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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby parlaymars » Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:47 am

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Short Woo:
Thrift slept, unknowingly, in the branches above Medli. He awoke, startled to hear a pitiful wailing cry. "Hello? Who's there?" he asked, his voice groggy with sleep. Thinking he was back in his bed at home, he rolled over, promptly falling out of the tree. The hilt of his dagger dug into his side, and he gagged, the force from the fall having knocked the wind out of his lungs.

Thrift looked up sharply, his blue-green-gray eyes flickering. A figure, black and tan and red, slim, but seemingly strong, seemed to be wailing by the fallen log he had spent climbing on many summers ago, when he was still a boy. He snorted. The Ahz, whomever he or she was, would go back to wherever it came from and leave him and his tribe in peace. Closing his eyes, he continued to sleep.

The loud crying broke through his careful facade, and he woke, his brow clouded. He stormed over to the Ahz, shouting. "Why? Why can't you Ahz stay to yourselves! Other beings actually live around here, you know." he huffed, flicking his pale blue tail against the side of the log and placing his hand on his worn leather belt, next to the dagger. Turning away, he caught sight of the glint of something metallic at the paws of the Ahz.

"Hold still." he muttered, facing Medli and crouching at her feet. The glint he had noticed was just the claws of the Ahz, but Thift would never say 'just claws'. This Ahz was very special, he mused, pondering over the meaning of the long, dainty, dagger-like weapons on the paws of creature with the swirling black and tan and red fur. "You. You are the one. The one sent to -...." Thrift's insightful words were cut off as a figure in a robe hit him with a large, heavy rock.

His blood, as red as the Ahz's fur, was smeared on the ground as the figure began to drag him away.
Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
Firstly, i absolutely adore her :3. She is bueatiful and graceful and talented, but what i love most above everything else is her personality, which may seem a bit ironic, but i do. Her personality, though spiteful, cruel, and mean, just means she's looking for someone to trust, care, and love her for who she is. She doesn't want someone to change her, she wants to be accepted.

Also, i think she would be the PERFECT companion for my character Thrift, son of the chief of a band of Indian-like people, only the people have tails and brightly colored skin. Thrift happens to be much unlike Medli, and their personalities clash and blend like fire and ice, i think :3.

I love Medli to peices and, even if i don't get to call her mine (i hope i do! ^^) i hope she will be happy with her companion. I think that's what you say to someone you love, right? That you love them even though they belong to someone else? I think that's right........
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:29 am

JUDGING FOR THESEUS IN ONE HOUR
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby *Blackberry* » Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:26 am

Spartan, am I allowed to try for Theseus even though I am trying out for Medli?
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Sat Mar 10, 2012 12:28 pm

Sure Blackberry, I'll give everyone ten minutes to finish up their forms before I judge! :)
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby ♛ feral » Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:31 pm

{This is your 24 hour warning. Tomorrow at this time I will begin judging for Medli. <3 Cactus ;3}
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:42 pm

Theseus has seen what you have to offer, and will contemplate his options.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby *Blackberry* » Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:45 pm

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Ahzenai you are applying for:
Theseus

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Following Medli's return to Ahzen, the Vortex seemed to wake as if from a temporary slumber. The glittering swirls of the vortex became bathed in gold, the shimmering light reflecting off of the water around it brilliantly. But, as if teasing the suitors, it waited, holding back the new Ahzenai. It stayed like this a long time, the suitors watching with large eyes and the Vortex seeming to be still one more. Finally the suitors began to walk away dejectedly, and as they did a sleek, well-muscled Ahzenai leapt agressively from the Vortex, his teeth bared and claws outstretched in a menacing roar of battle. He seemed to hover in the middle of his pounce before landing, making one stride then stopping in an aggressive pose, as if waiting for someone to attack. "Theseus!" Valcyon announced from his perch, the gold Ahzenai changing his demeanor immediately. He stood straight and proud, bowing his head deeply to Valcyon. "My lord," he replied before lifting his head, turning then to the suitors. Then he bowed his head again. "Thank you all," he began, his voice deep, one of a gladiator, a soldier. "I am Theseus, and I suppose I shall take a companion, seeing all of you here to greet me." Theseus paused. "I welcome you to approach me, do not be shy. But I do have expectations; I will not leave with just anyone. It must be someone who is physically fit and keep up with me, while also being honorable. I will not take anyone with a tainted soul," he finished that last sentence with a slight snarl before regaining his bearing and sitting to await those who would approach.


