathers, but when I go up to the river I see camps of soldiers on its banks. These soldiers cut down my timber, they kill my buffalo and when I see that, my heart feels like bursting." - Satanta, Kiowa Chief

Soon though, different humans began to appear. They did not understand Keitl and his ways, nor did they understand the ways of the humans that Keitl had come to know. They feared Keitl, but soon they did not flee from him. A strange feeling came over him, and Keitl left the area, vowing never to associate with these humans who wore cloth that covered most of their skin, and worse thick polished boots and held golden wristwatches that clicked endlessly, crowding his ears whenever they came near. He came to th edeep country where the sky was clear of human voices and the ground was not treaded on by human paws.

"When a man moves away from nature his
heart becomes hard."
- Lakota Proverb

However, Keitl was too curious to leave for long. He came back to the plains, only to find that his people were gone. Only crumpled eagle feathers and torn animal skins were left, and a few terrorized humans. They cursed him and tossed their sharp rocks and animal bones at his ghostly figure. Keitl may be able to pass through objects, but only when he wants to, when objects are thrown, he does get hit. He wasn't sure what to make of the pain, so he left, and came across the land of the cloth covered humans. They were dragging in a dead bison, an animal Keitl had come to cherish. He could smell the damp clumps of fur on its neck, similar to his own bushy neck fur. But the overwhelming stench of blood mad him feel slightly sick, and his he kept his head bent as he padded up to the body. The cloth covered humans kicked the animal, but they stopped as Keitl approached, and ran off. Keitl felt the blood swirl around his paws like red velvet, and lay his head on the massive beast. His blissfully ignorant heart had been broken, and a hatred of humans was founded.

"The greatest strength is gentleness."
- Iroquois Proverb


Years passed, and Keitl adopted a new hobby, protecting the bison from being hunted by the cloth covered men. It was difficult to do so during the day, as direct sunlight makes his head throb, but he did his best. During the day he stayed in bison hide huts of the scarce packs of the nature loving people. They disposed the cloth covered people as well, and cherished Keitl's help in saving the bison, an animal they held sacred. It was the children he was most fond of however, they were always innocent and had a purer spirit than any of the older humans. They snuggled up with Keitl and took naps with him during the day, bringing him strips of dried meat and berries to snack on. These people considered Keilt a Guardian Buffalo Spirit, and gave him his own hut, with vibrant paintings of his missions to defend their sacred animals. When Keitl left, they didn't come after him, and he was free. He loved all children, even those of the cloth covered children. they ran amuck in the cobblestone streets of the city, and at first they screamed at the sight of him, but they soon saw him as a giant friend, riding on his back through the pastures that surrounded the town. When their parents saw this, they cursed and sent their hunting dogs after him, dogs who were easily befriended by the gentle giant. Sometimes the males would chase him away on horseback , but Keitl would gallop away, slipping through houses and fences that the horses could not traverse. He remains the plains last hope for the betterment of the next generation, and the last thread of defense against the bison massacres from the white man.

His Purpose

Being that Keitl is no ordinary Tracker, he does not have an ordinary job. He has no one human that he listens to, but his job is to protect both the Native Americans and the bison, as well as to teach the "white men" that these killings are pointless. He listens intently to happening of both of these world, separated by an invisible boundary in the countryside. His "masters" of sorts, are the children. He trusts all of them, from the bully to the shy kids no one talks to. they are honest, and unburdened by politics and corruption that their older siblings and parents are tainted by. He is loyal to each and every child, Indian or not. He spends the majority of his time with the Indian tribes, but will venomously defend a lost child who happens upon the tribe, even if they are spitting words that their fathers taught them. Children act as his master, as well as the land.

He doesn't need much sleep, thought he usually gets about two hours during the times of the most intense sunlight. His entire night is devoted to watching the bison herd that wanders the plains, and he watched from the darkness of trees when he can spot them during the day. He will chase down hunting parties with ill intentions, running through their horses to make them spook and bolt away. He has a keen ability to sense the spirits of others, and he can see when a hunting party is out for food, or out for blood. Some white men call him the Satan's Dog, because of his horns and snake-like tongue, but he's also known as the Buffalo Wolf because the has an uncanny resemblance of what a bison might look like if it was turned into a wolf (well, a skeletal one).

Write an introduction for your Tracker:

The moon gave a murky glow across the fields, turning the swaths of golden grasses in to pools of silvery strands. Cold wind blew in from the mountains, still visible on the horizion, with only their peaks covered by the billowing clouds. The chill of winter was threading its way into the landscape, almost secretly, as if to avoid detection. A lone figure gradually moved into view, a long dark figure with a long jacket billowing behind him. His body jerked oddly, and it soon became apparent that he was limping. It was a man, with sharp facial features heightened with the shadows of the night. He had a dark grey cowboy hat, and a duster, a cowboy's version of a trenchcoat, that were both spattered with dried blood. He breathed in quick rasps, clutching at his right thigh as he made his way through the uneven ground of the prairie. He came to a lone tree that stood arching above the rest of the landscape, and dropped slowly to his knees, carefully maneuvering his right leg to avoid putting too much pressure on it.

