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by Sheer » Wed Oct 31, 2012 11:18 pm
Username:
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Kennel Number:
Kennel 153
Kennel 244
Name [of pet]:
JoeyCharlotteNickname[s]:
~LettyGender [of pet]:
Male FemaleSpecies; Breed:
Dog, Border CollieWolf, TimberWeight:
117 lbs. {one hundred and seventeen pounds}105 lbs. {one hundred and five pounds}Height:
2' 6" {two feet; six inches} At the shoulder2' 4" {two feet; four inches} At the shoulderAge:
4 1/2 years3 yearsBirthdate:
June 17th, 2008November 11th, 2009Reasons Behind Wanting Him/Her:
I have really been wanting a nice male border collie character for a long time now and he is just so handsome I fell in love instantly<3 His name and everything is just perfect I don't see anything about him that I don't like!I just think she is gorgeous and delightfully complicated. Just looking at her so many ideas run through my mind and she is extremely inspiring! I would love to use her all the time and love her!~You've got to take the good with the bad~
Likes:
Teddy Bears, The Piano, Violins, The Color Blue, Outdoors, Tennis, Frisbee, Stuffed Toys, Rope Toys, Meal Time, Walks, Jogs, Exploring, Digging, Christmas, Chasing things, Getting Dirty, Bath Time, Swimming, Coffee, Sweet Tea, Breakfast Foods, Sand, The Beach, Car Rides, Trucks, Winning, Foot Races, Birds.Nature, Teddy Bears, Stickers, New and Amazing Things, Ice Cream, Lollipops, Fruits, The Color Orange, Holidays (Mostly Halloween), Quotes, Poems, Music, Gaming, Pearls, Gardening, Painting, Reading, Mountains, Camping.Dislikes:
Sweets, The Color Yellow (Not an awful color but too bright), Loud noises, Aggressive People, Being Alone, Overly Excited Animals/Children, Awkward Moments, Falling Behind, Being Messy, Cowards, Wasting Time.Bubble gum, Chocolate, Darkness (Though who likes that), Jump Scares, Endless Stairs, Heights, Fear of Falling, Creepy Crawlies, Getting Lost, Crewel People, Losing, Children Songs (When sung in a creepy fashion), Fishing, Hunting, Being Alone.Personality:
Flirty
Joey likes girls and he is not afraid to show that, he will flirt with any cute girl he spots and he just loves to see them blush it makes him feel good like he flattered them and made there day a bit better. His flirting is completely harmless though all he does is complement and try to brighten peoples days the best he possibly can. So if that means telling a girl she is pretty or looks cute to him he will not be afraid to say so.
Hard Working
Joey doesn't like to spend his day lying about if there is something that needs to be done he will definitely get it done as fast as he can and as well as he can. He wants everything to be done perfectly and will always try to make sure that it is done exactly as it is supposed to be done.
Down to Earth
Joey tries to understand what people are going through before he starts to judge or give advice he is often referred to as a therapist. He tried not to be one sided but to see the story from both sides because there will always be two sides to everything no matter what it is about.
Relaxed
When he does relax there is nothing that can bother him. He enjoys things such as candles and looking into koi ponds when he finds the down time to do so. Although his down time never lasts very long he enjoys ever second of it.
Lives Life to The Fullest
He loves to do just about anything and everything there is to do in life. Joey would try just about any new thing that is thrown at him as long as it promises a good time and a ton of fun.Gentle
Charlotte is as gentle as they come she will refuse to do anything if someone is going to come close to getting hurt. Unlike most of her kind she does not have the urge to harm other things for food she would rather take care of other things and nurse them back to health if need be.
Caring
She would cry for anyone that has a sob story to give her. Charlotte genuinely cares for everyone around her and would never wish anyone harm no matter how bad or awful they really are. Unable to bear bad things happening to the people around her she often shelters herself in her own little perfect world where not one can harm her friends or her.
Lazy (At Times)
She is more the type to lay around the house when there is nothing to do rather than go find something productive to occupy her time. Charlotte loves to nap whenever she can no matter what time a day it is there is always time for a good can nap.
Energetic
When she is awake and about she can sometimes come off a bit obnoxious. She always enjoys herself whenever she can always trying to see the best in every situation no matter how bad things get.
