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-{| Taleras Emerges |}-

Postby Tiikeria » Sat May 12, 2012 5:08 pm

-{| V O R T E X |}-

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-{| From the Vortex |}-
    Once the good Captain Whitebeard had chosen a companion, the vortex revealed that it had another thing in store for the disappointed onlookers. The whirling ball of light flashed yellow, red and green, almost looking like Christmas lights. The bystanders watched in awe as the flashes became more and more intense, before a final flash, and a red and gold Ahz tumbled from the vortex, rolling down the small hill before landing on his back with a final "Ooof!"

    Valcyon tried to hide a smile as he called the name of the newcomer, "Taleras!"

    The newly named Ahz giggled, looking up at the surrounding people, his eyes bright and playful. Quickly, he bounced to his feet, looking for a potential playmate, looking through the crowd before realizing just how many people and creatures were surrounding him. The first signs of nervousness showed on his perviously happy face.

    "H-hello," he finally spoke, his voice bashful, "I'm looking for a f-friend and a p-playmate...w-wow there are a l-lot of you...um...I just...er...h-hi?"

-{| Design, Story & Judging |}-
    By Tiikeria

-{| Wooing Form |}-
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-{| Notes |}-
    Alright, so this guy is a bit shy, but he has a big heart. But, be warned, he doesn't like a lot of people around him, they make him nervous. I gave you guys a bit of leeway with how to entertain him; play games, play him some music, tell him jokes, etc. He just wants to have fun. <3

    Judging will take place on Tuesday, May 15, and a warning will be given depending on my schedule. I'll be judging based on how creatively you react to the Ahzenai, and how well I think you match his personality. You may woo this Ahzenai whether you already own one or not.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby *Blackberry* » Sat May 12, 2012 5:23 pm

Username:
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Ahzenai you're wooing:
Taleras
I think I know why I want Taleras, because I am a bit shy same like him and I always want to have fun so I guess, I have to try for this ahzenai.

Woo:

Serena whimpered quietly, as someone push past her. Someone said, " Move away! " Serena widened her eyes with fear and said softly, " Ok..Okay.. " She backed away but bumped into someone, she saw the angry look and ran near the vortex without knowing. Suddenly light shone an brighten the cave, voices and whispers was heard. Serena sat down firmly trying to be strong, she glanced around. She stopped looking when she saw the Ahzenai, he was quite handsome, his red was magnificent and beautiful his gold was so beautiful and rich, and his green eyes was so handsome, his black was a perfect combination with the other colors, She patiently heard his speech even though he stammered, she then thought, " He is just like me, can he be the perfect one for me? " She raised to her paws and walked towards Taleras, she sat down and said, " Goo-d morning Taleras, my name is Serena. " her nervousness disappeared as she spoke, " I hear you want a playmate and a friend. Let me tell you a joke I know, there was this guy who went to the lake to take a nap. He didn't want to lose his new toy, he placed it in his pocket and fell asleep. When he woke, he tried to find hid new toy, he had already forgotten about where he placed and all the time it was in his pocket. I know it is not funny.." She stiffened a giggle, "You love music do you? I love it too, let me play one song for you. " She took out a sliver flute and played a happy, adventures, exciting and merry tune on it. She played another couple of songs, Serena kept her flute and bowed. " Hope you like the songs I played for you on my flute. Should we play an exciting game? Catching? Hide and seek? Blind mice? Frezze tag? Never mind, if you want to come with me, everyday, would be full of games, jokes plus music and plenty of laughter. I hope, you would choose me but.. never mind... I hope to hear your decision tonight or a few hours time whenever you decide to choose. Hope you have enjoyed my speech. " Serena was about to go when she rememered that she brought a gift, she took out a silk blanket, she said, " This is for you to wear whenever it is cold, I hope you will enjoy my gift Taleras. Goodbye Taleras. See you.. Soon. " She bowed politely, then walked off smiling happily.
Last edited by *Blackberry* on Mon May 21, 2012 8:56 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Returning De Faye and Madam

Postby stiles. » Sat May 12, 2012 7:50 pm

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R E T U R N


F O R M

Username: Sweet Shadows
Ahz you're applying for: Madam
Woo:
W I P <3
Few sentences of why you want this Ahz:
She is so stunningly beautiful, first off. And, of course, I adore her personality. I can be a bit of a chatterbox as well, but definitely have a shy side, as she seems to.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Azure23 » Sun May 13, 2012 5:32 am

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Username:
[Azure23]
Ahzenai you're wooing:
[Taleras]
Characters in Woo:
Angel
Anasael


Woo:

The dark brown Ahz kneaded the ground in excitement as the vortex flared to life. Her tail flicked impatiently and her ears kept flicking around restlessly everytime somene moved. Beside her, her companion was the complete opposite. He was standing completely still, his arms folded across his skinny chest. His large, white feathered wings were tucked close to his back. He moved only to shift from one foot to the other. Only his pale grey eyes gave away his excitement in seeing the vortex flare to life. It had been so long since both of them had returned to Ahzen and it felt like a warm welcome seeing the Vortex spawn another Ahzen.

Suddenly, the flashing produced a bright flash and out plopped a bright gold and red Ahz. The two travelers watched amused as the newly named Ahz, Taleras, bounded around happily and giggled madly. It looked around playfully before ducking down nervously. It called out a meek greeting and seemed to bashfully wait for the first suitors to appear.

Angel looked towards Anasael, a small smile on his pale feature. He was going to ask if she wanted to try talking to the newcomer when he noticed his companion was gone. He looked around curiously before he noticed her vivid greed element zigzagging through the crowd. With a sigh, he got to his feet and slowly followed after her.

