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by Silver Pandorica » Thu Nov 10, 2016 2:22 pm
BucketORandomness wrote:OOOo! mystery, and I love the transition from environment to character descriptions! Very nice!
SilverCrescentMoon wrote:@Bucket- What do you mean by actual novels?
I'm sorry. I think the "actual novels" came out a bit wrong. I was talking about things that were going to be professionally published. Is the 5k word count from start to end of a story, or can a person jump in the middle of a story and start counting there?
In other news, I wrote a bit more on that "old legend" type story I posted earlier. Would anyone like for me to post it?
I think you can do that for NaNo...?
@Headphone Actor- Ooh I like it so far.
*Bad Wolf* wrote:Ugh. I am losing motivation for Nano... I have done no more than like 500 words for the past few day

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*sighs* I have been losing motivation as well. I haven't done any writing today for my actual story

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by anxious ghost » Thu Nov 10, 2016 3:23 pm
@Unmotivated peeps: Don't give up! Just keep going, you'll get it eventually. Just remember: Tolkien took 12 years to write the Lord of the Rings, but he still finished.
@Randy I like it! The descriptions are great, and it has a nice feel overall.
BucketORandomness wrote:OOOo! mystery, and I love the transition from environment to character descriptions! Very nice!
SilverCrescentMoon wrote:@Bucket- What do you mean by actual novels?
I'm sorry. I think the "actual novels" came out a bit wrong. I was talking about things that were going to be professionally published. Is the 5k word count from start to end of a story, or can a person jump in the middle of a story and start counting there?
In other news, I wrote a bit more on that "old legend" type story I posted earlier. Would anyone like for me to post it?
First of all, YES, definitely post more.
The 50k is only what you've written in November. I started my story like a year ago, but I'm still using it for Nano. You just count the words written during Nano.
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by anxious ghost » Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:34 pm
SilverCrescentMoon wrote:Okay, I literally just posted, but if anyone's stuck and having problems with characters, I found this. I haven't even finished it for one character yet, but its super awesome and helpful! I highly recommend checking it out.
http://crystalstranaghan.com/interview-your-characters/
Thank you for that! I've answered a lot of those questions, but some of them, I'd never thought of.
Ranger of the North wrote:Oo that's really useful! It's got a bunch of questions I never would've though to ask XD
That last one though......
If you could change anything about your life what would it be?
“Being Born.”
i'M SO SORRY
I have a char like that too.
So I named some stuff... With Randy's help
I didn't do anything, it was all Randy my species has a name now: Trylfeo. Which I'm honestly not sure how to pronounce... And I've named the capitol city for some of the Kingdoms.
First Kingdom: Kavi. Second: Kala. Fourth: Oriana. Seventh: Darya. I have four more to name. But I'm getting somewhere!

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by Ranger of the North » Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:57 pm
Yay for Steve and Randy! Getting somewhere's usually a good thing XD
Hahaha I like this interview thing a lot
I've actually been really rough with this character??
If you had one wish, what would it be? “I wish Papa would love me like he seemed to.”
*chuckles sympathetically*
I /do/ like this kid a lot, though
What do you think other people think of you? “I don’t ask and I don't care—unless mother comes up.”
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by inspiration. » Thu Nov 10, 2016 7:54 pm
CJClaire wrote:i hate outlining so much because i'm impatient and i'll change my mind as i'm writing haha
the only time i made anything close to an outline was for a rewrite of my first novel and that was just to make sure that i rewrote all the important plot points haha
@luminosity, that story is really good! i love the descriptions. it really helps to get the reader immersed into the story! is this it, or are you planning to write more? if there is more, I'd love to read it! ^-^
Thanks! And no, there isn't more, but i will be writing more stories ^-^
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by Ranger of the North » Fri Nov 11, 2016 8:06 am
Guyyyss I need some help titling my book~!
I was thinking of calling it Lawless, but Idk if I'm 100% happy with it or not? c:
Anyways, here's the blurb; if you have any ideas that'd be great XD
Deirdre is blessed to be a Higher, living in a mansion with her father and older sister—but the sixteen-year-old has her troubles. When an ugly truth is brought to light she’s forced to flee in order to save her life. Will Deirdre’s father—and the king himself—succeed in killing the girl? Or will she find hope and survive?i'm not good at blurbs rip
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by DeMaizu » Fri Nov 11, 2016 8:12 am
Well. First, could I read the story if it's up anywhere? Also, I think it'd be a better blurb if we knew what a Higher was; is it a warrior, just a title that doesn't hold any weight behind it - stuff like that. And to be honest, most of my stories have the main character's name as their title. Lawless would be as good as I ever get.
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