tolters | challenge thread // ideas

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welcome to canyon ridge ranch, home to my bear run tolters.
feel free to comment on the writing, but don't clog up the thread cx

main thread || breedings

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i currently have 63 points for the challenge thread.

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for my lines:

1-5 ; cairo
1) daydreamer - complete
2) amora - complete
3) rylie
4) north
5) nyx - complete

6-7 ; slit
6) nutmeg - complete
7) ahote

8 ; Wentz.
8) shade

9-40 ; Stumpy STMP
9) mella
10) doc - complete
11) shale
12) stunner - complete
13) itzpapalotl
14) trooper
15) aleks - complete
16) nial
17) kevin - complete
18) mabari
19) beezus
20) negev
21) humidor
22) skildrex
23) chief
24) mooney - complete
25) elliot - complete
26) rolser
27) dahl
28) stritag - complete
29) ora
30) felowna - complete
31) rior
32) freefall
33) drift
34) asteroth - maybe
35) ronak
36) hazza
37) kabam - complete
38) sylaise
39) incaesor - maybe
40) vystrion

41-43 ; Dopey333444
41) whisper
42) acetone
43) morpheus

44 ; RunFree
44) vintage

45-50 ; iBrevity
45) asphodel
46) salem - complete
47) bel
48) brontide
49) barachiel
50) fitcher

51 ; Sandy Hoofprints
51) einstein

52 ; lucє
52) california - complete

53-56 ; ♥ ᵈʳᵃᵍᵒᶰ ♥
53) rowan - complete
54) mocha
55) odelina
56) dira

57 ; Fire-Rose
57) lola

58 ; Bella278436
58) flo

59-60 ; Spottedleaf.
59) brooke
60) snow

61 ; gator vocals
61) delta

62-69 ; husky.
62) sierra - complete
63) balios
64) marzipan
65) mercer
66) jessie
67) salazar
68) atticus
69) heleways

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art of eel and sal; headshot and fullbody


story of how they became friends; 900 words


eel and salamander are like brother and sister, always trailing each other like lost puppies. it's pretty funny to watch the two interact, playfully tugging at the opposite's mane, nipping coats, never a bad moment between them. but it never started out that way, not at all.
sal was never really a nice spirit, he was aggressive to any living thing that came near him or his paddock. he hated others, solitary confinement was needed for this stallion. he was known for brutally hurting other horses and biting humans. one fall morning, the humans had brought another tolter in, a mare, cream in color. she was beautiful, sal couldn't deny that, but when they placed her in the paddock next to him, all of those thoughts were flooded with anger. how dare they put her in his personal space like that? the grey stallion raced over to the fence, snapping his jaws at her, squealing with aggravation. the pretty little mare didn't even bat an eyelash at him, just continued to check out her surroundings before lowering her head to graze. this caught sal off guard, why was she ignoring him? how was she ignoring him? totally enraged the male screamed, bucking out at fence before trotting away, an agitated snort leaving his nostrils. she would know who he was, she would acknowledge his presence.
a few weeks later, the humans had the wonderful idea of putting the two on a hot walker together, one on the left, the other on the right. boring his stare right into the mare's cheek, he stomped around the walker unhappily, snorting and squealing. the mare seemed to ignore him, though she did have an amused look to her face. this just enraged the stallion, making him shout at her. "what's so funny, mare?" he hissed, venom lacing his words. the cream colored tolter just snorted, humor in her eyes. "stupid mare." he spat, mostly to himself. "i have a name, you know." sal squinted his eyes at her, as if he couldn't believe she was talking to him. "and why would i care?" he snorted, ears pinning back against his skull. "well, i just figured since you were dying to get my attention, you'd want to know my name." widening his eyes, the stallion gasped, "excuse me! i was not dying for your attention. you're just another ignorant mare, why should i care?" yanking his head back, he kept his icy gaze on the path in front of him, lashing his tail angrily against his haunches.
now, we all know that sal doesn't stay mean all of his life, and i'm here to tell you what happened to change him.
the crisp wind whipped back and forth, threatening to tear the trees right from their roots. sal was in his paddock, lazily stomping on the crunchy leaves underneath his hooves. suddenly grey smoke clouded the air, making him snap his head up. his purple eyes widened in fear as orange licks of flame started to consume the bright red barn that he had never been in. sensing danger, the stallion charged his paddock gate, trying to undo the loosely tied lead rope from the wooden posts. this just made it tighter as the gate lunged forward. soon, there was a flock of horses emerging from the barn, all squealing in panic, racing away from the flames. a few strangled cries came from the barn, as more tolters came barreling out of the barn. flames were getting closer now, sal could feel the heat as it swallowed up the barn and anyone inside. squealing in horror, the grey stallion rammed his body into the wooden post in attempt to break free. nothing, not even a splinter of wood; how did they make these things? sal was surrounded by smoke, his eyes burning. was this it for him? he scanned the perimeter, knowing very well that he couldn't jump the fence, he had tried before. screaming, he hoped someone, anyone, would have some ounce of kindness and save him from a painful demise. suddenly, a flash of cream danced across the fence, then disappeared. what was that? "come on!" a rich voice called, and he knew now who it was. why would she help him? shaking away the thoughts, the grey stallion raced out of the open gate, fire licking at his heels. he glanced over to the mare beside him briefly, admiring her kindness. he had been so cold to her, and she had saved his life. maybe others weren't so bad after all.
after reaching a good distance away from the burning farm, the stallion slowed, glancing around for the mare. he caught a flicker of her body, "w-wait!" sal cried out, hoping to get her to come back. the mare slowed and turned her body towards him, curious. "tha-." he stuttered, "thank you, uh.." "the name's eel." she smiled, "and you're welcome." she nodded before walking off once again.
ever since that moment, the two just grew closer. sal learned how to treat others nicer, and he showed her how to have more fun and break the rules, sometimes. the humans had to sell the horses because of the fire, but they chose to have sal and eel go together. they are always found together, and some think that sal has a thing for eel, but of course he always denies it.

