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[Hedgie;]

I want to adopt !


Username: Oculis



Number of Sylphaire: #5

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Name you will give it: She will be called Rune, after the blue markings that cover nearly her entire body in beautiful and inticate patterns. They glow slightly, and look like runes used in alchemy.
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Gender: Rune is a femme, or female.
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I want this Sylphaire because: Where to begin? She is beautiful, to start, and seems perfect for a friend or even an apprentice to Fiona(My Custom that i wanna order soon. ^^) I love the purple accents on her jewel and such, they really make her pop! The blue and grey go wonderfully together, making it look as if she was glowing. All in all, I love her design.

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Addition: I plan on using Rune in my stories that I will post here, if I win her. I think she'd be wonderful in them, maybe as the apprentice,or perhaps wanna-be apprentice of Fiona. I have abit of a plot lined up already! Hehe, sorry! I wont spoil it for you, but hey, Its gonna be awesome!

{StoryLine Spoiler} Rune was a sickly litte Sylphaire when she was 'born'. Fiona vowed to heal Rune at any cost! So when she grew up, this little weather fairy wanted to be an alchemist, just like Fiona. But, Rune is a weather Sylphaire! This causes alot of problems in their village, but no one wants to hurt the little fairys feelings.
{End Spoiler}

- Akira Shinren -

Rune sat quietly in Fionas Apothicary. The little fairy wanted to be an herbalist, and she believed if she tried hard enough, she would be as good as Fiona herself. Rune just didnt appriciate the stares and whispers the townspeople made when she fluttered by. She always felt she was different, even from a young age. But her neighbours actions just made her all the more aware of her differences, and even more self concious.
Normally, a Sylphaire knew its destiny based on jewel color, and that was the destiny they strived for. Rune's jewel, being pink, ment her powers belonged in weather manipulation. But Rune didnt like the weather. She liked plants and flowers, and herbs and cures. The young Sylphie sighed, putting her head down. She didnt know what she should do. Conform to everyones expctations, or follow her dreams..? Rune knew weather was important to everyone, but she didnt feel it was going to make her happy. She sighed.
Moments later, Fiona fluttered in. "Rune, what's the matter? Belly ache? Ive got some tonic that can jus--"
Rune interrupted her."Its not a belly ache. Im just not feeling myself today.." She said, her voice saddened.

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{{Done & Ready for judging!}}

Im still waiting for Shoran to decide if I get this one or not. I hope I do..


Also, I did the math.. Should get somewhere around 600 energy for that first chapter. ^^

[Akira Shinren]

Story is for Energy. :3

Fiona hummed gently as she mixed a potion in her tiny acorn morter & pestle. The herbalist lifted her stirring instrument, and frowned at the brownish-red paste. "Maybe a dash more..." She thought aloud. The girl often thought outloud when she was crafting. Her latest experiment, a potion to change the jewel color of a Slyphaire. So far, it was a complete flop. The potion only turned the user blue for a candlemark. She furrowed her brow, digging through shelves of dried herbs and giant's toenails. The toenails were most useful in skin complexion ointments, believe it or not. Atlast, her slender fingertips grabbed a jar of SylphieLeaves. These rare delicate plants, named after their wing-like leaves, would be the perfect addition to this potion!

"Fiona! Fiiionnnaaaaaaa!!!" A males voice shreiked. Fiona yelped, the jar clattering to the ground. It smashed, sending bits of glass acrossed the room. She turned around to see Avrel, sweaty and flustered at her doorstep. Her neighbours wife had been with child for a long while now. Not "pregnant" as humans may know it, but a more complicated and beautiful matter than that.
"Avrel? What is the matter?" She asked. The medicine fairy knew Sehreze had given birth, as she could just tell by the males actions and demenor. But what she did not know, was that the little Sylphaire less than a day old was already dying.
"Its the baby! Her jewel.. it was pink, but now its turning black!" Avrel whimpered. "You must come quick!" He urged her. Fiona nodded, and flew out of the apothicary with her friend.