Loyal
If you befriend Charlotte you will have a friend for life she will never let you down no matter how daunting the task she will always try her hardest to complete whatever it is. She will do anything for her friends all you have to do is ask and it's practically already done and that's all it takes.About Joey/Charlotte:
Joey is mainly a sheep dog but he is also a wonderful companion. He is a bit of a free spirit, He doesn't really enjoy relaxing when there is work to be done but he has a calm nature about him. Joey is unique and is perfectly fine with that. He loves to be taken out to a pond or lake for a nice afternoon swim and occasionally enjoys a bit of rough-housing. Joey's favorite activity though is coming home after a long day and taking a nice bath before curling up in front of the fireplace to get dry and settle in for a well earned rest. Each morning Joey wakes up bright and early ready to get to work and as soon as his day begins it doesn't end until the sun goes down but he loves everything there is to love about his job.Charlotte has gotten a reputation as a kind and gentle wolf, she often ventures from her home in the woods into the village just along the treeline. She often visits the bakery where they give her left over bread and treats she has become a sort of representative of the small family owned shop and everyone loves to see her when they come in to get there food. She prefers the company of humans rather than her own kind, she sees most of them as mindless killing machines and she doesn't want to be like that she wants to be friends with other creatures rather than have them fear her and cower away every time she gets close to them.History:
Living on the beach he took most of his days to play in the water and run along the sand. He lived in a small house with a little family. He was kept outside and had a dog house of his own. One night his family got in the car and just left suddenly. The wind was strong and chilling to the bone, the sky was completely black. He could feel something was wrong and that something very bad was coming his way. Joey hid in his little dog house as the wind got worse and rain started to pour down. He heard a loud snap then as he looked out of the little hole in his house he saw the tree from the back yard coming right at him. Joey cowered in the corner knowing that his life was over. The tree crashed to the ground just in front of his house and it completely crushed half of his house, even an inch closer and he would have been dead.
The next morning Joey fought as hard as he could to get his collar off then it finally slipped off his head. He began to dig beneath his dog house until he had made a tunnel all the way to the outside. Once out he wasn't even bothered by the lacerations and fractures he had acquired. He limped out into the street and just looked at the neighborhood he had once known and how it was completely gone now. A rescue volunteer who had been out looking for people that were trapped or worse came across him, he picked him up and placed him in his car covering him with a blanket.
Joey was taken in by a dog shelter, he was injured and risked being put to sleep due to mass overcrowding and the inability to treat him properly, but his now owner discovered him and fell in love. They offered to pay whatever it took to get him better. Joey recovered quickly once he was properly treated and was adopted out to the home of the wonderful person that spared his life.
Now competing in frisbee and agility competitions is one of Joey's favorite pass times. He has been trained in both and is also a certified guide dog, his incredible intelligence makes many people admire him but really he doesn't care about trophies or ribbons he's just in it for the fun and enjoyment of living his life truly thankful to be given the second chance that he was.
Living on a farm with many other animals of course Joey is the top dog. His owner gives horse riding lessons and often takes the younger animals to small events where they set up petting zoos (Such as fairs and carnivals) Which Joey is always right there just in case an animal strays and gets lost. Although he mainly herds the sheep he also herds horses and cattle if they stray from the designated areas. Joey loves it when new friendly people come to visit him. He really loves his life now and he couldn't be happier.Charlotte was born to a litter of five pups, including herself. They we're all born in the dead of winter, one of the worst winters yet actually, most of the fully grown animals didn't even make it through and sadly she was the only one to survive from her litter. Her mother had risked her own life time and time again just to make sure that Charlotte made it through the winter and luckily she did.
Being an only child and knowing how lucky she was to have even survived through such an awful tragedy Charlotte grew up trying to see everything through others perspectives. Often she would wait for others before she would ever attempt to do anything herself. Hunting was never her favorite activity so she would always zone out whenever her mother would try to teach her anything about it. often times she could be found in a field alone when she was supposed to be learning.
At about the age of two Charlotte's mother passed away leaving her all alone. With no way to feed herself since she never payed attention to the hunting classes her mother gave she began to starve. On the brink of death she began to venture out of the woods, too weak to even attempt to catch anything she began sneaking through the village trying to find any scrap of anything she could find.
One evening while trying to find something to eat in the back of a bakery (one of her favorite places to search for food) a door opened and a very tall man walked out into the alley with a trash can to dump the scraps for the day. Charlotte tried to run away but there was a dead end, the man just stared at her then seeing how hungry she was he reached into the trash can and pulled out half a slice of bread and offered it to her. After she took the bread she realized that humans we're as bad as her mother had always told her.
After the day in the alley with the man that gave her the bread she began to return more and more frequently until it became party of her day to day life. Slowly the man would introduce her to new and more friendly people all who loved to give her things and pet her and seamed to want to become her friend. Charlotte has been there ever since and enjoys her life, even if she doesn't live with her own kind.
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by alien sailor » Thu Nov 01, 2012 2:54 am
Forever a Lurker wrote:Username:
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Kennel that you are applying for:
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Preferred critic:
Solanum? I don't have a huge preference, just who ever is online.
