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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Merlin's Heir » Sat May 26, 2012 12:38 pm

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby neamrel » Sat May 26, 2012 2:04 pm

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She sat there quietly. Her tail swaying lightly as she gazed about once more. Slightly sad by the fact that she hadn't been chosen by the last Ahz she tried to woo. Then again, she expected that. That had been her first shot at wooing another Ahz. Maybe she would gain another chance. She had the capability to fit with anyone. She had many different things about her personality that made it possible to be with anyone. So, it shouldn't be hard, right?
She sighed lightly as she layed down in the cooling dirt beneath her. A sigh escaping her maw as she saw a human run in front of her, followed by a few more humans. What was it they were running towards? The Vortex? It was in that direction. This made her cock her head lightly as she raise herself up. Sitting as she glanced about. Curiousity soon got the better of her, making her stand and shake herself clean. Slowly she headed towards the Vortex, not expecting to see the Ahz that would soon appear.
A coat as pure as gold itself. Gleaming blue eyes that seemed to show dominance. His head held high with pride. His voice being one that was almost wise, yet impatient. There was also something else. She could pin point it though. Whatever it was though. It seemed to draw almost every other created near.
She let a small smirk come from her as her ears swiveled towards the direction of Valcyon's voice. It seemed displeased. Making her wonder why. The though soon escaped her mind when she heard the name of the golden Ahz, Goelaef. It fit the male perfectly. A faint smile soon showed on her Mae as she glanced at some of the humans slowly slinking away into the background. She drew her attention away from them as she glanced back at Goelaef. Slowly, she walked towards the golden Ahz as he sat like a statue. Sitting herself down in front of him as she gazed at him for a moment. The giving him a slight bow of the head as a greeting.
"Goelaef, the one seeking another to rule by his side. Seems like a mission that would take years to find the perfect one, would it not?" She questioned him as she watches him still. "By the way, my name is, Camorra, and it is a pleasure meeting a Ahz as golden as yourself." She said. Watching his piercing blue eyes that stated back at her. "I don't know if you see it, for I have no companion, but I can lead almost as well as yourself, once you actually get me to concentrate on the task at had. I hate to disappoint others though, so I will surely go out of my way to make sure that the ones that shall follow are content when we are." She said as she smiled lighty towards him. "But I can see it, you and I. Ruling by each others side. Goelaef and Camorro, or, Camorra and Goelafe. Whichever you would prefer of course." She said as she laughed lighty. "But, there will be, of course, others. If you do wish to choose me though, I am pretty sure we will teach each other many things during our companionship, no? For I can see that, we both have very different out looks on life. I could also probably give you some adventure, fun, it seems like you need it." She said jokingly as she laughed lighty afterwards. Smiling brighty still as she watche him a moment more. "Enjoy your experiences, think often, have some fun, and lead unlike any other." She finally said as she rose from her seat in front of him. Bowing her head in goodbye and walking off. A slight hop in her step as she went back towards her shaded area. Laying down in the cooled dirt once again. Resting her head on her paws as she yawned lightly. Hopefully this time would be different. Goelaef was different after all, she would surely have fun by his side if he did wish to join her. She hoped he would. Chances, once again though, were slim.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Queen Vivane » Sat May 26, 2012 9:41 pm

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Ahzenai you're wooing: Goelaef

Woo: Featuring, Kalathae
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I tilted my head to one side. We had been waiting, Kalathae and I. For someone unique to arrive from the vortex. Perhaps today would be the day...

Hearing the excited murmurs we looked up from the book we were reading and settled our gazes onto the vortex. It flashed gold the bright rich color swirling, dancing and turning across the vortex in sweeping shimmering arcs. It was captivating and held the two of us in place until broken by a paw emerging from the vortex in a burst of bright light.

The paw daintily settled on the ground and I watched as a gorgeous golden Ahzenai followed it. His aquamarine eyes were surprisingly cold much like the gemstones they resembled. He sat upon the floor his golden head held high not unlike a statue that could have crouched by the thrones of the great Egyptian pharaohs.

"Goelaef" Valcyon called before settling down on his haunches. Goelaef didn't move a muscle, continuing to gaze at the mass of creatures below him with an expression that was swiftly losing the small glimmer of what had seemed like hope that had glinted in it's irises. After a small while, he spoke, his voice deep and rich as the noblest of metals but again, as cold as his eyes. His gaze passed critically over the crowd.

