Daeet adoptables | MOVED; LINK INSIDE

[Hyeme]

*Laughs* Thats fine. I have sleep issues so im going be up for an hour or two more anyway.

[Ashenjay]

MALE JUDGING RESULTS!
Male Number 1

70% Banjo: Good job at reasoning; I like how you put numbers ^w^ The personality and history are a BIG wip, though… but the start was very nice. Also, from next time can you use a bolder color? Because light gray is hard to read~
73% Spartan: Nice name, nice reasoning; though the personality and history part were not done ^^; sorry.
80% WINNER = Dawnbreeze: Hmm, perhaps in the future don’t boldface everything- it’s also hard to read ^^; otherwise, the names were all nicely pondered about. His personality and history are descriptive without being ridiculously long, and has a nice feel to it.
77% Hyme: The reasoning, history, personality can all be longer, sorry. The poem was very nice, though, and if it were longer your form will have been epic.
Male Number 2

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82% Dedicated: You gave him a thoughtfully thought out name, great job! His personality and history could possibly be better, but I still can tell you put some effort ^^ Also, I like how it didn’t end, but left some feeling of mystery at the end. Good job~
87% WINNER = Kale: I like how you put the meaning into the name. Also, the personality is well described and shows almost everything. The history in the form of narration is very unique ^^
X% Flicka: You can’t just say ‘I want a properly adopted daeet’; you need to say WHY EXACTLY this daeet feels special to you. Tehre are many people who feel special with a certain daeet, and they are the ones who will get it; not just somebody who wants to adopt one. Sorry, Flicka. Also the form is a large wip.
Male Number 3

78% Saber: lovely history. Pete, Saber- you all managed to make them ‘realistic’ characters, and I enjoyed reading it. Well done! And the colored titles are good, too. But, I think his personality is a bit too short and can use some description. Plus I couldn’t see why EXACTLY you wanted THIS daeet, not another one.
WINNER = 86% Ashy: The Reason part was well done; your description for him, how you fell for his awesomeness, was very well described; and I could tell you really, really wanted him ^^ Plus, the reasoning behind the name was relevant and made perfect sense. (/plus I like that name -shot-) The new technique for the personality is great; you added a small story to describe each trait! Sadly, though, I think you ran out of time and only could do the ‘gentle’ part XC. The history is intriguing, but…a bit rushed, you know- considering it was on an Ipod it is impressive! I WANNA SEE THE STORY >:3
72% DaWolf: Hmm; for daeets are individual characters, you need to respect their very being, not them in general. You can’t say ‘I want one because I just want another character’. His personality was short though well described, yet the history was a bit too short.
X% Banjo: Remember, just apply for one C: This one wasn’t quite finished.
X% Nix: Whoa, huge wip!

[*Blackberry*]

Done judging and posting the winners for female one, two and three.


Female one goes to Ashenjay.


Female two goes to Vikitrow.


Female three goes to Blackberry.

Am I dreaming?! OMG! I will love Lilly forever!!

Oh dear, those form's are pure amazing. Congratulation's Blackberry, your form was much better then mine xD.

And congratulations to all the other winners ^^

Thanks Silver Soul, but I am sure you will get one for the next litter

I WON???????? WHY? >:3 It was a huge, huuuuuge wip....I'll finish that up later for my gorgeous Tarlie x3 Thank you so much! They're alla wesome!
And BB, congratulations~ after many tries you have finally gotten a beautiful female! <3 (well she's studying for an exam at the moment, but when she's back she'll be happyp~)

Thank AJ, you encouraged me alot, and congrats to you and all the winners including me .

I got to say half way through my story I cut it short XC. I was so lazy and had little time to finish so I cut it short but make try to like go along. And I got to ask Theo, was my form actully good?

[broken*]

OMG I WON!! THANK YOU SO MUCH ASHENJAY!!!! AND THEO, HE'S BEAUTIFUL, THANK YOU GUYS!!!! <3 <3 <3

[Horneddragon]

Congratulations to all of the winners <3 this litter was easily one of my favorites at it took all i had ( and a physics exam) to keep me from applying myself <3

I must say you all are getting better at crafting your forms, good job <3

[☆ star child]

Username: tillyelisha
Number of daeet you want to adopt: female 3
Reason why you want to adopt it: I tried adopting one before but My form wasn't done properly so now I wish to try adopt one of these gorgeous daeet's again!
Desired name: AshDove
Age: 3 months
Personality: AshDove is a quiet and shy Daeet.She usually plays by herself but most the time she'll just sit down and watch the others or go to sleep.She likes to chase small creatures but she gets frightened easily so she's an easy target for bully's and tricksters.
History: AshDove walked around the small clearing she called home."Papa whens Mama getting here.."she asked impatiently.Ashdove's Mama had been taken by humans but Ashdove didn't know."Soon dear soon"replied her father.His name was Kint.He was just as worried as Ashdove was."Let's go rest.."he muttered walking into the burrow.Ashdove didn't follow but she sat and cried for her Mama."Mama!"she cried loudly.Suddenly something rustled in the bushes.Ashdove froze and growled slightly.Something jumped out of the bush and grabbed her and Ashdove went unconsious.
17 Hours later..
Ashdove woke up and moaned."Where am I.."she moaned looking up.She looked around and saw many other Daeet's in small dens like she was in."Help!"she cried trying to break out.An older Daeet walked over to Ashdove and smiled."Hush my daughter hush"she whispered."I'm not your daughter!"cried Ashdove furiously charging under the strangers legs.She was grabbed roughly by the scruff and put in a larger burrow with some other Daeet's in it.They were all awake and guarded by adult Daeet's."Hey it's ok"a younger Daeet than Ashdove said."I'm Carma"he said smiling."We need to get out of here!"he whispered eagerly,mischief twinkling in his eyes."I'm Ashdove and yes we must escape"she whispered back to Carma.Ashdove sat down and yelled loudly atracting the Daeet's attention."Hush"whispered the female guarding the den.She walked over and tried hushing Ashdove while Carma managed to slip away.Ashdove stopped yelling and ran under the female's legs and outside into the bushes.Carma ran up to her and grinned."Thanks now I can go home!"he cried delightedly and he ran away.Ashdove smiled and set off to find her own family;
Where will it be used? my siggie if its not there it'll be in my Trade rules or if you allow it and I can do it,as my avatar too.
How will you use it? it will probably be on display.

[Temperance.]

;A;
I'm just....I'm in absolute shock. I can't believe I actually won my precious Faolan. I came to this thread expecting to lose. This is just....shocking. I'm so excited and amazed I'm shaking <3 he's absolutely perfect, and the instant I get to my laptop I'm working on writing up his history and personality properly. Fao deserves that at the very least <3

Thanks you so much Ashenjoy. This just made my day ;A;
And congrats to all the other winners as well :3

[*Blackberry*]

Congrats Ash^^

[Dawnbreeze10210]

Yay Thanks so much ^-^ Yeah, I reliezed it was bolded, sorry for that. My first Daeet, wonderful!

[Hyeme]

*Sigh* Congratulations. I hope to get a chance to try again for another litter. I have wanted one for ages!!

Sorry did not mean to seem rude. Sorry.