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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Wed Jun 24, 2015 2:17 pm

Actually, the robot is all futuristic and such, and the robot's using a hologram to make it seem real.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Jealousy Empress » Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:57 am

hi 20lait1! sorry if im bugging you but i am wondering if you could add this pet to furford academy? i have filled in the forms in past comments, but you didnt reply, so i am commenting one last time.

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby starsailor » Sun Jun 28, 2015 10:07 am

batpants123YOLO! wrote:hi 20lait1! sorry if im bugging you but i am wondering if you could add this pet to furford academy? i have filled in the forms in past comments, but you didnt reply, so i am commenting one last time.

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby namjoon. » Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:21 pm

.:The Mangle:. wrote:
batpants123YOLO! wrote:hi 20lait1! sorry if im bugging you but i am wondering if you could add this pet to furford academy? i have filled in the forms in past comments, but you didnt reply, so i am commenting one last time.

I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name:kinderr
Gender:male
Personality:understanding
Hobbies:polo, water polo, air polo (for wolves that can fly)
Group:jock
Is he/she a friend of Skyler?no
Others:likes polo mints, asks "why?" a lot

Last time, we've already told you that forms were closed.

Yea. Sorry, please stop ignoring :) Forms aren't open ( sorry if this is spam)
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby 20lait1 » Wed Jul 01, 2015 7:46 pm

    Macz wrote:
    .:The Mangle:. wrote:
    batpants123YOLO! wrote:hi 20lait1! sorry if im bugging you but i am wondering if you could add this pet to furford academy? i have filled in the forms in past comments, but you didnt reply, so i am commenting one last time.

    I'm attending Furford Academy!
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    Name:kinderr
    Gender:male
    Personality:understanding
    Hobbies:polo, water polo, air polo (for wolves that can fly)
    Group:jock
    Is he/she a friend of Skyler?no
    Others:likes polo mints, asks "why?" a lot

    Last time, we've already told you that forms were closed.

    Yea. Sorry, please stop ignoring :) Forms aren't open ( sorry if this is spam)


    I am annoyed by this. I have not replied as it says CLOSED in big red letters in the front - and yet you have ignored it. When others tell you not to, you still ignore them. Thank you to everyone who has helped to try not to create more spam... But please do not ignore me, or everyone else. Forms will be opened when time is right....

    @Everyone

    Okay, for the good news! I'm back from holiday, and it's the summer holidays! Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Good. Now get back to where you come from. I'll be able to write more entries... Will do one right now! You mean I will. I thought you left. I will never leave. Haha - *shoves Skyler away* Go!
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby 20lait1 » Wed Jul 01, 2015 9:56 pm

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    Dear Hawk,

    I've talked to Lucifer. He told me that this headfur hair I have on my head... It's a kind of effect from my disguise. I have a photo of my disguise - second....

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    The furstyle hairstyle is pretty much the same as that one. I can change it, but... I do like it, I suppose. I asked him if he could remove it, as it could have helped in proving to everyone else that I'm the real Skyler, the answer wasn't very... positive.


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    Me: Lucifer, can you remove this... useless clump of... hair?
    Lucifer: Yes, it is possible, but -
    Me: THEN DO IT.
    Lucifer: - there is a 99.999% that I may accidentally remove you from existence, in which, the memory of you will be wiped out from everybody's minds, and it will seem like you have never been born.
    Me: :what: Um, def... defin... defination? No, wait... Gah, just... meaning. Yes, meaning...
    Lucifer: Definition? You will have never existed. You will... vanish.
    Me: :shock: Umm... No thanks, then.



    So much for being positive and everything. Ugh. Being positive stinks. Well, I'd better... find someone that knows me... well enough. But if Fang can't, who can? .... Maybe.... Hmm.... Whatever. I'll just try to find out myself.... I need to put you down for a moment...

    Well, I think... Being positive might be a good thing! :D Surprisingly, it's a jock... It's Riptide.