Kalathae and I listened to Goelaef tell the crowd of admirers what he was looking for in a potential companion. "Well, well, well Isabela he seems like quite the match, since your planning to take over the world, with Uber cuteness and a hidden ruthlessness" Kalathae laughed. "Indeed" I mused and examined the golden Ahzenai my red eyes taking in the proud way he held himself and the coolness of his gaze as he turned it on the crowd of wooers his head titled slightly to one side.

I stood up and Kalathae followed as I made my way over the golden Ahzenai, shoving a path through the crowd with ease. I stood in front of him and dipped my head respectfully. "Greetings Goelaef I am Isabela Akantius but you may refer to me as Isabela if that suits your preferences" I said smirking as Kalathae sauntered up to stand at my side. "I am Kalathae" she said simply and lifted a paw to examine it rather than casting her gaze on the golden male sat in front of us. "I am not a ruler yet but I desire to one day rule the world with Uber cuteness a touch of seductiveness and a hidden ruthlessness. It would certainly be much more fun if you were to say rule alongside me" I said and examined my deep blue nail polish, "oh yes, your just who she needs someone else to encourage her" Kalathae drawled sarcastically.

I glared at the female who merely shrugged, showing off her sharp teeth in a wicked grin. "I have spoken and will await the announcement of your answer by the lake" I said and flipped my blonde hair then turned on the spot and headed toward the shimmering blue lake. "Take it from me mate, you do not want to encourage Isabela, her lover is bad enough" Kalathae told Goelaef. "I heard that" I called back to her.[/color]
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby nowi » Sun May 27, 2012 7:45 am

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Ahzenai you're wooing: Goelaef
Woo: The Ahzenai featured in this woo is Pradus

Pradus sat upon a rock, his tail flicking back and forth in a lazy curve. His eyes were squinted and narrow, and he observed the scene below with an expressionless face. The fire element above him swirled lazily, much as the vortex was. He sighed. Yes, he had come here of his own accord, but it was dreadfully boring, as no activity had been happening for the longest time. He turned his head away from the vortex to watch the others in the cave. Out of the corner of his eye, Pradus saw a glint of gold, and he turned, mildly interested.
The vortex had transformed into a swirling mess of gold. A delicate golden Ahzenai had emerged from the vortex. He sat like a statue in the middle of Ahzen. Valcyon had announced that his name was Goelaef. Disinterested, Pradus began to turn away, when the golden Ahzenai spoke. The words reached Pradus' ears, and he smiled. There was no better leader than he.
Pradus stood up and stretched out his long, lithe legs, then jumped off the rock. He approached the fellow Ahzenai slowly, his head held high and his posture perfect. Upon reaching Goelaef, Pradus bowed his head slightly. "Goelaef," he said, his deep voice echoing around the cave. "It is an honor to meet you, friend."
He cleared a space in the dirt with his tail and sat down. "My name is Pradus," he said. "I am looking for a suitable companion to travel the world with me. You seem like a satisfactory choice." Pradus observed the other Ahzenai's cold eyes and emotionless face. "I can see that you might perhaps be picky with the companion that you choose, and I understand." He said confidently. "That is why I myself did not choose a companion here, but instead decided to travel alone." He paused, letting his words sink in. "However, I am now regretting my decision." He frowned. "I do not doubt myself, but I have decided that I would enjoy the company of another strong Ahzenai such as yourself." He nodded to Goelaef. "I think you would be most suitable for this."
Pradus stood up. "I wish you good luck in your endeavors," he said. "If you are ever in need of another Ahzenai, I would be most happy to have you join me."
He trotted away to his rock and jumped on top of it once again, assuming a pose that was comfortable, in order to watch the other suitors for Goelaef.

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>>Riches Exquisite <<

Postby anarchy, inc. » Mon May 28, 2012 2:24 pm

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Ahzenai you're wooing: Goelaef
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{| An Equal In Value |}

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>> Chehalis ; A realist with eyes on the future- literally. His fiery temper can make him a handful to deal with, as does his kingly expectations. Enter his kingdom, and follow his rules or deal with the cruel punishments of his Left-Hand ruler Modus.
>> Modus ; With a bark just as bad as his bite, Modus can be a savage, untamed beast. He sees no need for human commodities such as gold as Chehalis and Sakmet do, instead lunging for the throat and keeping claws unsheathed until he is obeyed.
>> Sakmet ; A cruel, literally soulless queen who prices lives lowly and precious metals high. She is to be either worshiped with utmost respect, or face her wrath.