I panted slightly as I ran, I was heading towards the Ahzenai cave, my long legs running as fast has it could. I dashed into the cave and was just in time to see a new Ahzenai appearing out of the vortex. I watched silently amazed, " Theseus.. " I whispered when the Ahzenai had introuduced himself. I pushed past everyone and went towards him and said, " Hi Theseus. My name is Blackberry and I am looking for an Ahzenai who is fit and active. Since you like having someone who is fit, and I am quite fit. We can go out jogging everyday for 3 hours, we do push-ups for 4 hours and have a race every afternoon. We can also do sit-ups every night for a few hours before we sleep. We can run or play catching everytime it is our breaktime. We can play anything as long as it makes us fit. Do you want to be my friend Theseus? "

EDIT: If you are not accepting anymore forms,(I posted late) then you no need count mine in.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby -A fox- » Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:19 pm

(it's not to late to apply for Medli, right? I hope so!)
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Ahzenai you're applying for: Medli
Short Woo: (2-3 paragraphs is the minimum, 5 paragraphs max)
Wandering away from the main vortex chamber, I heard crying, coming from the direction of a large lake. "Hello? Who's there?" I called, and started to run towards the sound. As I got closer, I saw her. The black Ahzenai's pelt was striped by ribbons of scarlet and pale gold, forming an exotic Egyptian-looking pattern over her slim form. "What's wrong? Can I help? Who are you?" I asked, breathless form the run. She didn't seem to hear me, so I kneeled down next to her, looking at her, concerned. "Please.. can I help?" When she still didn't answer, I leaned closer to her, trying to see her face. "My name's Calvin. Please stop crying, you'll be all right." I smiled at her encouragingly, then, not sure what to say, I started just talking for both of us. "When I'm sad, I go in my room. I can read, or listen to my music... usually I watch a movie on my laptop like Jurassic Park, I don't know why that helps cheer me up, but it does..."
After rambling on like this for a while, the highlight being a play-by-play of the scene with the raptors in the kitchen, (highlight only because I actually remembered the whole thing) I stopped. "I... don't know why I just said all that. I... er..." I looked over at my silent companion. "I would really like it... if you would come with me. I'm not sure why, I mean, you haven't said a word... but please. Please, I just don't like seeing people like you sad, would you come with me? I want you to. I want to help you and worship you and keep you safe, to protect you and make you happy." Waiting for her answer, I whispered, "I think you're beautiful."
Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
As stated previously, I think she's beautiful. Honestly, she's absolutely perfect, I couldn't imagine her being any different. I really love her personality, and I think that she would go really well together with Calvin- she's the kind of person he takes pity on, and tries to help, and I think once she pulls together again-
"She is selfish, and a bit cruel. However, deep undearneath her fur, Medli is insecure and just wants somebody to like her and take care of her. Medli is trying to take a new lease on life and be kind to those around her. It might be a little hard at first, but she is going to try. "(-Onyxwings) I think that Calvin would really be able to help her in that, it's what he wants and tries very hard to do. He would take care of her forever, and I think that she would become perfect.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Sat Mar 10, 2012 4:29 pm

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Theseus sat by the bank of the river, watching the sun as it dipped below the horizon. So many choices; he had seen quite a few suitors, and each gave a promise of something. A camaraderie, a fellow fighter, the promise of long days training and nights with restful sleep. His ears tilted back, unsure. He could picture each suitor in his mind perfectly, and with that an image of the life they promised. But to him, none of them caught his attention. He sighed, wondering if he should just stay in Ahzen. He looked downwards, still thinking. It was then the sun's rays caught off of something in the sand. Using his paw, Theseus raised the item up to his face as the sun turned the grey metal orange; it was the pair of dog tags offered to him by Laekaios. A real warrior, currently at battle? He didn't doubt any of the others who had come before, not at all, but this was so close to his own calling; Theseus would have a kinship with the man and could help in any way he could. The male Ahzenai grinned as he slipped the dog tags around his neck and stood, brushing off his fur. Theseus took a deep breath and moved off at a strong lope to find Laekaios. Said black and green Ahz wasn't very far away, he noticed, and the golden Ahzenai slowed to approach him at a nonchalant walk, almost a march. "Laekaios," Theseus said as he got closer, bowing his head respectfully as the metal tags clinked on his neck. "I would be honored to join you and your soldier companion. I'm willing to help in any way I can," Theseus paused, his red eyes lighting up and his mouth curling into a confident grin. "And I'm sure I can keep up."

Theseus has joined Cazio and Laekaios.
This was really hard, but everyone put forth a great entry and I throughly enjoyed reading them all! 8D
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Theseus makes his appearan

Postby *Blackberry* » Sat Mar 10, 2012 4:35 pm

Aww, never mind, there is still Medli and congrats whoever got Theseus^^
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