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by sparrow; » Wed Oct 12, 2016 6:12 am
Yep, we're going with this idea. Should we write from the perspective of both kids, just so we understand that the "bad" guys are good, or keep that a secret for a while?

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by Ranger of the North » Wed Oct 12, 2016 11:35 am
*shakes in head confusion*
*laughs* Okay, so let me get this straight:
There's a city where people are being held captive. They think they're being kept safe. The villains, who the citizens think are their rescuers, are keeping them locked in the city, right? And the good guys, who the citizens think are villains, are outside and breaking the citizens out a few at a time, right? And the MC(s) are a few kids who have just recently been kidnapped/rescued by the goodies, who they think are bad... Right?
I'm lost. Don't send a search-party.
actually yes, please do
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by sparrow; » Wed Oct 12, 2016 12:03 pm
Yep, pretty much. Except one of the kids was kidnapped, and the other is trying to rescue their sibling (who was kidnapped)

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by sparrow; » Wed Oct 12, 2016 7:18 pm
Yep! But there's also a "hero" who's coming to "save" them.
Edit; Poll Question:
Should the person who's trying to take the kids back and pretending to save them be traveling with the second kid? Sorry if that sentence was confusing! We really need to come up with names...

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by Woogwoo Wren » Wed Oct 12, 2016 8:09 pm
For now, let's say MC = A, MC's sibling = B, Guy taking them back = C, Guy helping them escape = D
So the MC is a female right? I'm gonna chuck some names out there.
Amber
Brooke
Aqua
Emerald
If everyone suggest a few names and then we have a poll to see which one is the most popular or something
"An eye for an eyeHello! I'm Wren! I'm in my mid-teens and live
in New Zealand. I enjoy writing, reading, watching videos,
cosplaying, and drawing occasionally! I'm a Christian,
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by Aliria » Thu Oct 13, 2016 12:31 pm
before naming the characters, we should probably figure out their genders. I assume one of the MC's will be male and one will be female, but we should decide which. And decide what they look like, and get at least a vague idea of their personalities.
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