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arashi :

i would consider arashi to be a tease, a taunter, one who knows how to push your buttons. he takes pleasure in annoying others, but knows his limits. he is spunky, playful, and knows how to have a good time.

zebulun :

zebulun is a mixture of haunting and charming, a beautiful nightmare. he knows how to manipulate others into getting what he wants and can be very deceitful. though when he is not playing games, he is rather quiet and solemn.

pari :

pari is a mystery, you never know what you're going to find. she is sweet and tender, like a mother to a child, but is very passionate about the ones she loves. she acts upon her emotions, not rationalized thoughts.

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Jia is a hard mare to figure out, she comes off like her mother, bold and daunting. Just one look sends chills down the spines of her victims; one nudge sending them bolting away to the other side of the pasture. But it wasn't always like this, no, Jia wasn't the pure resemblance of her mother she is today. She was a quiet little filly at birth, sweet and curious to the world around her. Lilith hated it, hated her daughter's kind heart, so she changed her. Made her rule like herself, a quiet, demanding mare to the world around her. And so Jia, not wanting to disappoint, followed her mother's footsteps. She grew cold, shielding herself to everyone around her. She doesn't like being the way she is, but it's been years now, she could never reshape her personality that much, much less anyone would give her a chance to. So she stays cold and bitter, demanding others to cower at her very presence. Perhaps she could be brought back to her normal self if given the chance, but who would dare spend enough time with her to find out?

Lilith is.. well, there are many words to describe this, creature. She is bitter to say the least, cruel and powerful. No one dares to take authority over her and if one does try, well, let's just say they never try again. She rules with a dominant hoof, taking charge over any and every one, and she purely despises those who are kind and friendly. How sickening, it's revolting really, how they bounce around like that without a care in the world. She hates them the most, she hates how they can be so.. joyful all of the time. What an act, there is nothing on this earth worth being that happy over. They're all just living a big fat lie, every last one of them. Lilith doesn't raise her offspring up any different, she demands that they be like her, demands the respect she rightly deserves. Her first daughter, Jia, what a sickening little foal. At least now she is, somewhat tolerable, now that Lilith changed her, made her intelligent to the world around her. Lilith doesn't believe in anything good or joyous, such as love or family. They are all just sick excuses for trying to make things better than they seem. She is solitary when she doesn't enjoy tormenting others, she just sticks to herself, pondering over the important things like authority and submission. Is Lilith insane? Most definitely, but none are able to get close enough to actually test their theory.