What do you wish to get out of this critique?
I'd really like to know which parts of it are good/liked so I know what to do for future forms and I'd also like to know if there are any small details to improve on. If maybe some icons/more pictures would help or something. Just little things to boost my chance and maybe if possible the estimated chance I have of getting her. It's still a major WIP, but I'd like to know how I'm doing so far.
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by Solanum » Thu Nov 01, 2012 3:17 am
I'm currently playing pokemon x3
But sure, I'll get some crit done for you c:
Edit;//
Took a look and I'll try but I'm not sure how helpful I'll be.
I'm more of a history person, and personalities are my weak point, but I can try and help.
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I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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by Folmes » Thu Nov 01, 2012 3:37 am
>June< wrote:Username:
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Kennel that you are applying for:
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Preferred critic [any judge or sub-judge including myself is a valid request for critic. Please put 'any judge/subjudge' or something along those lines in this section if you do not have a preference]:
Any judge
What do you wish to get out of this critique? [What do you want us to let you know? How can we help you improve your form? Would you like advic on the contents, the length, the name of the character? How harsh should we be on you?]:
Critique on it in general and how I can inprove anything on it, brutally honest
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by Syra » Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:12 pm





Username: SyraKennel #: 282Use: If I were to win Avisa he would be a beloved OC of mine.
Most of my art of him would have to be traditional as since
coming to college I usually only draw in classes, but he would
be getting art from me that I'd hopefully find a way to scan in.
I would also make him a pet on Subeta where I'd be able to
interact with him a lot and where I'd make a page like one of
these [x + x] for him. (Both of those profiles are completely
by me). I'd also plan on RPing with him when I found the time.
I'll probably also order a lot of art for him since he is such a
pretty boy. o3oNotes: OMG college, why must you take away all my time! :P
Round one adoption form

Name: Avisa
»Meaning- Sky, Ocean, King, Life Giver
»Reasons: There are two main reasons I chose this name for him.
1- It is similar to his original name in meaning and is as unique.
2-All of the meanings of this name come together into who and
what he is, the way it fit my idea for him perfectly amazed me.Gender: MaleSpecies: Fallen Guardian AngelSpecific Breed: A Red Panda Ocean GuardianHis Sin: LoveNature: Loyal & Withdrawn

Gentle: Avisa's nature has always had a gentle side to it in everything that he does
and all he will likely ever do. In every situation he will seek out the peaceful
way to solve an issue. He never wanted to cause pain or distress to anything
or anyone before and after the suffering he caused when he fell, he avoids
violence and harshness at all cost, if not for the sake of other beings anymore,
then to protect himself from the pains of his own crimes.Withdrawn: Ever since falling and losing his love, Avisa has avoided others,
especially when he might become attached to them in some way. He does not
reveal aspects of himself to other easily and rather distracts himself with his
holy duties that he continues to carry out in hopes that one day he will redeem
himself for what he has done and be reunited with his heavenly home and his
one true love.Loyal: Even though he hath fallen, Avisa still aligns himself with his holy father,
continuing his duties that he has carried out since the beginning of time. Once
he has become a friend to poeple, he would never abandon them short of their
own betrayal, even in situations where they would rather be left alone to deal with
it themselves. At the moment though his first loyalty, besides that to his love, is
to his ocean which he must protect from the growing influences of human behavior.Bitter: Despite the fact that he has withdrawn from showing outward
emotion and is still loyal to his holy homeland and his duties, Avisa has a dark
bitter pit in his heart, a place that is still half hollow from his losses. His bitterness
is directed at himself as much as at anyone else for what happened. He is likely
to show this bitterness in his words and body motions if not in his specific actions.
He does not tolerate words against what he did well from others either since he has
already said most of these words to himself.Unbalanced: Due to this bitterness deep inside of Avisa, he has become
highly unbalanced. His once gentle and rarely used voice can now turn aggressive
within a short moment and one word. His gentle, studious care for the ocean can
suddenly turn to violent storms and sorrow on the drop of a pin. If he seems in too
calm of a mood, it is best to be careful, for it is usually when he is calmest that
one is balanced precariously in the eye of the storm of his personality.Insecure: Avisa has realized that he is unstable and that he is no longer the same
as he once was. He does not like the way he has changed and he wishes that he
could go back to what he once was, but is uncertain if he will ever be able to do
that. This causes him to be very unsure of himself and insecure. This is one of
the reasons he has withdrawn into himself, to protect others from his dissemblance
as much as to protect himself because he feels he can no longer trust himself.Cryptic: Strange, cryptic prohpecies once hung over Avisa's head, and in a slightly
ironic way, he has now grown to speak in an almost cryptic manner. He tries to
give little away in his words, for the less one knows, or so he feels, the safer they
are. 

