Pound of Love - JUDGING!! 155 kennels to adopt!

[SabrinaB]

You mean these forms?
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=2269742&p=87079983&hilit=pound+of+love#p87079983

If you want I can send you a critique by PM.

Long story short (I just looked, I didn't read anything yet):
The first form looks alright based on it's length. The second and third could be expanded a little more, and a little more organized by adding blanc lines as you did with the first one.

[booklover789]

ReaperCatFanGirl#1, thanks for editing your previous post with the information needed. I would normally just send you a PM about this, but I realize that I haven't touched on this before here at the PoL, so I need to post about this so everyone can see it and know why we have this policy.
I have accepted almost all of your donations, with the exception of three of the dogs. The reason for this is that we do not accept twins of all ready owned characters, unless they are not identical. Because you didn't state in your form whether or not the characters were identical, I cannot accept them.
The reason for this is simple: if you own a character and someone else owns the identical twin, it can get confusing for adopters to know whose character is whose because their designs are identical. Also, identical designs aren't original, as they are literally copies of previously-made designs.
If you'd like to still donate these three characters, please change their designs so that they are not identical to any other design you own.

[.Foxtrot.]

-mark

[Nadine]

ReaperCatFanGirl#1, thanks for editing your previous post with the information needed. I would normally just send you a PM about this, but I realize that I haven't touched on this before here at the PoL, so I need to post about this so everyone can see it and know why we have this policy.
I have accepted almost all of your donations, with the exception of three of the dogs. The reason for this is that we do not accept twins of all ready owned characters, unless they are not identical. Because you didn't state in your form whether or not the characters were identical, I cannot accept them.
The reason for this is simple: if you own a character and someone else owns the identical twin, it can get confusing for adopters to know whose character is whose because their designs are identical. Also, identical designs aren't original, as they are literally copies of previously-made designs.
If you'd like to still donate these three characters, please change their designs so that they are not identical to any other design you own.

No i mean sisters not twins XD

You mean these forms?
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=2269742&p=87079983&hilit=pound+of+love#p87079983

If you want I can send you a critique by PM.

Long story short (I just looked, I didn't read anything yet):
The first form looks alright based on it's length. The second and third could be expanded a little more, and a little more organized by adding blanc lines as you did with the first one.

No thx! I want to know if mine are able to enter XD

[booklover789]

No i mean sisters not twins XD

Then you should have said "sisters" when you submitted the forms. You can't expect us to know what you're thinking - when giving a character to us, you MUST be as SPECIFIC as possible. If you mean "sisters," say "sisters." If you mean "twins," say "twins." If you aren't specific enough, we'll have issues like the one we have right now.

No thx! I want to know if mine are able to enter XD

Then you need to fill out a critique form and post it on the thread. Critique forms can be found on the first page of this thread. SabjeBammie has graciously offered to do one for you, so if you submit one now, I'm sure she'll do it whenever she has time.

[SabrinaB]

To anyone who wants to know if their form is 'good enough', I suggest to look at the Tips and Tricks post by clicking here. It's a little messy now, but I promise to redo it in a few days - if possible even tomorrow.

In this post is a lot of advice. It has 3 'chapters'.
1: short points that you need to keep in kind when working or overlooking your form.

2: This is more information about the form you need to fill in. It helps you give longer answers to the points you need to fill in.

3: This helps you when you are done or almost done with your form. It has some advice in case you are considering a critique, like looking at forms or previous rounds that won. I linked as an example to one of my own form that made me win a character.
Just keep in mind it has to be your form, so use your own ideas, layout, words etc. It's okay to use examples, but make it your own.
If we think you copied we will disqualify you, even if your form is very long.

If you still need help after this (or don't feel like reading it) feel free to fill out the form for a critique.
What is a critique?
Basicly it's a staff member (most of the times booklover and/or I) looking at your form. We will read every word and give you advice on how to improve your form. This is just advice! Keep in mind that it's your form, not ours. You don't have to follow our advice.
But if we advice to made the personality or history longer you better do it, else you might not win the kennel you are applying for...

Remember to always give credit if you use something that isn't yours! This also includes poems or a song text!


I hope this helps, goodluck on the forms everyone! <3 I've seen some great ones already!

[Nadine]

I want a critique but im on a new computer and cant copy and or paste

Thank you Book lover and Bammie

[Karma.]

I want a critique but im on a new computer and cant copy and or paste

I shall personally find your forms and give you a critique via PM.

[Karma.]

Thank you! i had to do one form due to my parents who are overprotective and will get on my accout and delete EACH one

Okay, awesome, I'll send it over now.
Remember, try not to post twice in a row, it may sound a little silly but it is actually against the rules! I know, crazy, right!?
But there is a little button on your previous posts that say 'edit', where you can change it as much as you like so you don't have to post a WHOLE other message. It keeps the place tidy, too! c:<

[Karma.]

I will edit that post as i knwo i have broken the rules, i have reported myself

Wow, I reckon you're the first person ever to have reported themselves!
Anyway, let's not spam the PoL any more. I've sent you over a critique - be sure to read it carefully, it could be the difference between you winning those characters or losing them.
If you need any more help, contact me, SabjeBammie or Booklover. We prefer you to contact us directly rather than posting in this thread (: