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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Wed Mar 11, 2015 2:45 am

*Hyperventilating* *Starts licking a purple banana* hhhhhhhh
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby trickszy » Wed Mar 11, 2015 8:33 am

Sooo apparently it's a terrible story according to two people-->_>
Opinions are okay. What should I improve guys?
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby falling snow. » Wed Mar 11, 2015 1:29 pm

    Can't talk; UPDATE! >.<
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby ParaKitty » Wed Mar 11, 2015 2:16 pm

fabulous. wrote:Sooo apparently it's a terrible story according to two people-->_>
Opinions are okay. What should I improve guys?

I don't know, it seems perfect the way it is!
Maybe just haters or jellyfishes?
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby trickszy » Wed Mar 11, 2015 5:02 pm

--Thanks, Para!
--Also, I'm waiting until Friday to update. School. ;-;
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Sat Mar 14, 2015 10:52 am

I'm lucky I'm still alive D_D
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby falling snow. » Sat Mar 14, 2015 2:47 pm

    IT'S FRIDAY, SO UPDATE! D:
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Roxanne

Postby trickszy » Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:31 pm

This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!


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Ey Griffin! I'm back after school. It's spring break. And, we have discovered a few things about the Dreamscape.
Roxanne is a part of the Multiscape. And she's a Daydreamer.

Roxanne appeared near Anya and I when we were walking around, exploring, and her immediate reaction was...

What the [censored for the orphans] are you doing here!? ~Roxanne
I should be asking you the same question. ~Me
Without the violent cussing. ~Me

And then Roxanne made this weird light ball and shot it at us.
Enter epic battle!

I quickly grew my wings and shot up in the air to avoid the light ball, and Anya quickly ducked and rolled to the side. Roxanne quickly charged up another light ball, shooting it at me, causing me to do a (totally epic) backflip in the air. Regaining my balance, I looked at my slightly singed tail and quickly dodged a few more light balls. And Anya was sneaking over to her while this was happening.
I quickly switched to offense, and spawned this sorta halo-ish thing (Anya taught me how) and I quickly swung it like a boomerang towards Roxanne, and she shot a light ball. My halo thing hit her in the chest, causing her to fly back, and the light hit my wing and I fell down. Anya quickly hit Roxanne over the head with a rock, successfully knocking her out as we made our escape.

Anya convinced me that Roxanne was not the Nightdreamer by using logic. But, that still leaves...
How many other people are in the Multiscape, and who is the Nightdreamer?


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I AM SO SO SORRY FOR HOW SHORT THIS CHAPTER IS
I WILL TRY TO UPDATE EVERY DAY
I AM SO SORRY
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:47 pm

ITS OKAY IT'S STILL AWESOME
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby trickszy » Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:55 pm

I'M HAVING A TERRIBLE CASE OF WRITERS BLOCK SOBS UNCONTROLLABLY
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