[quote="Dovepawlover"]Username: Dovepawlover
Kennel that you are applying for: 276, and 122 (276 is farther done than 122)
Preferred critic: Anyone is fine c:
What do you wish to get out of this critique?: I'm trying to do a two-sided story for the history, telling of their life in both of their views. How is it turning out so far? Did I spell anything wrong? Anything I should change or add? And would it be more interesting if they ran into their father again?
Link to form:
276, 122.plzcritiquemeomgguiz[/quote
I got this! C: