- oh wow. congratulations Ashwyn! you deserved her!
LaChromaticDragonfly wrote:This was an extremely hard choice, between three (later narrowed down to two) very, very good forms.
This one had a more suited personality for the Exo-Skeletons and I adored the story's beginning and personality (about her past life, before she got to the Tracker Dog Facility) though I think that you needed to use the given personality (Gentle Giant) more to make this the top for for #71.
Also, HornedDragon, that pixel Tracker you made was absolutely adorable. c:
I highly reccomend that you open a shop selling custom pixel works or colour-ins of 'bouncing'/animated Tracker Dog linearts, because I want one ;A; you'll get a lot of customers and I would love to order something if you do~
I would also like to tell you that you were the runner-up for #71, but I think that you needed to be more aware of the fact that (this is only for the Exo-Skeletons, if you're reading) that I *personally* prefer for them to be from the traditional Tracker Dog Facility. Though I adored your story, it might need a bit of muting down since there were unanswered questions as well as the fact that the main character seemed to jump from activity to activity unnaturally (like when she instantly fell asleep after she 'beat-up' those scientists on that chair).
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Horneddragon wrote:LaChromaticDragonfly wrote:This was an extremely hard choice, between three (later narrowed down to two) very, very good forms.
This one had a more suited personality for the Exo-Skeletons and I adored the story's beginning and personality (about her past life, before she got to the Tracker Dog Facility) though I think that you needed to use the given personality (Gentle Giant) more to make this the top for for #71.
Also, HornedDragon, that pixel Tracker you made was absolutely adorable. c:
I highly reccomend that you open a shop selling custom pixel works or colour-ins of 'bouncing'/animated Tracker Dog linearts, because I want one ;A; you'll get a lot of customers and I would love to order something if you do~
I would also like to tell you that you were the runner-up for #71, but I think that you needed to be more aware of the fact that (this is only for the Exo-Skeletons, if you're reading) that I *personally* prefer for them to be from the traditional Tracker Dog Facility. Though I adored your story, it might need a bit of muting down since there were unanswered questions as well as the fact that the main character seemed to jump from activity to activity unnaturally (like when she instantly fell asleep after she 'beat-up' those scientists on that chair).
Congratulations Ashwyn, your story far out classed my own <3
I dictated the day i made this pixel version of tracker 71 it would go to whom ever won her, so it is with great glee i give it to you :B
@ LCD, I never really though about making a custom pixel tracker thread, I may actually try it out. I am happy I made 2nd place for 71, and again i know that Ashwyn's story far out classed my own. I will consider all of the constructive criticism you gave me, and develop Cora's and any further stories i write for trackers further ^.^
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