{When fate has a plan for you, you cannot escape.}Avisa was an angel of "The Lord", the whole cosmos. An angel who had a very specific
job, to protect the spirits, life, and balance of the ocean. His wise, older sister, one of four
guardians of the moon, was known to sometimes be blessed by visions of the future. Early in
Avisa's existence she received a prophecy of The Lord about him. She sought him out on the
night of a full moon on a beach. The tide was in, spraying up cold starlight onto their skin and
wings. The moon hung ominously overhead, and in what might have been a beautiful night, dark
words of fate were spoken. "Avisa, be wary, for love will damn you." Avisa heeded his
sister's words, and was wary of love, but the world was young and the spirits new. It would take
many, many eons for his fate to find him. Eons in which an innocent soul is quick to forget such
evil words.{Be wary, for love will damn you.}In Avisa's long and tiring work, a confusing and dark prophecy was soon to be forgotten.
Life was peaceful, but the duties of guarding the oceans was much larger than just peace. Avisa
was never short of work to do: guiding the spirits of the dead onward, cleansing the natural chaos
of the ocean, and watching over as his domain was shaped anew by the shaping of the land. Creatures
left the sea for the land and some creatures came back. But the strangest of all to return, were
those who did not really and fully return to his waters: humans. They sought out his world, to
fish and to venture, to play on the edges of his reality, on beaches and in ships. On occasion he
would watch over their spirits when the died in the wide ocean, their boats toppled against rocky
cliffs and swallowed by the waves of storms.
One day, a ship ran into another, but not in the way Avisa had seen before on occasion, whence
they crashed into each other. Rather, one ship, the swifter one, pulled along side the other
and began to rain large metal balls on it like lightening from the sky. Then men from the swifter
ship boarded the other, and set it ablaze, stealing from it bits of metal and destroying precious
lives. Avisa was helpless to interfere, and even if he could, despite the horrors of the scene,
he felt as though it were not his place. Humans were not his to guard. So Avisa turned away from
the evil scene, and sought the calm depths below.
A few hours later, curiosity and duty brought him back. There were spirits to be guided on. As he
gathered them together for their journey, he found another, flickering faintly by her body. Avisa
urged her to go with the others, knowing she would not last long in the freezing waters with only
the barrel which she clung to numbly for life. The girl looked at him, her spirit flickering lightly.
"Then let death find me. I will not come to him without a fight." The sharp words came
from a spirit so faint that Avisa was surprised she had the energy to make them. He saw to the
willing and released spirits' departure, but then felt uncertain. What should he do about the girl?
She would soon die too. Avisa decided to wait by her side, preparing to guide her spirit when it
was freed from her body.
He waited through the whole night until false dawn showed on the horizon, but she never passed
on, never took the last breath he kept expecting to hear. Instead, she clung to life like a barnacle to a
rock. Avisa felt a strange feeling of admiration at her stubbornness to live. It was then that he did
what he had never done before. He saved her from a fated death, or so he though. He led her
barrel to a beach nearby, then drug her up onto the sand, in a spot that would soon be warmed by
the sun in the hours to come. He turned to leave her, to return to his home, his domain, when she
lifted her eyelids and looked at him. Though she was half dead, her eyes sparkled with gratitude and
something else. "Are you the one? The one that will save me? You-you must be..." He voice was
so faint, he hardly caught the words as she drifted off into a sleep, but they seemed strange to him.
Of course he had saved her! But why had she said it like that? He decided it must have been the
ocean water and trauma getting to her head and took it as a compliment. Knowing that she was safe,
for now, Avisa felt as though a weight were lifted from him and he shot off, back to the place where
he belonged.
Every moment after that though found the weight returning, stronger and stronger, like an anchor,
slowing him down drawing him back towards the beach where he had left her. He continuously found
himself wondering if she was even still alive. When the thought came to him that she might not
be, he felt as though a jelly fish had wrapped its tentacles around something deep inside his chest,
and stung it all over until it swelled painfully. Unable to escape this strange new feeling, Avisa told
himself that he would check on her once more. He found himself returning to the beach with many
times the speed he had left it with. The sun was only just reaching its zenith when he returned to
the sandy shores on which he had left the girl. Nothing remained where she had been but slowly
drying sand in the shape of a curled body. Avisa told himself that was a good sign. She had found
the strength to get up or one of her kind had found her. But deep in his chest, his stinging and
aching had eased only enough to turn into a bitter feeling he still could not name.
