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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby ParaKitty » Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:56 pm

Oh no.... q~q
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Sat Mar 14, 2015 4:15 pm

HERES HOW I TRY TO GET OVER WRITERS BLOCK I JUST WRITE LITERALLY EVERYTHING I CAN I STARE AT ART AND OTHER STORIES FOR 2 HOURS I READ MAZE RUNNER (Wait what? I gotta finish The Death Cure ;n;)
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Discoveries. (Part 1)

Postby trickszy » Mon Mar 16, 2015 5:01 am

This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!


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I totally bumped into this cute guy today.
No I was joking. I didn't BECAUSE I STAYED AT HOME. But, you know what did happen? I had an encounter with the Nightdreamer.
I was in the Multiscape, and suddenly, this random hooded guy covered in darkness suddenly gets me wrapped in darkness, and next thing I know, I'm in a prison cell.
I guess I did bump into a guy. But he wasn't cute.
So, anyways, I woke up in this cell, and I couldn't see anything. At all. All I heard were the clattering of keys and jail guards walking by.

Let me out! ~Me
Nope. Lord doesn't want to let you go. You're trouble. ~Guard Dog Guy
wait, Lorde is behind this? ~Me
Oh my Dog. ~Guard Cat Guy
*determines race by voice* But you're a cat. ~Me

I swear I saw them twitch in the dark, judging by their outlines.

AGH! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! ~???
Wait, Roxanne, is that you!? ~Me
What do you think? NO DIP, SHERLOCK!! ~Roxanne
Well, I'm sorry! This room is covered in darkness, if you didn't notice! ~Me
Put them in the same cell. ~???

So Roxanne was put in the same cell as me.

*Growl-whispers* Stay away from me. ~Roxanne
*Whispers* Urgh... Fine. I'm gonna try to conjure up some light--I know you can, but I want to try. ~Me
*Whispers urgently* Wait, don't-- ~Roxanne

I lit up the cell so that the guards couldn't see the light from the outside and this dog was with me.

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We were talking in whispers this whole time. I'm too lazy to put so many whispers.
... ~Me
Put that out! ~Roxanne
Roxanne, why do you look so different? ~Me
Well... Wait, I shouldn't tell you this! ~Roxanne
Come on. We're only getting out of here by trusting eachother. It's like bonding time. ~Me
... Fine. ~Roxanne
My family is on the run from the law. I have to make sure I look different. And, my changer is in my room back in my castle. The thing is, if my family gets caught, I'm going to an orphanage and I don't want that. And, I honestly like the attention at school but sometimes I just feel really bad. ~Roxanne

*scooches towards her* Hey, I have no idea who my biological parents are. My mom never told me about them. ~Me
Wow... That's sad. ~Roxanne
Yup. ~Me
How about a plan to escape? ~Me
We could pretend to fight, and then cause a huge bang, and you could play dead. ~Roxanne
Why me? ~Roxanne
*snorts* Because I don't wanna be looked at as weak, ya numbskull. ~Me
*Glares at her* ~Me
Let's go. ~Roxanne
Okay. ~Me

So I extinguished the light, and immediately Roxanne started screeching at me.

Urgh, why did I have to be stuck in a cell with you!? You're just so UNBEARABLE! ~Roxanne

I quickly fell over and feigned dead as a loud explosion sound was made--with what, I don't know, but I did know we were in the middle of the cell and Roxanne was leaning over me, and quickly poured some conjured red paint over me.

*whispers* Good luck, and you better come back for me. ~Roxanne

The guards quickly opened the cell door and saw Roxanne leaning over me.

Hey! Get off! ~Guard Dog Guy

Roxanne climbed off, and they quickly looked at me.

...Well, I guess that's fine. Lord was planning on killing her anyways. ~Guard Cat Guy

So they dragged me out of the cell, and then they put me in a trash chute, and I slid down.
I'm pretty sure I felt real blood on the inside of that chute.


