~Goennec~ Round: Closed

[Kit-Kat]

well nerr i was going to re-try for the affected pen 2 XD oh well

[Desmond]

Affected apps are still open. They will be judged next week. :)

[Kit-Kat]

looks back at form- oh yeah XD well that was a fail moment

[MirrorMask]

Ok,becareful people my form is pretty big.But good lucke veryone and no mean to scared anyone.

[LunarFaith]

Hey 3B! You can read my form now because its over Im going to read yours now <3

[Skylarr.]

i dont think i'll be here to find out who wins tonight.. ):

[Lirrie]

Aw good luck guys I hope i get her but i just dont know... my confidense is dwindling.

[versicolor]

Darn, didn't get a chance to add my last paragraph. Oh well, hopefully it won't make too much of a difference X3

[Kit-Kat]

you know what ima try for special care pen 2 >:3 just out of my boredome

special care pen #2

Kim (name can be changed)
(Flexible)
1'7"
Naturally colored
Mythical qualities

Symptoms:
enlarged oral features
blindness
deafness
inability to run
smaller, but still proportional

Goennec Pen #: special care pen #2
Name: Mar and Severus(what he calls his snake)
How would you use him/her: In my story he wont be added yet but he will be in it. I'll start with him when he was born cause he wont be in the story untill well i find agood spot for him lol.
Define your Goennec:

Being born "Defective" as they called me I wasnt taken very good care of just enough to live. Normaly we would not live in the wild but I was born in a large herd, and well after a while you would think with so many good births there will be an affected born.
And I was the affected, there was nothing that much wrong with me only a few things thats all it doesnt really give them the right to treat me like this or does it? Seeing i was born deaf and blind but not the blind you think i can still tell light from dark but thats all my twin borther is my eyes and my ears.He allso helps me get some meat in me when I need it.
Well thast enough talk from me this is my story--
Outside a small den a hansome and muscular as he was called goennec paced. Every now and thin he poked his nose in just to be greated by a grwol and a saw of a paw from his mate that was about to give birth. An hour later her herd weak whimpers and he found it a good idea to go in.
His mate was licking a smaller then normal kit clean as it nersed he scowled at its size but looked at it closer. He then let out a growl and didnt even look at his mate only his kit
"Despose of that "THING"!" he growled only glareing at the kit.
His mate snarled and covered him with her tail " Thing! Thing thast so called thing is my child and I will not let you harm a single hair from him or his twin! No matter how strange he looks now unles you want me to leave you get out of my den." she snaped at him in-raged.
He gowled and backed up out of the den and went off to hunt only for his mate not really wanting to help the kit but does not want his love to die. As he left she setteled down and nuzzled her kit " Ill call you Mar" she then giggled as his snake like tail flickedits tongue and tickled her nose " And you Severus you may not be the same but your alive and you allso my son" With her word she nuzzled them closer to keep them warm.
3 months later--
"Allright today I will go farther then ever from the den. Ready Severus!"
Severus hissed and looked arund his forced tongue flickered and he begain speaking into Mars mind like normal Of course I am dont worry I'm your eyes and ears lets go!
Mar smiled loveing his abbility to talk with his brother in his mind Like allways I dont think i could live without youHe took a few steps turning his head every few steps to get agood since of things as Severus coiled his neck up to see.
Severus grown longer then his brothers tail able to reach his head he liked to lay his head between his brothers incomming horns for a good sun bath.
Hey look out there is log in your way go left. Severus moved his head and nipped on the left side of Mars flank.
Mar nodded and went to where he was nipped he then stoped feeling the trimors of something running to him Severus whats that?
Severos hissed and turned his head ready to inject poison into what ever was comming but then stoped Its just mom dont worry. Mar let out a small grunt when his mother came over and picked him up and headed back to the den "Awwww mum I was exploring!"
She sat him back down from the den " No you dont you cant go that far untill i say your ready I dont want anything to happen to you."
Severus hissed and told Mar what she said he then pouted.
"I woudl not get hurt you never trust me ! Severus would not let anything touch me."
sigh"I know I know but still.."
Severus butted in as she was talking "I can take care of the both of us." he hissed opening his mouth showing huge dagger like fangs.
She looked at the fangs and shivered then shook her head knowing it was only her son "Ok i guess your right... but just wait a bit ok?"
Severus nodded and coiled up and layed his head down along with Mar and they slept huddled next to there mother feeling her warmth radeating on them. The night was soundless not even a whisper to sturr there sleep but the low grumbles of a discusted father.
1 year alone--
Mar grumbled as she slowly walked around in the woods along with Severus who would warn of anything he would fall from, as they have been both evected from the herd and left to die alone.He growled again and begain to start a conversastion in his head with severus.
"I cant beleave they did thid to us what did we do to them!"
"Its just because we are different thatas all.."
"What is the meaning of different?! WHAT IS THE MEANING OF NORMAL!"
"I..I. I dont know"
That was the firts time they have ever fought Severus keept on telling him where to go but didnt talk any more after that.
ok im stoping here >.<

[iBrevity]

Darn, I didn't get a chance to edit in the pic we did of them... >>