He stared at the shore for only a moment, trying to reconcile the emotions swaying through him
like the tides, when movement caught his attention from the corner of his eye. He turned to see
an old woman, her fingers clutching tightly to a stick on which she leaned. Her silver hair was frayed
and the clouding of her eyes told him that she would not easily see him, nor recognize his wings, but
she addressed him clearly. "Thank you, oh ocean lord. We are grateful to have our Isha to us, but
do you know what you have begun?" Her unseeing eyes suddenly focused on him and her voice
took on a tone that reminded Avisa of his sister and caused his skin to crawl as she repeated words
he had not heard since the earth was new. "Be wary, oh lord of the seas, if you follow your heart.
Your love may save her, but it will damn you beyond her reach." {Your love may save her...}Avisa, stunned by the woman's words, drawn back up from the depths of his past to loom
over his mind once more, said nothing. Instead of asking her what she meant, he turned and fled
back into the ocean. He wanted to go back to watching over his home, seeing to the birth of new
life, the death of old, the weather. And yet, he continued to think of that shore. He continued to
wonder about that girl, Isha. Thinking her name made his skin crawl in an unpleasant way, but
drew butterflies to his gut and left him breathless. He told himself that he was treading dangerous
waters to think of her if she was the love that his sister's prophecy had referred to. Being an entity
whose free will was only to be exercised within his duties, Avisa had no real idea of what love could
be, but from what he felt in those days after saving the girl, he grew to decide love must mean pain.
Coming to that conclusion, he had to wonder if avoiding the girl, and therefore avoiding the pain,
would be the way that love would damn him. It was when he thought of this, that he resolved to give
their prophetic love a chance.
He drifted towards that shore line so often in the days to come that it was a wonder that he was able
to comply with any of his duties throughout the rest of the oceans, much less all of them. Finally,
about twelve days after he had saved her life, Avisa spotted the girl on the shore. She sat on the
sun warmed sands, just close enough to the surf for her toes to be submerged with every lap. Her
waist length hair, the color of chestnuts, drifted on the soft wind coming of the sea, her face bathed
in the spray, forcing her to squint to keep the salty water out of her eyes. Her olive skin was lit
gently by the sun. In that moment, Avisa was reminded of his heavenly home land, his home second
only to his ocean.
Suddenly, Avisa did not know what to do. He was clad in a robe of sea-foam, his golden wings
tucked tightly against his back. He wondered if she would even see him. Mortals and creatures
normally did not. When he gave and took life from the ocean life, they seemed to never notice him.
But this girl had seen him once before, though she had been very close to death...
He didn't have to wonder much longer though because, as he neared the beach, his waist just
above the swaying waves, she spotted him. They were both still for a long time, just staring at
one another. Time slowed and it felt to Avisa that it was many hours before she smiled at him
and waved, even though the sun had not moved through the sky. In a bit of a trance, Avisa
walked up with the surf to the place where she sat and stood awkwardly above her as she
stared up at him. Her smile didn't fade though and she patted the sand next to her in an
invitation to sit. "Here, swimming all the time must be tiring. Why don't you sit and
watch the waves with me?"
Avisa had watched the waves for many eons, yet, sitting there with Isha, Avisa felt as
though he had never seen just how beautiful the tides were. The way they rose up along
the shore to splash down into foam and sea spray against her feet entranced him. They
sat together there on the beach until the sun had nearly reached the horizon behind them.
They didn't say anything in all that time, but as their shadows reached out far into the ocean
until they disappeared among the waves, Isha turned to him. "Thank you. For saving me.
Wise woman Natika told my mother when I was born that I was cursed. She told my mother,
'This child has a doom upon her that only her love will save her from.' My mother and
Nakita have never let me forget those words... I've lived my life fearing when this doom
would snatch my life away. When those pirates attacked my father's merchant ship, I thought
for sure that those words were coming true... but I couldn't let myself give up..."
She trailed off as she stared out at the ocean for a long moment before continuing. "Father
didn't want me to go without him... he said that a merchant route run was no place for a young
lady, but he let me go because he knows how much I love the ocean... I've always loved it,
ever since I was a very young child." She turned to him and smiled such a soft, sad little
smile that he felt the place that had been stung by the invisible jellyfish inside of him squeeze
tightly and he found it hard to breath. "Who would have known that the ocean was my love
that would save me? That is why I came here today. I wanted to thank you for saving me. I am
so glad to have that horrible prophecy fulfilled and over with. I know now that the love of which
it spoke was you, you who represent the ocean fully and entirely. I am glad I got to meet you...
I almost wish this wasn't the only time we will speak."