Yay! WB is sort of gone, so I pumped out this chapter!
And, I'm gonna watch you all just try to figure out who this Lorde Lord is.
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:30 am

EEEEEEEEE!!!!
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby ParaKitty » Mon Mar 16, 2015 9:26 am

@fabulous.
Do you want to make a fan club so we can post on there instead of here or nahh?

Hmmm, so many characters to choose from e^e
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby trickszy » Mon Mar 16, 2015 10:25 am

@ParaKitty
Maybe, if you guys want me to make one uwu

-winces at poll-
uhm, I see that someone switched the first to the last.
argh. i'm just gonna remove it 'cause it sort of hurts me emotionally...
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Mon Mar 16, 2015 11:44 am

;v; Those people are just jealous ;v;
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby Piefan » Mon Mar 16, 2015 12:31 pm

^Yah, probably that - jealousy. I usually hate saying 'Meh, they're jealous' about everyone who doesn't like x, but you specifically asked for advice... people promptly ignored that. The only explanation I can think of is that, if not completely, they might have some subconscious hatred for popular people that causes them to dislike it, and because of that, they can't actually tell you what they don't like... they don't know.

Also, like the story so far; keep it up.
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Discoveries. (Part 2)

Postby trickszy » Mon Mar 16, 2015 6:50 pm

This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!


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(Continued.)
I fell out of the chute, quickly getting my wings up and wincing at the smell.
You don't want to know what was down there.
Trust me.

I found some vents in the roof, so I crawled up through there. However, I was climbing straight up, in a vent too small for wings. So, naturally, I failed a few times. I got up to the roof of the castle, with not too much incident--a few scratches on my neck, paws, and such but it wasn't too bad. I quickly brushed myself off and inhaled the fresh, mostly iron-free air. (The vent was still right nearby.)

Hearing a few voices, I slowly made my way to a skylight. Peeping downwards, I saw 'Lord' screaming out some guards--the guards from the jail. But, anyways, I'm gonna put it in a different format because it's a bit more serious. I hope you don't mind this format right now, Griffin.

"What do you mean, she died?!" Lord screeched at the guards angrily. "She was the most important asset to our plan!"
"I'm sorry Lord, we weren't awa--"
"You ignorant imbeciles. She's obviously not dead. I can feel it. Check the disposal, right this instant."
"But sir--"
"Now." Lord said, a dangerous undertone lining his voice.
The guards quickly scurried away.

Lord looked up.
And I stared into familiar, cold, green eyes.
Oh my Dog.

Quickly ducking back, I let out a breath, and ran.
I made my way across the rooftops, flying across the gaps and carefully avoiding guards, trying to avoid conflict, but at one point, a few guards spotted me. Quickly they ran over, and I flew up high, spinning to miss the arrows as I heard alarms blaring across the building. I made my way back down into the disposal center, flinching at the smell that assailed my nose, and quickly going back into the dungeon. I lit up the area with light. Kicking the guards, I grabbed the single master key. "Roxanne!?" I shouted. "Over here!" I ran to her, passing the other cells, unlocking hers and throwing open the door. "Roxanne get out of here. Hurry up!" I kept running to each of the cell doors, flinging open each one and setting free four others.

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"Thank you! I'm Hatari, for your info."

"I have a feeling we're going to need to end this in one epic final battle. Guys, I don't know you, but this is no time for introductions. All you need to know is that I'm Arisa." I quickly ran up the stairs, opening the door and met with a ton of guards, then having the black fox and brown dogs leap over me, kicking the guards out. "Go! We can take care of these people! And if we don't live, I'm Xander, the black fox is Archer, and that other guy over there is Owen!" Said the first brown dog. I nodded to him as Roxanne, Hatari and I ran towards the throne room.


Don't worry. This won't be the final battle.
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Tue Mar 17, 2015 12:52 am

squeek this is getting interesting
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