It had been a quick fight, that was certain. Seth Rickets, a cattle rustler with some ties to Jessup. It wasn't supposed to be a big deal, he hadn't even brought his own horse along. Thank god he hadn't, or he'd be without one now. He'd borrowed a pathetic little riding pony from the general store, and it didn't take long to find Seth rounding up a sizeable herd of cattle, which undoubtly were not his. Seth had given him an evil eye, and leveled his pistol at him. He'd returned the courtesy, but hadn't expected the small time crook to actually shoot him. Well, he did. Now he was stuck in the middle of nowhere with a bullet in his leg and a dead pony who knows where. He saw lights up ahead, and the fact that they weren't lantern lights meant that it was probably Stonebrook, the only town with complete electricity. He still didn't quite understand how man had harnessed lightning and found a way to make a constant stream of it to make little glass balls light up. He was fine with a good lantern or a campfire to keep him warm and give him light. But Stonebrook proved to be too far for him to walk on his injured leg, so he clutched his gun close to his chest, and leaned his back against the tree. the plain was quiet, and the sound of whispering grasses soothed the contours of his mind, calming him to a hypnotic slumber.

A few hours later, he awoke to a loud snort. Right in front of him was a mucus-covered snout of the biggest animal he'd ever seen. Its had a giant broad head with short curved horns that did't fit the rest of its body. He'd heard of buffalo roaming the plains, but most of them had been driven off but one elusive herd. His heart jumped to his throat, and he cocked his rifle, bringing it directly under the beast's jaw. It seemed amused, and licked the air a few times, sending thick spit trails onto his jeans. Devon Ackler, a US Marshal, was frozen in fear next to an animal that was too stupid to realize that it was slobbering all over itself. He shifted his fingers to the trigger as the buffalo sent hot steamy breaths into his face, and the smelled worse than stagnant pig slop. He prepared to pull the trigger and drop the doofus animal, when a chill ran down his spine.

Suddenly a wolf was nudging the buffalo away, but it was no ordinary wolf. First off, it was a bout twice the size of any wolf he'd ever laid eyes on. Second, it had two jutting horns, cornered by two hare-like ears. He'd heard myths of jackrabbits, but jackwolves? the most frightening feature was that it had bones that glowed right through its body. Or was that part of its pelt? He couldn't tell. All he knew was that it looked like a bat outta hell and it wasn't his friend. he shifted his gun at the demon animal, and it flattened its ears slightly, and sent out a long, slithering blue tongue. he gasped in disgust as the creature neared him, and jutted the gun out further.
"I'll shoot you! Git away from me, you devil spawn! Go back to hell!" He demanded. The wolf cocked its head, but didn't do anything else. he stared blankly into its eye sockets, two dark blue spots on its skullish face.

After a few moments of silence, the wolf lashed its whip-like tail and trotted off like a coonhound on a riding trail, leaving him watching its glowing blue figure as it made its way back to the buffalo herd. It stopped only once, and turned its sightless gaze back to him, ears alert. It waited a few moments, then continued on. Devon brought his gun to his chest, eyes wide and gulping down the air he'd forgotten to breathe in. It was the strangest sight he ever witnessed in that wasteland, but it was one he never forgot. That tiny glimpse of paranormal activity made him certain he'd never take a gun to a buffalo ever again. Just in case.
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    The things I've held sacred that I've dropped
    I won't lie no more you can bet
    I don't want to learn what I'll need to forget

    I like throwing my voice and breaking guitars
    Cause it doesn't remind me of anything
    I like playing in the sand what's mine is ours
    If it doesn't remind me of anything
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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby Temperance. » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:57 pm

[Decided that I wanted to focus solely on either the spider tracker or the ghost one, and after a long deliberation I've decided to go for the spider tracker instead, so please just ignore this post ^-^]
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> Call me Temperance, Tempy, Kat, or whatever you feel like.
> I love animals and decided to pursue a dog training career c:
> I have broad tv interests; everything from anime to sci-fi
> Banished is my new fave series (gifs to left are from the show)
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Re: Happy Halloween~ [Tracker Dog Facility]

Postby JetFNPWind » Mon Oct 24, 2011 1:02 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 20
Username: Amber+Magic Animals
Tracker Dog you want: Image
Name you'll give it: Rei (Meaning "Soul" in Japanese)
Reason why you want it: I have never had a tracker dog and I've always wanted one but have never had a chance to get one. I love the awesome way they look and remind me of a Hellhound (One of my fave mythical creatures). Their are amazing details I could have never done myself. All together I love it....that all I can say...I love it....

Will it be used in any kind of story?: Probably, I am always writing stories about wolves, cats, birds, hellhounds, cerberuses, and mythical creatures. Most likely I will, but I now have school and my time is limited
Describe its personality: This tracker has AMAZING stealth because of it's ghost like figure. It glows on nights when there are full moons and loves to scare children on Halloween by howling a host-like howl. Most run away if they see it and some even go to the extreme of changing their names and moving half way across the world. If you see it on Halloween you better watch out!It's a nasty and mean mutt with a temper to match, and if you DO come across it on Halloween.....let's just say, you'd better GIVE HIM YOUR CANDY!!!! ((LOL))

Write an introduction for your Tracker: I was once alive, I had a family, friends, and owner, everything a tracker like me could want. Until my pups, owner, and mate died all in the same year. Some say it was just a coincidence, but I know the real truth....The shocking but believable truth....A trick-or-treater on Halloween poisoned the left over candy that my owner had, all of my family and friends ate it but not me. I decided to hate Halloween and especially Trick-Or-Treaters, that's why I turned to the bad side. One night as usual I was killing the fun of Halloween when the dog catches came by and caught me, well i thought they were dog catchers....but no. They were lab onwers you know labs, where they test animals. Well one night they injected in me the same poison that was in the candy, I died but somehow came back to life and I continue to destroy the Halloween holiday because of that reason, I'm not really a bad tracker...I'm actually very sweet
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