It was in that moment that Avisa realized that the old woman who had told him yet more of his
prophecy had never told his part to Isha. The girl was under the impression that her doom was
gone and that she would never see him again. Besides the fact that the thought of never seeing
her again brought the stinging feeling back threefold, he also knew deep inside his soul,
from the way his skin crawled at the words even now, that her doom was far from over. That
meant that he had not yet saved her... Such a strong need to get closer to her and protect her
over came him then, that he drew in a sharp breath. "Why does it have to be the only time?[b]"
He asked, needing her to know somehow that he wanted to see her again. No, not just again,
but every day until he could be sure he had saved her from whatever terrible doom hung over her
head. He had never felt such a longing, such an overwhelming need to do something.
Surely that was a sign that what he was doing was the will of the lord.
Isha looked at him with half smothered hope smoldering in her eyes. "[b]B-because, you are
a spirit... lord of the ocean!" A flush was coming to her cheeks and a flash of fear crossed
through the hope in her eyes.
"What does that matter?" He asked, giving into a wish he had been harboring all day
and reaching out to stroke her cheek gently with the tips of his fingers. Her cheeks felt
as warm as the baked sand under his hands and they flushed at his touch, but her eyes
darted away and she scooted away from him.
"I-I have to go now... it is... getting late..." She said, standing and turning away from
him. She began to dash away, presumably back towards her home, but at the crest of the hill
she had hurridly climbed, she turned and looked back at him, hesitating for but a moment before
disappearing over the other side. Avisa stared after her, wondering what he had done to
scare her...{This child has a doom upon her...}To be continued when I have time...
[Synopsis of what's to come: Avisa gets a bit infatuated/stalkerish. Isha tries to avoid him
but he still tries to keep an eye on her even after she flat out tells him to leave her alone because
she doesn't want to cause him any trouble. He is confused by this and seeks out the wise woman to
ask her why Isha seems to think it'd be dangerous for him to spend time with her. He learns that
no one in town except for Isha herself believe her father is the man married to her mother.
Because of this everyone has always treated her badly and anyone who associates with her.
Isha always thought it was because of the prophecy hanging over her, but the wise woman tells
Avisa that there are other reasons besides rumors and prophecies for people to avoid her. When
Avisa tries to get more out of the woman though, she refuses to say anything else and turns him
away.
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Avisa is worried now about how he is supposed to protect the girl, still feeling that it his duty to
watch out for her, and certain he can keep any love they have from causing harm to the other.
The next time he sees Isha, he tells her he just wants to talk with her from time to time. She
reluctantly agrees and they start meeting on the beach once a day at sunset. Basically fall in
love part.
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Avisa starts feeling conflicted about his growing love, no longer sure if what he is doing is
right. He prays for a message, something to tell him what to do. When he turns around an
angel, so beautiful it is painful to look at him, comes to speak with Avisa. Avisa confesses
his fears that his love might be against the Lord's will. He says he is no longer sure if his
destiny really is to have a future with Isha. He is afraid of hurting her. The angel comforts
Avisa by placing a hand on his shoulder and telling him, of course his love is the lord's will.
Not only would the lord not give him these feelings if they were wrong, but he says that
Isha is his daughter and he had never regretted what he and her mother had.
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Avisa is relieved of his fears about his love for Isha and he confides in her that he has had
a sign that their love is right. The ecstatic couple don't question the strangely straight
forward message from an angel and Avisa doesn't think to tell Isha that the angel said he
was her father because he knows how much she loves her mortal father. However as they
try to form a life together, Avisa starts to notice that Isha has strange habits, almost...
demonic habits. She doesn't seem to realize them, but they disturb him and he begins to
worry again about what doom hangs over her.
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One day, Isha meets Avisa on the beach, in a happier mood than normal. She tells him that
she is pregnant. Avisa is overwhelmed with happiness. He promises to find a way to come
live with her and begins to further neglect his duties as guardian angel of the ocean. That
night he left the oceans to stay with her in her home on the land. When he did not return to
the seas within an hour though, storms began to rage. A horrible hurricane came to the land,
leaving the village in ruins and revealing that Avisa was with Isha in her home. The village
accused him of being a demon and of tempting Isha. They dragged him out into the street
and tried to stone him and Isha. He guards her with his wings, though they are horribly beaten
by the rocks, and demands to know how they could claim him to be a demon when he stands
winged before them. Being a fairly young angel, he was not around to see the fall of his elders
and did not know what the villagers told him, that the fallen still bore their wings and that
only they would dare lay with a mortal woman. Avisa stutters, then cries out about the angel
that had come to him, even then realizing the truth that Isha's father was a fallen angel, a
demon. The wise woman calls the villagers off, but Avisa, stunned by the sins he has committed,
flees the village, afraid to look Isha in the eyes and know what she must think of him now.