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    Riptide says it seems to have been forever since he saw me, so... He hasn't seen the robot yet! I think Link knows who's real or not, too, but he hasn't been talking much, just watching.... He's creepy.... Anyways, I took him outside to explain everything behind a tree. I suggested my room, but he sorta freaked out because it was a girl's dorm. Then I suggested his dorm... and he really freaked out. Probably because of that girly plushie. I didn't mention it, though, but I think he knew that I knew (confusing, isn't it?) that he had the plushie... So we had to hide behind that tree.

    Me: So, Riptide.... There'sarobotrunningaroundinschoolpretendingtobemeandI'mgoingtofreakoutrightnowbecause -
    Riptide: :what: Um, what?
    Me: *facepaw* I said, there'sarobotrunningaroundinschoolpretendingto -
    Riptide: Can you be... slower?
    Me: Oh? Okay. Why does your name sound like a piece of paper?
    Riptide: Umm.... What?
    Me: You know, because paper can rip and - oh, yes, back to... the point.
    Riptide: .... Yeah....
    Me: Okay, there'sa - I mean, there's a robot running around school... that looks like me. It's making everyone believe that I'm a fake and the robot's real... Mainly because I have hair... for... some reason.
    Riptide: Ah, I see... What did you say again?
    Me: *facetree* Fine, fine. I said - actually, can you help me?
    Riptide: Um, you said....?
    Me: *groan* Okay, so there's a robot.... me... that I didn't create. It's making everyone think... that the robot is real and I'm not. I don't know why, but since I have hair.... they believe the robot.
    Riptide: Okay... So how do I help?
    Me: Um... Follow me?
    Riptide: Sure!


    So he followed me, humming the latest hit rock song thing under his breath, but he was LOUD. I mean, loud. He was nearly as loud as Fang... As we walked back into school, I noticed a couple of dogs everyone staring at him. And me.

    Me: :? Psst.... Riptide? Can you be quiet?
    Riptide: 8-) What? I can't hear you.

    That caused everybody and everybody else (is that possible?) to start looking at me like I was weird. So I grabbed Riptide and pulled him back outside.

    Me: :x Be quiet!
    Riptide: Ah, I get it. Now....

    Then I noticed a shape huddled underneath another tree. A furry shape, and it had it's snout under it's paws. It shook once in a while, and it took me no time at all a couple of seconds to figure out what was happening.

    Me: Hey, Rip -
    Riptide: She's crying.
    Me: Um, yeah?
    Riptide: Yeah?
    Me: Yeah?
    Riptide: Yeah?
    Me: Fine, stop the yeahing.
    Riptide: Is that even a word?
    Me: No. Let's go to it.
    Riptide: Her.
    Me: Why are we talking in one word sentences?
    Riptide: You're not.
    Me: You aren't either.
    Riptide: Yeah, you're right. Now can we go to her?
    Me: What? Who? *glances back* Um, okay.

    So we hurried over. Riptide was still humming, with that 8-) face all the time. I got a closer look... And I realized who it was.

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    Me: Sunny?!
    Sunny: *sniffle* Go away.
    Me: .... Why?
    Sunny: Nobody believes me anymore.
    Me: .... What?!
    Sunny: *looks up* Skyler?! I mean, um, Outcast girl...
    Me: ..... What do you mean, nobody believes you?
    Sunny: :cry: *sniffle* Nobody likes Populars.... Except for Populars...
    Riptide: *standing at the side* 8-) You finished with your makeup talk yet?
    Me: Makeup - *punches him in the snout*
    Riptide: Ow! You didn't have to do that!
    Me: I had. *glances back at Sunny*
    Sunny: I -

    Before she finished her sentence, suddenly I heard a horrible, girly squeal.

    ???: SUNNY! There you are!

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    I didn't need to look - it was the White-nosed Dog, Snowy.

    Sunny: *sniffs and looks up* S - Snowy?

    Then I realized Snowy was looking at another dog - and another very familiar one, too.