{| W O O |}
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"That is mine!"
The outraged roar of ownership echoed around the desert as Chehalis bared his teeth, his kingly mane fluffing around his neck with outrage. Sakmet rolled her topaz eyes, but dropped the filched gold trinket all the same.
"My sincerest apologies, king." she said snarkishly, the sarcasm in her tone thicker than Amazonian quicksand. Her golden claws sunk deep into the soft earth, and she clenched her teeth, holding back more words she would like to snap at him with. She was better than this. She shouldn't be treated like this by an equal. If you could even consider him your equal. she thought to herself with a smirk. If his soul wasn't so tarnished, she probably would have taken it in a rageful outburst by now.

"Shut your greedy mouths, stop your stupid, meaningless bickering, and let's get going already. This hot sand burns my paws."
Modus's deep rumble was annoyed, and his eyes flashed as the two 'Royals' cast him unamused glares.
Sakmet sighed, turning quickly and flicking her jewel-encrusted tail as she began to pad into the seemingly endless horizon. The heat was oppressive, and the trio felt it. Before long, Chehalis was trailing behind, his pelt weighed down from the gold he carried. The only thing that drove the vain Sakmet farther on was her pride. The still unamused Modus, light from the lack of jewels he carried, trod on, jaw slack to expose a thick, pink tongue and sharp, white fangs, which gleamed as he panted to evaporate away a bit of the noon-time heat.
"This better be worth it," Chehalis panted, on the verge of a moan. Expecting no reply and receiving exactly that, Chehalis rolled his eyes, shaking sand from his pelt. Though refusing to say it, the other Ahz felt the same. It was a long journey from their kingdom on the other side of the desert that stretched across the southern bit of Ahzen, to the central clearing, lake and forest where the vortex had to kindly relocated itself to. Modus was convinced the vortex had done it out of spite for the king, adding another 25 miles to their trek of an already paw-numbing 94.

"I can start to make out the trees," Sakmet said, trying quite hard to keep the excitement she felt from seeping into her remark.
"Thank my lucky stars," Chehalis mumbled, trotting forward a few steps so he was no longer so far behind. The trio walked on silently until they had finally reached the treeline, hearts thumping in their chests and tongues lolling out of their mouths with exertion and heat. As luck would have it, they arrived just as Goelaef did. They all sat wordlessly in a row, their presence creating a sort of powerful aura around them that seethed and rolled, scaring away any close onlookers. Sakmet raised her chin, enjoying the feel of this power. Though small, power was power, and all three Ahz reveled in it.
Modus flicked in ear, motioning to his companions that the new Ahzenai was about to speak.
"I am looking," Goelaef said, "for a very specific kind of partner. They need not be human. They need not be a creature after myself. I am looking for a King, a Queen, an Emperor or Empress, a Pharaoh, a Caesar. A ruler of others. You need not be one yet, but I must see the potential in you to lead."

His words caused the three to look at each other and elicit knowing smiles- for Goelaef had perfectly described each of them. Rulers. Emperors. Queen. Creatures of power and leadership.
Goelaef moved and his audience shifted with this movement, a slight tilt of the head as he looked sidelong at the wooers. "Approach me only if you are confident in yourself. I admire strength of character. A ruler should not falter. And I am indeed a ruler."
Chehalis let loose a dark, pleased chuckle and rose to his golden paws. Sakmet and Modus rose immediately after, taking their positions at his sides, Sakmet to the right, Modus the left. The threesome dispersed the crowd easily, cutting it right down the center as smoothly as butter.
You couldn't say they didn't know how to make an entrance.