After afew moments of flying, they came to Avrel and Sehreze's home. It was a cozy little place inside of a mossy oak tree. Fiona landed gently on their moss-coated floor, and a woman thrusted a bundle of blankets at her. The woman had silver hair, and sapphire eyes. Her ears drooped, and her wings slouched. This was Sehreze, Arvels wife. The medicine Slyphaire carefully and slowly unwrapped the bundle without a word,nervous as to what she would find inside. But to her relief, it was a live baby. Her breaths were shallow, and as her father said, her jewel was pinkish-black. Fiona scooped the baby-bundle from Sehreze, and placed her down gently on a nearby woven willow couch. The girl felt
he childs forehead, and pulled her hand back in suprise. Her forehead was burning hot! Fiona let out a gasp of shock, as Avrel held his weeping wife.
"Fiona, please save our daughter.."He mumbled, squeezing his wife.
The healer nodded, "I will. But I need supplies. Please, keep soaking her forehead in cool water until I return! I wont take long." She replied, and zipped out of the home. Avrel set his wife down next to their baby, and put the child in her arms. He then ran off to find some water and a cloth. Sehreze kissed her daughters forehead. "Oh my love. My beautiful daughter." The blue-jeweled Slyphaire cried, rocking the baby softly. Avrel made his way back to his small family, and crouched down by the child. He had an acorn bowl with silk soaking inside. Delicately, he dabbed the cool water on the squirming baby. She squeaked.
Moments later, Fiona flew inside, carrying a sachel with her. She made her way to the baby, and began mixing herbs and plants faster than you could say "mouse.". Within afew short minutes, a stinky, slimy goo was in her mortar and pestle. She pulled a spoon from her sachel and began to drip the ooze into the childs mouth.


~~~~~WIP~~~~~

Also, Fionas jewel color changing potion will never work, because its not an item in the store or anything. I just thought she can have an impossible dream, is that okay? I can change it if its a problem.



Also, does anyone like my story so far? ^^

No wonder Fukuwa said something is not right...
The story is good, I like it... but it does not stay with the facts.

However the child is not a real 'child'
at the beginning. The jewel on the mother's forehead
assembles the Energy into one point, and creates a new Jewel.
Though, the jewel is larger than a grown up Sylphaire
actually is. Inside of the jewel, a little baby-like appereance
is seen, which then grows into the size of a normal
Sylphaire, while absorbing the Energy of the jewel. After
having grown up inside of the jewel, the sleeping
Sylphaire will wake up.
Their Ears and Sensors are not full grown yet, and
they don't have a jewel on their forehead.
The jewel will manifest itself on the forehead of
the Sylphaire, as a small replica of the original large Jewel,
once the Sylphaire's Sensors and Ears have completely grown,
thus indicating the adulthood of the Sylphaire.

So, some facts are ... really wrong ^^.

So, Fukuwa alreay stated the Copyright fact....
What else to say... Yea, I like the story... I've already said that, right? xD

Here's the amount: 614 Energy. ^^

[Akira Shinren]

I want to adopt !


Username: Oculis



Number of Sylphaire: #5

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Name you will give it: She will be called Rune, after the blue markings that cover nearly her entire body in beautiful and inticate patterns. They glow slightly, and look like runes used in alchemy.
~

Gender: Rune is a femme, or female.
~

I want this Sylphaire because: Where to begin? She is beautiful, to start, and seems perfect for a friend or even an apprentice to Fiona(My Custom that i wanna order soon. ^^) I love the purple accents on her jewel and such, they really make her pop! The blue and grey go wonderfully together, making it look as if she was glowing. All in all, I love her design.

~

Addition: I plan on using Rune in my stories that I will post here, if I win her. I think she'd be wonderful in them, maybe as the apprentice,or perhaps wanna-be apprentice of Fiona. I have abit of a plot lined up already! Hehe, sorry! I wont spoil it for you, but hey, Its gonna be awesome!

{StoryLine Spoiler} Rune was a sickly litte Sylphaire when she was 'born'. Fiona vowed to heal Rune at any cost! So when she grew up, this little weather fairy wanted to be an alchemist, just like Fiona. But, Rune is a weather Sylphaire! This causes alot of problems in their village, but no one wants to hurt the little fairys feelings.
{End Spoiler}

- Akira Shinren -

Rune sat quietly in Fionas Apothicary. The little fairy wanted to be an herbalist, and she believed if she tried hard enough, she would be as good as Fiona herself. Rune just didnt appriciate the stares and whispers the townspeople made when she fluttered by. She always felt she was different, even from a young age. But her neighbours actions just made her all the more aware of her differences, and even more self concious.
Normally, a Sylphaire knew its destiny based on jewel color, and that was the destiny they strived for. Rune's jewel, being pink, ment her powers belonged in weather manipulation. But Rune didnt like the weather. She liked plants and flowers, and herbs and cures. The young Sylphie sighed, putting her head down. She didnt know what she should do. Conform to everyones expctations, or follow her dreams..? Rune knew weather was important to everyone, but she didnt feel it was going to make her happy. She sighed.
Moments later, Fiona fluttered in. "Rune, what's the matter? Belly ache? Ive got some tonic that can jus--"
Rune interrupted her."Its not a belly ache. Im just not feeling myself today.." She said, her voice saddened.

~


{{Done & Ready for judging!}}

Im still waiting for Shoran to decide if I get this one or not. I hope I do..


Also, I did the math.. Should get somewhere around 600 energy for that first chapter. ^^

It's against the rules to repost
*friendly hint before striking*