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    Me: Wh - What?!
    Sunny #1: S - See... She... She's.... fake....
    Me: But - But....
    Sunny #2: Hello, Snowy. You look so gorgeous in your beautiful dress! It's like, so trending!
    Snowy: Why, thank you! Populars always look beautiful like me, but I am the most beautiful of all, aren't I?
    Sunny #2: Of course! There's nobody in this school who looks as pretty as you, as gorgeous as you, and is as popular as you!
    Me: *whispers to Sunny #1*Um, Sunny #1 - I mean, Sunny... Who is that?

    I couldn't feel.... angry at her. Even though she was a Popular... and a mean one, too. Well, used to be...

    Sunny #1: Number... 1?
    Me: Um, sorry...
    Riptide: *still rubbing his snout*
    Sunny #1: Well.... I don't know... B - But... she's replaced me....
    Me: I... I... Come with me... There's something I need to tell you. *gently tugs Sunny away from the squealing Populars and hides behind the tree*
    Sunny #1: What?
    Me: There's... a robot running around school.... who looks like me. Nobody seems to know it's a robot.... except for me. It might be... some kind of hologram or something?
    Riptide: *shuffles over* When did you start using formal words like hologram?
    Me: I... I don't know... But, you see... Nobody believes me, either. I think Lucifer knows who I really am...
    Sunny #1: You know... the Emo boy - I mean... Lucifer?
    Me: Long story. But I do... And Link probably knows, too, but he seems to like avoiding everybody in the world. And Riptide, of course.
    Sunny #1: Okay... Perhaps.... I could come... with you? Since.... Um... Beautiful Populars... like me... don't stick with Outcasts, but... we have to work together.
    Me: Oh... Okay. I'll try talking with some of... the students around.

    I led Riptide (who was still humming) and Sunny #1 (who had managed to stop sniffling) back into the school, still attempting to avoid the Populars... Not Sunny #2 I mean #1. Or should I say... Attempting to avoid... the clone? Or is the Sunny I'm talking to a clone herself and is trying to trick me? I guess I have no choice but to trust her...

    Anyways, the hallways had cleared mostly. I spotted Hannah, but since she was holding a scythe, I was unwilling to talk to her... but Riptide just had to butt in.

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    Me: An Emo? I don't think... She's holding a... scythe? And...
    Hannah: Die. *uses scythe to slice off a plushie's head*
    Me: :shock: Um, let's... not...
    Riptide: *walks right up* Hey, Hannah! You see a robot around? Maybe a clone of her? *points at Sunny* You know, cause -
    Hannah: Um, you're annoying -
    Riptide: Cause -
    Hannah: Ugh, GO AWAY! *swings scythe and cleaves off the plushie's tail as well*
    Riptide: As I was saying, 'cause these two aren't being trusted, you know, because the clone and the robot are -
    Hannah: DIE! *swings scythe at Riptide*
    Riptide: *scoots backwards* I mean, die! I mean.... bye! *turns tail and flees*
    Me: *grabs him by the tail* Come back!
    Riptide: *trips* Oof. *gets up*
    Me: I mean, let's... go. *rushes past Hannah*
    Hannah: *glares at Riptide* Annoying jock.

    So we escaped from the scythe wielding monster dog and down the hallway, where Riptide bumped into Danava.

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    Riptide: Oh, hi! My friend here -
    Danava: *turns around, ready to run*
    Riptide: - needs help. And the Popular, too. Dusky, was it?
    Sunny (I'll just call her Sunny): Not Dusky... It's Sunny.
    Danava: *pauses* You... need help?
    Me: .... Yes.
    Danava: Really? But I saw you... looking really happy with your friends... I don't know your name, though. And... Sunny, was it? You seemed to... love being... a Popular. And not stick... with Outcasts... like me.
    Sunny: Those... they were... clones. Or robots... But we really need your help, Danava. Please... believe me. :cry:
    Danava: I... Stop crying... *hands over tissue* I... I'll.... help you, then. But... can you explain?
    Danava's Tail: *snaps*
    Riptide: Eep! *jumps back in surprise*
    Danava: Quiet, tail. *tosses some pellets at it*
    Danava's Tail: *chomps on pellets*
    Danava: Anyways, sorry for that... *blinks her eye* Well... do you need some privacy? I hear voices... coming up the hallway.
    Me: Sure! I mean, sure! Now, um, RUN!