Their confidence formed a blockade to the onlookers, who remained a few feet back in stunned silence as Sakmet and Chehalis stepped forward to greet Goelaef.
"Emperor,"
"Emperor,"
They rumbled in unison, greeting the new Ahz. Sakmet flattened her ears, letting forth a sound of discontent at being talked over. Chehalis, knowing she was better with words, let her talk, rolling his aquamarine eyes.
"It is a pleasure to be in the company of another royal such as yourself," Sakmet purred, bowing her head slightly, though it hurt her pride. "We three have traveled many miles to be in your presence, and seek your guidance. You see, we are rulers of a large kingdom, and it has been increasingly harder to manage."
She sighed in distress, her topaz irises shining up at him. Her lithe frame curved around him. "A queen such as myself needs more than just a King and a Knight. I need an Emperor to offer guidance. I think you have what it takes to rule the kingdom alongside us. Can you handle it, Emperor?" Sakmet purred with a smirk, begining to slink away. She flicked her tail for Chehalis and Modus to follow.
"If, that is, you can handle the pressure. Can't let the power get to you.."

Her voice whispered like a dry breeze over the clearing, as if it was part if the desert she had just crossed.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon May 28, 2012 4:09 pm

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby leirah. » Thu May 31, 2012 3:15 pm

The store says its open but up above it says it closed :/ which one is the right answer?
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby neamrel » Thu May 31, 2012 3:22 pm

The store is closed. Onyx just hasn't changed the thing on the store saying it is closed.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby leirah. » Thu May 31, 2012 3:26 pm

Endless-Fall wrote:The store is closed. Onyx just hasn't changed the thing on the store saying it is closed.


Okay thanks and sorry I was just a little confused XP
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:54 am

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Ahzenai you're wooing: Goelaef
Woo:

Seth watched as the humans, Ahzenai, and even the rare odd creature approached the new Ahzenai. He raised an eyebrow at his golden pelt. It was shimmering slightly within the dappled sunlight, causing it to flash slightly. Like gold. It had arrived rather dramatically as well. With the swirling vortex smarting with flecks of gold and tan. Seth felt his fingers tapping impatiently against the stone ledge he sat on. He wanted to talk to the Ahzenai. But how would it react to him? It was obvious he was a leader. Generally, leaders partnered with leaders didn't go very well. In fact, they clashed constantly. He felt a smile drawing at his lips, twisted by he scar that raked down the side of his face. Wasn't that the fun though?

Hopping down from his perch, Seth silently padded towards the Ahzenai, his back straight and his arms crossed in interest. His gold and green eye curiously watched as the other wooer's attempted to woo him. He grinned as some presented themselves with a flourish, and others presented themselves humbly. Well, at least some people knew what a leader was. But what would they say to him, Seth, as a leader? He felt his fingers begin to twitch again, tapping a beat out on his thigh. Something he had a habit of doing when he thought about something serious.

He stopped a few feet from the Ahzenai, opened his mouth, and the torrent rushed out.
"BOW BEFORE ME YOU SHINY PIECE OF SCRAP METAL!"
He hollered, letting out a bellowing laugh that echoed through the cavern. Silence fell, people turning to stare at the crazy boy. Seth felt his grin straining against his cheeks. He wanted to laugh so bad. So he did. His bellow echoed through the cavern.
"I AM YOUR KING! FOLLOW ME! PICK UP YOU SWORD SCRAP METAL AND FOLLOW ME INTO THE WORLD OF THE UNKNOWN! THERE, WE SHALL PROCEED TO CONQUER THE WORLD!"
He laughed, drawing his small knife and holding it high within the air. People chuckled behind hands and looked away, thinking him to be kidding.He turned on them, an animalistic ferocity in his eyes.
"Don't laugh so foolishly at my requests, peasant's. I'm dead serious."
He growled, his voice loud, but quieter than before. A deadly rage lurked beneath his voice, but as he turned back to the Ahzenai, it vanished. As if it had never existed.
"COME WITH ME! AND I WILL SHOW YOU THINGS YOU COULD NEVER OF DREAMED OF SEEING!"
He laughed again, but his eyes were hard, and fixed on Goelaef. If this Ahzenai was weak, it would prove problematic to his plans. He had first assumed he was strong, his gold pelt momentarily distracting him, but now he would have to judge his inside as well.

With a flourish, he turned and headed back for his ledge, his walk long and strong. The unbelievers might think him a fool, and crazy. He knew though. He knew the truth. He grinned, climbing up to his ledge with ease and turning to stare back down at the Ahzenai. Like a king studying his servant, he watched Goelaef, and awaited his decision.

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