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Avisa stays in the ocean, hiding from Isha for only a day, fighting his love for her and fearing
what he has done. He is afraid that he may have doomed her. However after almost a full day
he cannot stay away and he seeks her out, though he is careful to stay near the sea this time.
He finally hears her, weeping on the beach. He runs up to her and finds that she is badly
beaten and bruised. She says that when the wise woman had went away for a few moments
some of the men had begun to beat her. She clings to him as he notices her dress, wet from
the lapping waters, is red with blood. She is losing the baby. For a moment he is relieved
that no child will have to suffer from his sins as his love has suffered for them. He clutched
her and wished with all his heart there was something he could do. She then looks at him and
asks if what he said about her real father was true. He nods. She sobs into his shoulder then
stands. She condemns herself and says he'd be better off without her. He promises her he
wouldn't be, but she just shakes her head and goes back to see the wise woman under his
demands that she get her wounds looked at.
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A few days later, Avisa sensed distress in the creatures of the sea near the beach he always
met Isha at. Still wary of burdening Isha even more by seeing her again, he went to the
beach only to find Isha's body floating in the waves. He grabbed her in his arms and waded
for the shore, desperate to save her, but she was already gone. At first he thought she had
given up her life, but then he saw a message in a bottle on the shore next to a heart drawn in
the sand next to his name. As he reached for it, he was suddenly in a very bright and calm
place. He was in heaven... called back suddenly to his heavenly home. Isha stood before him,
next to his lunar sister. Isha let out a cry of joy and tackled him with a hug, but his sister
looked upon them both with a heavily pitying gaze. She gently pulls Isha back, then looks at
her brother. She tells him that Isha will be safe with her in heaven. After having learned who
her father was, Isha had prayed for forgiveness of her sire and for cleansing of her blood.
The only way to save her was for her to be baptized. The wise woman had meant to do the
ceremony, but near the end, some of the men from the village had come and drown her.
Then she told her brother something he never thought he'd hear. "You saved your lover,
but in doing so you have sought your own damnation. You may not set foot here again
and you may no longer bear the shape of our lord. Brother, I cast you from heaven and
from your form. We have seen the danger of allowing you fallen to keep it."
Then he was beside the message in the bottle again, but his outstretched hand had
turned into a paw. He had been transformed into a new form, a form closer to that
of his soul, but one he was not used to all the same. Terrified and heartbroken, he
fled into the seas. Later he came back for the message. Someone or something had made
it into a pendant on a necklace and he managed to slip it on. In the years to come, humans
began polluting and invading his beloved home, and at first he felt he should stop them
from entering his domain forcefully and for a while, he sent disasters to strike ships now
and then on purpose. The humans built their ships better and better though so as to
protect themselves. Then they built one so great, they deemed it Titanic. He normally
left the larger ones alone, as they often carried women and children, and he left this
one alone too, in fact he tried to ignore it. However when it crashed on an iceberg that
he had not been around to move away, spilling children and woman and men over its
edges, he watched in horror as so many died, freezing or drowning. That one night,
he loathed his domain. It could be so cruel and had taken so much from these people
as it had him. Then he realized that he had been no better in sending storms and waves
after the ships that held men. From that moment on, he became determined to protect his
ocean while leaving the humans alone. He did not have the power to change enough
to protect or harm them as he was then anymore anyways.]


»Art of Dying- Crime
»DHT- Listen to Your Heart
»t.A.T.u- All the Things She Said
»t.A.T.u- All About Us
»Tiffany Giardina- Hurry Up and Save Me
»Imagine Dragons- Radioactive
»Trading Yesterday- Love Song Requiem
»Trading Yesterday- Just a Little Girl
»Shinedown- If you Only Knew
»Groove Coverage- Force of Nature
»30 Seconds to Mars- Hurricane
»Red Jumpsuit Apparatus- Cat and Mouse
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»Dead by April- Sorry for Everything
»Dead by April- Promise Me


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by BPeppers » Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:05 pm
Hey everyone - I love you all, but I'm quitting CS. Here, take these delightful characters. They mean a lot to me.

By Howling in the Rain
By Solfeggio
By TessaKitty

By me.
Above image by Zanjux
Username: BPeppers
Name: Joy
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Name
-Keep Gender
-Keep species similar.
-DO NOT let her collect dust
-She's my fursona, but since I'm quitting I won't use her anymore so she's NOT YOUR FURSONA/RELATED TO YOUR FURSONA/FRIENDS WITH YOUR FURSONA... no.
-Keep the song lyrics on her back. They're to "Careful" by "Paramore"
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by me, but I don't really care if you don't mention that or if you do.Round one donation form
Above image by BK13.