Anasael slowly, but confidently made her Teleras. Her tail wagged happily and she grinned kindly when she finally got close to him. She made sure she wasn't too close to make him uncomfortable. "Hello! My name is Anasael." She chirped, she tried to keep her normally loud voice softer so she wouldn't scare him. "Hey, we have the same element, color and everything." She suddenly noticed, her eyes widening. She bounced happily on her feet.

She stopped only when Angel finally approached. He dipped his head respectfully, smiling a little shyly. "I hope my friend hasn't scared you. She is quite nice once she calms down." His voice was naturally quiet, and was made even more so in an attempt to not scare the bashfull Ahz.

Anasael scowled at her companion before looking towards Taleras grinning again. "We travel together, and have tons of fun and adventure. I keep him out of trouble." She scowled again when Angel looked awake snickering at the obvious lie. "There is always room for more friends though." She said, her voice sincere. "You know what they say, the more the merrier. If you wish to come with us you can." She said, her eyes shining hopefully. Angel nodded with agreement, looking towards Telaras grinning slightly.


[I applied for this particular Ahz because a) I have a soft spot for the color gold and I love how it makes his horns look all metal-like, and b) his personality is pretty much Anasael and Angel's squished together in one adorable package. :3]
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Tiikeria » Tue May 15, 2012 3:04 pm

    Judging is tomorrow, everyone~! Get for woos perfected for poor Taleras.
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Re: -{| Taleras Emerges |}-

Postby neamrel » Tue May 15, 2012 3:39 pm

- F O R M -

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-Ahzenai You're Wooing-
Taleras
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-Woo-
Featuring the Lovely Camorra
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The blue Ahz watched carefully for a few minutes. Taking in the sights and sounds around her as she flicked her tail about slowly. Her attention being drawn from her own thoughts at the sound of a small whispered coming from some humans that were around. Her gaze going towards the Vortex. Her tail slightly wagging faster as she stood up and ventured over towards the area that Vortex was located at. Gazing at the humans slightly as the chattered about the new Ahz that was emerging. She kept her eyes on the new Ahz once he emerged. Taleras. He caught her eye quickly. His colors standing out from a lot of the other Ahz she had seen. Especially his bright green element on his back.
A small smile appearing on her face as she then disappeared in the crowd of suitors. Deciding to go and leave let other suitors go before her until she actually decided to try her hand at wooing him. Beginning to feel quite nervous as she tried to think of ways she could confront him. All seemed so weak. He had actually caught her eye, and she wanted to see if she could actually talk to someone besides herself for once. That seemed likely impossible at the moment though.
She finally calmed her nerves down enough to actually begin to make her way towards Taleras. A faint smile on her face. Once in front of Taleras. She stayed quiet for a moment. Sitting down a few feet in front of him as she smiled faintly still. Swaying her tail lightly as she did this.
"H-Hi, Taleras. My..name is Camorra." She managed to get from her mouth as she smiled towards him still. "Wanna play? I mean, you don't have to but you look like someone that would want to play. Even if you are a little shy." she told him. Realizing that she was talking more than she really should. A faint laugh coming from her at the thought of it. "Sorry for my excessive talking. I'm new to this whole wooing thing." She told him as she looked towards the ground for a moment. Running her paw over the ground as she slowly looked back up towards him. "Maybe we can go play tag! Or, or hide-n-seek! Oh! Do you like to swim? Because I love to, so maybe we could do that!" She said in excitement. Raising her voice slightly. Stopping herself quickly. Seeing he wasn't to found of loud things. She placed her front right paw on her mouth as she laughed lightly once more. "Sorry. Again. I get excited easily." She told him in a quieter tone as she slowly stood up from her spot. "If you want to though, you can come with me, and..and we can play together, talk, watch the stars..." She told him, her voice trailing off as she tried to think of more things they could do. She then finally began to start talking, seeing as to how she didn't finish. "Or whatever else you like to do. I would really enjoy your company anyway. I need someone to play with and such." She said happily towards her as she slightly bowed towards him afterwards. "It was nice to at least meet you, Taleras. I hope you do decide to join me, or at least join someone that you will have a wonderful time with." She told him as she smiles brightly towards him. Finally turning away and bouncing away like a little doe. A soft laugh coming from her as she did this.
She made herself comfortable where Taleras could see her, and she could see him. Just in case he actually did decide to join her. She hoped she would. She sat there nervously. Hoping he would make his decision very soon. She didn't know if she could take waiting anymore.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby .Coyote » Sun May 20, 2012 1:00 pm

Tiikeria wrote:
    Judging is tomorrow, everyone~! Get for woos perfected for poor Taleras.


I know it says that it closed... days ago, but you haven't judged yet, have you? There weren't many woos at all so I was wondering if I could still write one just so that Taleras can feel a liiittle more special with one more wooer ^_^
You certainly wouldn't have to include it in the judging.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Tiikeria » Sun May 20, 2012 1:37 pm

    Irk, sorry guys. :C Work got the best of me, lately. I'm going to extend the deadline to tomorrow night at 9 EST. I should be home from our workplace lazer tag party by then. :3 Until then, feel free to post or edit your woos~
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby Tiikeria » Mon May 21, 2012 10:47 am

    Sorry for double posting, but...

    Approx 2 hrs remaining~!
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Ann. Battle Ahz | Store Closed

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon May 21, 2012 8:57 pm

Is it judging time already? I think 2 hours has pass. Sorry for being rude!
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