'Releasing The Darkness, Ch 1'
One dark misty night on the 06/06/66, there was two young boys of the age of 10, wandering a haunted forest. The forest was called 'sleepy hollow.' No one ever dared to enter, stories were told to young children.The two young boys had dared both to go in and come out alive, if they could. The eldet entered first and then the younger one. They both acted brave, but were they really?
They had no idea of what was in this forest. A couple hours past as they boys got tired and hungry. A hand was suddenly put of the young boy's mouth and pulled into the thick mist. The older one turned round. "Daniel? where are you?" he looked round. "Stop playing games and come out!" a scream was suddenly heard from a far distance. The boy ran as fast as he could. "I'm coming, Daniel!"
he yelled and kept running. He arrived to find Daniel dead, stiff and lifless on the ground. "No!!" he ran over and shook him. "Please don't do this! you have a long life to live! please.." James couldn't bare it. He picked up the body and put it in the near by river.
The river swept Daniel's body away into the thick mist.
James suddenly cut his hand. "Oww.." While Daniel's body floated away futher and futher, his eyes suddenly opened wide with bright red eyes! He stood up with a hiss and ran out of the river and into the woods. He could smell his brother, James from a mile away.
He ran fast, searching high 'n low to find him. James tore his sleeve off and wrapped it around his hand to stop the bleeding.
He continued to march on and unaware of Daniel's arrival. Daniel was standing behind James, he leaped at him, pinning him with his teeth clenched into Jame's throat. James yelped and tried to kick Daniel off. Daniel suddenly snapped James's neck!
James died instantly, lifless and stiff. Daniel smirked and picked him up. He put him in the river with blood trickling down his mouth. James's body flowed along the river gently. Daniel followed James's body. 10 minutes later, James's eyes opened fully bright red! He had his demon side.. Daniel smirked and helped him out of the river. "Welcome, my brother..' he laughed evily.
'Good to be back..' James's smirked evily. "Where is Jackie?!" Daniel hissed. 'In hell...' James's laughed.
'Think we should ask him for his secret weapon?' Daniel asked. James's nodded. "Why of course..the whole villages had to witness the darkness of Satan..' The two brothers crawled down a hell-hole and had vanished.
(End of chapter 1!)
(What do you think?)
They had no idea of what was in this forest. A couple hours past as they boys got tired and hungry. A hand was suddenly put of the young boy's mouth and pulled into the thick mist. The older one turned round. "Daniel? where are you?" he looked round. "Stop playing games and come out!" a scream was suddenly heard from a far distance. The boy ran as fast as he could. "I'm coming, Daniel!"
he yelled and kept running. He arrived to find Daniel dead, stiff and lifless on the ground. "No!!" he ran over and shook him. "Please don't do this! you have a long life to live! please.." James couldn't bare it. He picked up the body and put it in the near by river.
The river swept Daniel's body away into the thick mist.
James suddenly cut his hand. "Oww.." While Daniel's body floated away futher and futher, his eyes suddenly opened wide with bright red eyes! He stood up with a hiss and ran out of the river and into the woods. He could smell his brother, James from a mile away.
He ran fast, searching high 'n low to find him. James tore his sleeve off and wrapped it around his hand to stop the bleeding.
He continued to march on and unaware of Daniel's arrival. Daniel was standing behind James, he leaped at him, pinning him with his teeth clenched into Jame's throat. James yelped and tried to kick Daniel off. Daniel suddenly snapped James's neck!
James died instantly, lifless and stiff. Daniel smirked and picked him up. He put him in the river with blood trickling down his mouth. James's body flowed along the river gently. Daniel followed James's body. 10 minutes later, James's eyes opened fully bright red! He had his demon side.. Daniel smirked and helped him out of the river. "Welcome, my brother..' he laughed evily.
'Good to be back..' James's smirked evily. "Where is Jackie?!" Daniel hissed. 'In hell...' James's laughed.
'Think we should ask him for his secret weapon?' Daniel asked. James's nodded. "Why of course..the whole villages had to witness the darkness of Satan..' The two brothers crawled down a hell-hole and had vanished.
(End of chapter 1!)
(What do you think?)