Image of him with his friend owned by ~Switch Blade~
Username: BPeppers
Name: Dhananjay
Gender: Male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Name
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by BK13 <3Round one donation form
Above image by Spotty.
Of her with her friend owned by riocochet ; . By me.
Username: BPeppers
Name: Aurora Charlotte
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let her collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by SpottyRound one donation form[img][img]http://i589.photobucket.com/albums/ss340/khnite/Dpcustom-2.png?t=1349038908[/img]
[/img]
Above image by Khnite.
SAVE THE PICTURE.
Ref and art by Albino.Broccoli <3
Username: BPeppers
Name: Aero
Gender: male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-Save the images please.
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by Albino.Broccoli.Round one donation form
Art above by Aeolus
Ref by me. Lines by EmberWolf
Username: BPeppers
Name: Revolve
Gender: male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
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by Zeee » Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:06 pm
BPeppers wrote:Hey everyone - I love you all, but I'm quitting CS. Here, take these delightful characters. They mean a lot to me.

By Howling in the Rain
By Solfeggio
By TessaKitty

By me.
Above image by Zanjux
Username: BPeppers
Name: Joy
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Name
-Keep Gender
-Keep species similar.
-DO NOT let her collect dust
-She's my fursona, but since I'm quitting I won't use her anymore so she's NOT YOUR FURSONA/RELATED TO YOUR FURSONA/FRIENDS WITH YOUR FURSONA... no.
-Keep the song lyrics on her back. They're to "Careful" by "Paramore"
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by me, but I don't really care if you don't mention that or if you do.Round one donation form
Above image by BK13.
Image of him with his friend owned by ~Switch Blade~
Username: BPeppers
Name: Dhananjay
Gender: Male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Name
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by BK13 <3Round one donation form
Above image by Spotty.
Of her with her friend owned by riocochet ; . By me.
Username: BPeppers
Name: Aurora Charlotte
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let her collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by SpottyRound one donation form[img][img]http://i589.photobucket.com/albums/ss340/khnite/Dpcustom-2.png?t=1349038908[/img]
[/img]
Above image by Khnite.
SAVE THE PICTURE.
Ref and art by Albino.Broccoli <3
Username: BPeppers
Name: Aero
Gender: male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-Save the images please.
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by Albino.Broccoli.Round one donation form
Art above by Aeolus
Ref by me. Lines by EmberWolf
Username: BPeppers
Name: Revolve
Gender: male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design.
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aurora and dhananjay are so beautiful <3
it's a shame you're leaving :c you'll be missed.
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by alien sailor » Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:08 pm
BPeppers wrote:Hey everyone - I love you all, but I'm quitting CS. Here, take these delightful characters. They mean a lot to me.

By Howling in the Rain
By Solfeggio
By TessaKitty

By me.
Above image by Zanjux
Username: BPeppers
Name: Joy
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Name
-Keep Gender
-Keep species similar.
-DO NOT let her collect dust
-She's my fursona, but since I'm quitting I won't use her anymore so she's NOT YOUR FURSONA/RELATED TO YOUR FURSONA/FRIENDS WITH YOUR FURSONA... no.
-Keep the song lyrics on her back. They're to "Careful" by "Paramore"
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by me, but I don't really care if you don't mention that or if you do.Round one donation form
Above image by BK13.
Image of him with his friend owned by ~Switch Blade~
Username: BPeppers
Name: Dhananjay
Gender: Male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Name
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by BK13 <3Round one donation form
Above image by Spotty.
Of her with her friend owned by riocochet ; . By me.
Username: BPeppers
Name: Aurora Charlotte
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let her collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by SpottyRound one donation form[img][img]http://i589.photobucket.com/albums/ss340/khnite/Dpcustom-2.png?t=1349038908[/img]
[/img]
Above image by Khnite.
SAVE THE PICTURE.
Ref and art by Albino.Broccoli <3
Username: BPeppers
Name: Aero
Gender: male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Gender
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-Save the images please.
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by Albino.Broccoli.Round one donation form
Art above by Aeolus
Ref by me. Lines by EmberWolf
Username: BPeppers
Name: Revolve
Gender: male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption:
-Keep Species similar.
-Don't let him collect dust or I'll find you...
-No changes to the design.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Designed by me.Round one donation form
OMG, Revolve is beautiful!! I love, love, love him!
my icon and matching signature art were made for me by Sarilain. they are not for your use.
superwholock is trash
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by Solanum » Fri Nov 02, 2012 9:51 pm
Guys...
Please don't quote the large image heavy post...
But definitely interested in Dhananjay <3
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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