Please do not repost, unless you are 'updating' your form, then write that you updated it

I'll go through forms now, I've been busier than I thought lately + the lack of will to work here due to Kitsubi ^-^'
I'll go through everything now.

[Hedgie;]

The whole baby thig is confusing the jiblets outta me..... but i did repost because i edited my post. *added the rainbow-rain* ^^

[Akira Shinren]

The whole baby thig is confusing the jiblets outta me..... but i did repost because i edited my post. *added the rainbow-rain* ^^

Yea I kinda knew that, I just wanted to make sure, that next time you mention that you have updated it

[Akira Shinren]

Squee!

I want to adopt !
Username: zee99
Number of Sylphaire: 6
Name you will give it: Nitoris [splendor, glow, elegance]
Gender: female
I want this Sylphaire because: She's gorgeous. She is different because she doesn't even try to be like the others. She's darkly mysterious and lightly open. I immediately began thinking of her history and her personality (but I won't post that here, because it's not why I want her xD). Don't get me wrong, they're all beautiful, and if I could get and love all of them, I would. Nitoris popped out to me. It's hard to say why, but it's just something that happens with some creatures. I can definitely words today.
Addition: Humanoids~ I am awful at them xD I was gonna smooth out the shading and hair, but I kinda liked the style.

Morning Hair


- Akira Shinren -

Accepted

I want to adopt !


Username: Oculis



Number of Sylphaire: #5

~

Name you will give it: She will be called Rune, after the blue markings that cover nearly her entire body in beautiful and inticate patterns. They glow slightly, and look like runes used in alchemy.
~

Gender: Rune is a femme, or female.
~

I want this Sylphaire because: Where to begin? She is beautiful, to start, and seems perfect for a friend or even an apprentice to Fiona(My Custom that i wanna order soon. ^^) I love the purple accents on her jewel and such, they really make her pop! The blue and grey go wonderfully together, making it look as if she was glowing. All in all, I love her design.

~

Addition: I plan on using Rune in my stories that I will post here, if I win her. I think she'd be wonderful in them, maybe as the apprentice,or perhaps wanna-be apprentice of Fiona. I have abit of a plot lined up already! Hehe, sorry! I wont spoil it for you, but hey, Its gonna be awesome!

{StoryLine Spoiler} Rune was a sickly litte Sylphaire when she was 'born'. Fiona vowed to heal Rune at any cost! So when she grew up, this little weather fairy wanted to be an alchemist, just like Fiona. But, Rune is a weather Sylphaire! This causes alot of problems in their village, but no one wants to hurt the little fairys feelings.
{End Spoiler}

- Akira Shinren -

Rune sat quietly in Fionas Apothicary. The little fairy wanted to be an herbalist, and she believed if she tried hard enough, she would be as good as Fiona herself. Rune just didnt appriciate the stares and whispers the townspeople made when she fluttered by. She always felt she was different, even from a young age. But her neighbours actions just made her all the more aware of her differences, and even more self concious.
Normally, a Sylphaire knew its destiny based on jewel color, and that was the destiny they strived for. Rune's jewel, being pink, ment her powers belonged in weather manipulation. But Rune didnt like the weather. She liked plants and flowers, and herbs and cures. The young Sylphie sighed, putting her head down. She didnt know what she should do. Conform to everyones expctations, or follow her dreams..? Rune knew weather was important to everyone, but she didnt feel it was going to make her happy. She sighed.
Moments later, Fiona fluttered in. "Rune, what's the matter? Belly ache? Ive got some tonic that can jus--"
Rune interrupted her."Its not a belly ache. Im just not feeling myself today.." She said, her voice saddened.

~


{{Done & Ready for judging!}}

Im still waiting for Shoran to decide if I get this one or not. I hope I do..


Also, I did the math.. Should get somewhere around 600 energy for that first chapter. ^^

Accepted

Will send out the codes to you two.

For #4, if no decent Application is posted until 2013/04/14 - 8pm CS time, I'll take it for myself

[garnet.]

I would posted for it but I dont think I can, due to adopting already, right?

[angelwings1232]

Can I edit mine for #4? it was like 11:00 at night when I made it and i was tired

[Maddox Malice]

Yusso, un. My name is Nao. I am the first Sylphaire of Fukuwa, un. I am pleased to meet all of you...

Yea... I want to write a story so I needed a Sylphaire... And that is Nao, the Sylphaire that represents me, more or less... He looks simple, only his left side of his face, (it is not clearly visible) is darker than the rest of his body. Nao lives hidden because he don't like other beings around him. But he is very friendly, even if he is kinda... arrogant. On his forehead there is a white jewel, which means he can heal.

As you can hear, I sometimes say 'un' at the end of my sentences. Why, do you ask? Because I like it, un. It makes me cute. And I am cute, ultra cute, un! I prefer being alone, just because I don't want to be betrayed again. I just can't trust anyone anymore, un. I really like water. Because I like it to be clean, dirt is... eww... And I like Spiders. Even though they try to eat me, I find them so cute, un.

...Yea.... Sure... Cute Spiders... Oo... Well... I hope that I can write some stories with Nao and such... *v*

Spiders ARE cute, un!! >_<!!!

Okay! Okay... they are cute (ó_ò)...

Mwhahahahahahahaaaaaa....

By the way, I forgot to say something, un. There is a reason that the left side of my face is darker, un. I am blind on my left eye and can't hear on my left ear. Also... I have Scale, un. Hehe. Like a snake. Snakes are also cute, un. And frogs. Naaw...

O...k....... (I am kinda afraid of Nao now :3)

*evil laugh*....,un.

[Maddox Malice]

Ah, I will decide who gets #11 tomorrow.