    I dragged her away, closely followed by Riptide and Sunny. I ran for the girls dorms and rushed in the first one that had an open door, slamming it shut.

    Riptide: A... girls dorm?
    Me: Um, yeah, why -

    Then I noticed someone staring at me in confusion. Not Sunny, Riptide, or Danava.

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    Creek: :o What is a boy doing in my dorm?! *suddenly punches Riptide in the snout*
    Riptide: OW! Stop doing that!
    Me: *steps on his paw* Sorry, Creek -
    Creek: Why.... do you have hair?
    Me: Oh? Hair? I have hair - Oh, wait. I do.
    Creek: The real Skyler... doesn't. I just talked to her. She was -
    Me: A robot?
    Creek: A robot? She was... more like... the real you.
    Me: I... It's because it's an emergency... And I need... help. *hears banging sounds at door* Have they found me? :? *spins around*
    Riptide: *banging at door* LET ME OUT! I CAN'T STAND IT! LET ME OUT!
    Sunny: *holding door shut*
    Danava's Tail: *holding on to Riptide's tail with it's jaws*
    Danava: *glances up* Oh, sorry. Should I... knock him out?
    Riptide: NO! DON'T!
    Me: Then be quiet. *turns to Creek* The me.... you saw earlier... that's a robot.
    Creek: Can.... I trust you?
    Me: Please.... I.... You can. Sunny... The other one... Is supposedly a clone. Riptide and Danava... they're helping me, I suppose. I don't know... if Xander will, though.
    Creek: *eyes soften* He will. It's hard when you feel you're alone... But I know he's someone you can count on.
    Me: How.... do you know?
    Creek: Popular... thinking, I guess. Look. *holds up camera*

    There was a photo of the dance. Xander had his paws on my waist, and we were.... dancing. I realized... I did.... count on him. I did... crush on him, I suppose. I just never realized the little jump of my heart every time I saw him.... was real. I thought I imagined it. But there's something else I need to solve...

    Me: You're a stalker? :shock:
    Creek: Um, no... But.... I feel the same about Fang, too. He's a good guy... he just needs some encouraging, that's all... to have him believe in you.
    Me: I... I.... I get it. But... will you help me?
    Creek: I... will. I know how it feels to be... like it's just you against the world.
    Me: But how -
    Creek: Don't need to talk about it. *glances at Riptide* Maybe... we find somewhere.... more comfortable for all of us.
    Me: I - Agreed, then.

    I guess I've found... help. I'm... hoping.... everything will be all right. But about Hell Clan... I don't think it's about them anymore. There's a darker force somewhere.... I feel it. I feel it vibrating my bones, setting my fur on end. But I don't know.... Could it just be a trick of my imagination? Or was it the light? Ah, never mind. But.... Am I just thinking everything's worse than it seems? I better.... figure out where we can have a private discussion... See you, Hawk. And hopefully.... I'll survive. I'll make them believe. Believe.... that we are real. Show them... we aren't fakes. We will... prove to them.... Robots and clones can't stop us from surviving school.
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby pinkgeneguy » Thu Jul 02, 2015 1:03 am

    Sunny
    Clone
    Too many awesome ideas fitting into one chappie! I mean entry!








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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby 20lait1 » Thu Jul 02, 2015 1:47 am

    wolfiegirl8679 wrote:Sunny
    Clone
    Too many awesome ideas fitting into one chappie! I mean entry!


    Heheh... Need to thank my dad for that. He'll probably read this very sentence too.... My dad stalks the Hawk.
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby Streak » Thu Jul 02, 2015 2:39 am

    More clones?? Awesome entry!!
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby someth1ng » Thu Jul 02, 2015 3:44 am

    there are so many pauses. i mean it in a good way makes it intresting
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