The SCAA - Officially Closed!

[Wesley]

It's very nice. Maybe you can explain how you took her home and gave her a nice warm bed or something? Add as much as possible.
As for the personality, describe it more. What makes her so happy and silly? And in the other section, what does she like and not like? What makes her mad or sad? What is her favorite meat, color, etc. I know that you have skill that just needs to be let out. ^^

Is that better? C:

Yes, I think it's an adorable story. c: Just keep thinking, and add more if you'd like as you go along. This code drop you have some competition. So other people are going for her, too, so you have to make it as big and great as possible!

[Offended Cockatiel]

Sparta: please work on it and then ask for Critique,not every little wile,because it's getting to be spammy and we give crituqe to everyone who asks for it but this isn't really a good way. Oh and I think it's pretty nice ^^' sorry if this comes off as rude.

[vanillababy]

It's very nice. Maybe you can explain how you took her home and gave her a nice warm bed or something? Add as much as possible.
As for the personality, describe it more. What makes her so happy and silly? And in the other section, what does she like and not like? What makes her mad or sad? What is her favorite meat, color, etc. I know that you have skill that just needs to be let out. ^^

Is that better? C:

Yes, I think it's an adorable story. c: Just keep thinking, and add more if you'd like as you go along. This code drop you have some competition. So other people are going for her, too, so you have to make it as big and great as possible!

ok C:

[Shimmerleaf]

I've decided I'm going to withdraw my forms for the two kennels I was going for. I just don't connect with them anymore. However, I will be going for two new characters, as I have inspiration for a story. I'll post a form when I get home, as now I'm on my iPad.

[vanillababy]

@wesleydog - Ok i added some more C:

[Wesley]

@ Shimmerleaf ~ I understand. c: In that case, do you think that you could please instead of going for the two characters in your old forms post, post a new reply on here for your forms? It's just easier for me to locate it that way. ;D

@ Sparta ~ Great! You're getting rather good at this for it being your first time. In the section where you have "Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:Nothing really C:" perhaps you can put her age? I don't know how old you want her to be, but it'd be nice if you'd put that there if you have a set age for her. ;D And in the "use" section, I have a few ideas of what to put there, too. Do you have a thread that you post your characters on? If so, then you can say that you will put her on your character thread or make her her own character thread. Maybe you could even link to your character thread if you have one? And I can tell from your signature that you like to roleplay. Maybe you plan to use her in a roleplay? If so, please list that in your "use" section, too. As far as the story and personality parts, feel free to keep adding. The more, the better! ^^

[Shimmerleaf]

Sure, I'll post the new form in a new post. Do I have to search for my old forms to delete them?

[Wesley]

Sure, I'll post the new form in a new post. Do I have to search for my old forms to delete them?

Nah, it's good. ^^

[vanillababy]

@ Shimmerleaf ~ I understand. c: In that case, do you think that you could please instead of going for the two characters in your old forms post, post a new reply on here for your forms? It's just easier for me to locate it that way. ;D

@ Sparta ~ Great! You're getting rather good at this for it being your first time. In the section where you have "Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:Nothing really C:" perhaps you can put her age? I don't know how old you want her to be, but it'd be nice if you'd put that there if you have a set age for her. ;D And in the "use" section, I have a few ideas of what to put there, too. Do you have a thread that you post your characters on? If so, then you can say that you will put her on your character thread or make her her own character thread. Maybe you could even link to your character thread if you have one? And I can tell from your signature that you like to roleplay. Maybe you plan to use her in a roleplay? If so, please list that in your "use" section, too. As far as the story and personality parts, feel free to keep adding. The more, the better! ^^

I'm so sorry i don't have a charrie thread but i can for sure put how old she is

[Solanum]

Sparta: please work on it and then ask for Critique,not every little wile,because it's getting to be spammy and we give crituqe to everyone who asks for it but this isn't really a good way. Oh and I think it's pretty nice ^^' sorry if this comes off as rude.

I don't agree with you here Aysano. I've been giving the same person crit for ages now, I rather enjoy it and so do they ^^ It's helpful.