Partners In Her Insanity (Friends): Valdis, Lucifer, Dagon, Tora, Nasrin, Emyr

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( supotte ) ─ negative x1000. most look up to this old hag, and that is why i hate her. she takes away my power, my authority over them. i purely despise supotte, with all of my cold heart. i'm certain that she hates me too, but i couldn't care less. i will rule over them all, one day, and she won't stand a chance.

( tora ) ─ positive. tora is one of my helpers, should i say. he agrees with my ideas and hates all that is good and well. we may butt heads at times, but i wouldn't want it any other way. come to think of it, i almost see him as a little brother, which he'd probably hate, heh.

( archer ) ─ negative. archer's a joke really, he tries to act all strong and righteous, like he's some type of hero. pathetic. what a waste of time and energy. i can't stand him, he acts like some kind of peace keeper, idiot.

( josei ) ─ negative. okay, josei is one of those weird hippy beings that thinks everything has connections and things all sync; what a weirdo. she is quiet for the most part, and gives me a weird feeling when i'm around her and i don't like it one bit. no thanks.

( lucifer ) ─ positive. ah lucifer, what a fine stallion. he truly is absent of feelings and emotion, which makes him easy to work with. though he sometimes his has own agenda and doesn't go along with the plan, he is a great asset to my team. i admire him in many ways and his cold nature is just simply alluring. now don't go saying i have some childish feelings for him, i don't believe in that foolishness, i just fancy his way of life. i wish he would let me in though, he is always so bottled up.. what am i saying, i'm the same way. maybe if i.. ahem. never mind, moving on.

( beau ) ─ neutral. i'm not too sure about beau, she is a hard one to figure out.

( crimson ) ─ neutral/positive.

( asher ) ─ negative.

( pompeii ) ─ neutral.

( vie ) ─ negative.

( jeremiah ) ─ negative.

( trevor ) ─ neutral.

( aisu ) ─ negative.

( lacey ) ─ negative. even though she is cruel and intimidating, like myself, she is a threat to my authority, thus my dislike for her.

( lavender ) ─ negative.

( charakas ) ─ neutral.

( juniper ) ─ neutral/positive.

( riluo ) ─ negative.

( mi ) ─ negative.

( gwen ) ─ neutral/negative.

( pawn ) ─ negative. too snotty and stuck up for my liking.

( nasrin ) ─ positive. the one and only mare i can actually stand. she sees things like i do, although she lacks the intelligent ways of my own. she is content to be second in command, which only adds to my alliance with her.

( memory ) ─ negative.

( spring ) ─ negative.

( verità ) ─ neutral/negative.

( fumei ) ─ neutral.

( lumière ) ─ negative.

( itami ) ─ negative.

( akushon ) ─ neutral.

( xiǎo ) ─ negative.

( jeux ) ─ neutral.

( dagon ) ─ positive.

( tafari ) ─ negative/neutral.

( sempiira ) ─ neutral.

( yèjiān ) ─ negative.

( khari ) ─ neutral/negative.

( torikku ) ─ neutral.

( cadfael ) ─ neutral.

( faraji ) ─ neutral/positive.

( parvaneh ) ─ negative.

( malaika ) ─ negative.

( kazuki ) ─ negative.

( pari ) ─ neutral.

( valdis ) ─ positive.

( kalani ) ─ neutral/negative.

( jia ) ─ neutral/negative.

( arashi ) ─ negative.

( adarah ) ─ negative.

( emyr ) ─ positive.

( edith ) ─ neutral.

( lorcan ) ─ positive/neutral.

( melody ) ─ neutral.

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full siblings: none
half siblings: none

▶ herd relationships

mares:
friends: josei, aisu, lavender, riluo, mi,
spring, lumière, sumar, yèjiān, parvaneh,
malaika, adarah
neutral: crimson, vie, juniper, verità, itami,
jeux, torikku, pari, edith
dislikes: lacey, gwen, nasrin, ishi, tafari,
sempiira, lilith, kalani, jia

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friends: josei, aisu, lavender,
neutral: crimson, vie,
dislikes: lacey,

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note to self

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a few notes;
    in order to make the image smaller i user online image editor and the proportions are 350 x 233 px
    ive made the small personality traits section for you and an extended personality thing so it should be alright?

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