Darko Forest

[jarvis]

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Username: Rue
Adoption Number: 16
Name you'll give it: Xero
Reason why you want it: She's gorgeous! I love her design, and I really want to see her developed.
Describe its personality: Xero is a kind, gentle creature. She would never hurt anyone.
Story: WIP
Will you be using it any were else?: Yes!

[Horneddragon]

Hey guys creature 16 is not up for adoption he is a prototype for the next series of lineart. Animations are not easy but he doesn't look to bad for what he is .
What do you think?

he's not up for adoption

[jarvis]

Awww, then forget my form...

[Horneddragon]

I'm sure Sparrow will make more/ let him go up for adoption eventually

[Aiki]

Application Forum



Username:
Aiki

Adoption Number:
#15

Name you'll give it:
Acer
Means Sharp, Hard and Keen in Latin

Theme Song:A thousand Years Christina Perri
Reason why that suits is that I listened to this and could just picture her flying against the breeze. Wind ruffling her feathers. While I was writing the Story I was singing this and the words kept flowing and I’m quite happy with what I have done.

Reason why you want it:
Well, I am determined to have one of these gorgeous creatures. When I saw this one I loved its speckled snow look. Her gorgeous blue and black look gives her the appearance of something dark but really it’s what’s inside that matters.

Describe its personality:
Fighting, killing and hunting are the things Acer is good at. Through the dark colours and deep eyes is a badge of honour as far as she is concerned, she keeps a lot to herself.
Acer is very loyal faithful and dependable. She places great importance in honesty and integrity. She is the one who you can trust with anything. While she usually takes thing seriously, she also has an offbeat sense of humour and can be a lot of fun- especially with friends.
Acer has an excellent ability to take any task and define it, organize it, plan it, and implement it through to completion. She is a very hard worker, who does not allow obstacles to get in the way of performing her duties. She doesn’t usually give herself enough credit for her achievements, seeing her accomplishments simply as the natural fulfilment of her obligations.
Acer has a tremendous amount of potential. Capable, logical, reasonable, and effective. She has a deeply driven desire to promote security and peaceful living.

Story:
It was dark and I could hear the small whispers of the humans walking around the area in search of the new creatures that would be arriving. I had gotten here early and had hidden myself away from the chaos. I was stretching out my wings ready to take flight when a small twig snapped and someone came out of the trees. I felt the vibrations in the ground and made a mental picture of a person standing before me waiting silently for my move.

She was young and oh so mysterious, deep blue eyes shining, her wings glowing a soft silver in the moonlight. She was stretching out her wings when I stepped back onto a stick and it snapped, her head whipped around and stared at me I slowly stepped out of my hiding place and walked towards her. Her wings slowly retracted as if she was trying not to move to quickly but her gaze never wavered from my own.
I hadn’t realised she was blind till I was closer her eyes where pale slightly blue, she seemed to be waiting for something to happen.
' I wonder if she can see me in her mind’s eye, maybe she feels the vibration' I thought as I slowly bent down and snapped another stick to my right, her ears twitched and her eyes instantly fled to where my hands were on the stick.
"Its okay, i wont hurt you. Your going to be fine" i murmmerd as i placed my hand on her beak and she closed her eyes.


Her touch was warm never hard but soothing. She didnt push waiting for my next move weather i leave her or to stay. My heart beat faster as she murmmerd soft sweet words of colours and promises. I didnt know how to be brave after spending so many years alone in the darkness. i asked my self how can i love when im afraid to fall? but listening to her standing there alone, all my doubt suddenly goes away somehow. I believed i was one step closer to not being afraid. I stood up to my full height and bent forward lowering my front legs so she may climb upon me. I waited silently waiting for her move

She seemed at first as though she was bowing to me but i realised that she was waiting for me to climb up. I felt a smile slide across my face as i silently laughed joyously. My day started out as a walk out into the dark forest and now a creature no... A griffon has asked me to ride. I slowly went beside her and stroked her back before hoisting myslef onto her soft back.

I felt a strong kick of adreniline pump through my veins as she climbed upon me and murmmered many thank-yous and praises. I stretched out my wings and made my way out of the woods and into the clearing. My feet making enough vibrations for me to see my surroundings. A grassy field large enough for me to take off into the air, and with that last image i reared back and took off into the sky wings pumping

i nearly fell off as she reared back and ran before leaping into the vast dark sky. I hear the yelling of the others in search of the mysterious creatures to come. There were many "How did she find one?" and "Blast! I was here first that sould be my griffon" i smiled i was glad i had stumbled away from the groups and onto my own trail.
I remembered a song and started to sing it...

One step closer...
I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling dont be afraid i have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more...
Time stand still, beauty and all she is
I will be brave i will not let anything take away
whats standing in front of me
Every breath, every hour has come to this...
One step closer...
I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling dont be afraid i have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more...


To be continued....

Just a little note the italicised paragraphs is Acer and the Normal print is the human girl. The last Italicised part is singing (Human)

Will you use it anywhere else? of course! I would have loads and loads of artwork for her and I would write a separate story for her.

[Redsparrow]

*Screams and pulls hair out* animations are kicking my butt! You guys better love rose He should be done in 30mins or so.... He will be up for adoption once I work out his kinks. But after Rose and the one thats up right now I think that animations will have to be something that you pay for after winning the pet if you want them to blink or "breath".

[Irios Atelis]

oooh! Can I by an animation for my boy to have the purple aura 'swirling' around him?

[Redsparrow]

I will eventually have more animated options but right now I only have animations for the new line art. I will eventualy work on older pieces.

[Irios Atelis]

Cool, let me know when your ready

~Cheers!

[Redsparrow]

hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!
that is pathetic but here you guys go, this is what I spent 3 hours on.... the breath turned out terrible so until I figure out how to handle the pixilization there will be NO fog, fire, magic swirls or breath animations. But I do know how to do a glow effect and move things..


.... there is a random dot that shows up on the rose pattern.. lol!!!!!!!!!

There is a new creature up! I will re-size it and finish the story later. Sorry very flustered...