Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

[EmberThorn]

Nex, is there enough time to edit? We just got the news my step grandad passed away and I haven't been on much at all this afternoon
edit: oh well, ill make some edits and if youve already read it, ignore them, i dont deserve a second chance at it, im no better than anyone else.

[Cihan]

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
Username:flamearabian
Tracker Dog you want:#2 (the purple one that we dont know the gender of...)
Name you'll give it:Magyk (if its female, its just a wierd but cool way to spell Magic) Dusk (if its male)*crosses fingers for a female*
Reason why you want it: Its plain beautiful..or handsome....These are one of the coolest things in the world(i wish they were real!) And they just Mystifie me. They are all unique, and all have different personallitys.

Will it be used in any kind of story?Background story, yes!i might make a story with it later on....
Describe its personality:(may i call it an it?) It has pure wild at heart, as you can see from the wild, zebra like markings. But it has a soft spot for its owner and loved ones. It will DIE for its loved ones, and is VERY Bold and brave. Its just a bit antisocial, but will do ANYTHING. Its very light on its feet, and is very good at sneaking around. She learns quickly, and is an exeptional fighter.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:(what will i call it!?)(told from trackers point of view) I opened my eyes slowly. I jerked my head around. So this is what its like to be to be alive..(just created) A person came towards me, a person with a name tag that said "Nex".She took a huge collor and slipped it on my neck.It had a wierd smell to it, and it made me sleepy..My eyes drooped down and everything was black.

(2 years later.....)

My owner looked at me. We were in the rain forest, and I was very hyper. As we strayed farther, I heard chants...Chants that said "Ominagi, alutago"I Jerked my head to see, or create, a picture in my mind of my owner looking at me, with a grave expresion. I flicked my ears and saw 2 people, wearing huge, feathery animal hide hats and cloths. They took spears and poked us with them. They forced us to a secured hut, were the top was open. 4 huge poles were standing in the middle, with blood stains on them.They tied me and my owner to them. I growled and bared my long fangs, my droopy toungh sticking out. The humans backed away and got larger spears, then set the fire. The humans left us there to perish. I gnawed on the ropes and finnally hopped off the pole. I rushed to my owner, and gnawed on hers. She fell right next to the fire, fainted.I took her on my back, her wait giving me pain. I had never done anything like this before. I dragged her outside, just to see 3 humans with spears glaring at us. I glared back then took my paw and scratched them with a huge claw. One of them was badly injured, a huge cut across it across its neck. It gulped and fell to the ground, gasping. 1 down, 2 to go. The backed away, then yelled some words."Monartes!Monartes!"they yelled which i assumed meant "monster".I glared at them, my toungh flicking around, drool dripping from it. I cornered them and took a step back.They ran into the forest.I nimbly dogded all the scared humans, than ran to my owner.I dragged her to the car and licked her face.She flickered open her eyes and drived away....

[DoctorDraca]

Nex, is there enough time to edit? We just got the news my step grandad passed away and I haven't been on much at all this afternoon

Really Ember, don't bother. Your form is very good. Don't worry about the Trackers, spend some time with your family, okay?

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Aww Im sorry to hear about your grandad ember Yah spend sometime with your family, you need them more then you need the internet for sure

[EmberThorn]

Nex, is there enough time to edit? We just got the news my step grandad passed away and I haven't been on much at all this afternoon

Really Ember, don't bother. Your form is very good. Don't worry about the Trackers, spend some time with your family, okay?

actually ive been sent to bed, i was spending time with them but my parents forced me away and I cant sleep, so I need something to take my mind off of it all ;_;

[DoctorDraca]

I suppose I can delay it by a day so everyone has a chance at finishing their WIPs..

[EmberThorn]

I suppose I can delay it by a day so everyone has a chance at finishing their WIPs..

No, i would prefer if it was over today, because im so nervous I feel like Im going to be sick ;(

[Lirrie]

I just started yesterday so another day would actualy be helpful

[DoctorDraca]

Fair enough.. Then I'm going to continue with judging as I was originally doing..
Edit: Guys.. Make up your minds. A day delay or not? Because more than half of the forms are WIPs, as I've noticed.

[Ginger_]

Good Luck guys :3