Gold_Statue wrote:Username: Gold_Statue
Zver you want:
Name: Annabeth
Reason you want it: Well I saw Jess in Demons' sigge and just knew that I wanted a zver, when I saw Annabeth she just clicked with me the slight glow of her ears, eyes and tail look brillant. I love glowing things and enjoy looking at them
What will you do with it if you win?: Ill put her in my sigge and see if I can grab art of her, Ill make a thread just for her, it will have different sections Who she is, what she is, what she likes and dislikes, her personality, her story and finally art of her XD
Personality:
Annabeth isnt the brightest zver in the box but she tries her hardest not to let show, with a bounce in her step she tries not to let anything bring her down. Some say "the smarter you are the less common sense you have the less smart you are the more common sense you have" Annabeth seems to have a lot more common sense then some of the smarter animals and people she knowsIntroduction/Story: It was dark and cold, nothing to be heard but the rain falling, then a steady clop of hooves could be heard, a cloaked figure appeared out the mist. Even the rats shrunk away as the figure passed allway after allyway their shadow flickered oddly on the walls, it looked like it had a mind of its own as it seemed to dance and spin along the wall keeping pace with its owner.
A strange creature made its way out of the shadows and fell into step with the odd figure and together they walked along in silence, "well? what did you find out" the figure asked the voice was decidedly feminine. "They are marching to move agaisnt us mistress" the creature replied, the female snarled angrily throwing back her hood. With pale skin, inky black lips paired with stunning emerald eyes and blood red locks created a beautiful sight "this is not acceptable I know mistress" the creature said brushing up against the beautiful woman.
"We must find and capture the zver before they do" she said her green eyes feirce, "Whisper Heart you will search from the ground and I'll search from the air" the beautiful woman said as she threw off her cloak and extended a pair of draconic wings. "Yes mistress Vara" Whisper Heart replied and set off running intent on searching until she found the escaped Zver.
Vara did a running jump and with a hard flap of her wings started to fly through the air, she kept her eyes on the ground looking for any sign of the Zver. All of a sudden Vara spotted a slight pink glow "I've finally found you" she said with a smile, she landed on all fours and folded her wings across her back once again.
"Annabeth" Vara called quietly, a nearby bush rustled and a head poked out with a soft bark, a dark coloured Zver with bright ears and tail trotted out. Vara smiled and bent down to hug her lost friend "you had me worried Annabeth, I had no idea where you'd gone" she said burying her face into Annabeths dark fur
Demon can have the plot if she would ever like to use it ^-^
Congratulations! I liked the difference in your story. At the beginning, I almost thought that Vara was evil, haha. Definately made for an interesting introduction.
By way of suggestions(since I have time for the moment) I'd say to proofread your story and make sure that all punctuation and capitalization is correct^^ That helps make it easier for others to read and makes everything look more professional^^
