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Re: just . another . day .

Postby Emo_Angel » Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:37 am

;D I'll be watching and waiting ^_^
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I should be posting very vivid, depressing poems so brace yourself.
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby {belle} » Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:50 am

Sorry I havnt updated recently, I've been buisy! Ill try to wire one today.
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby {belle} » Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:51 am

[ working in next chapter now ]
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby {belle} » Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:42 am

an extra long one to make up for the delay!
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{ P.O.V. of Chase }

I stand in line, deciding what to order. All of the meal options look atrocious, but then again, I don't choose the menu. I decide on the "2.50 mashed potato meal with soda!" And revive my tray. I scoot along the line until I reach the cash register and the price is confirmed. I reach for my pocket, but all of my money is gone. I shake my head and sigh. "I'm sorry," I say to the register lady, "but your going to have to take this back. I think someone stole my money." I say pushing my tray towards her. "We cannot sell again!" The lady says angrily in her thick Hispanic accent. "Well I don't have the money" I say helpless. She gives me a small smile and pushes the tray towards me. "For free." She says quietly and I smile back at her. "Thanks" I say and try to find a table. One of Megan's minions walks up to me. "Exactly what do you think you're doing?!" She squeals at me. I'm pretty sure that its Tracy. "I was actually thinking about eating-" "No not that!" She screeches, and points at the tray. "Stealing..." She nags at me in her high-pitched voice. I look at her, anger rising through me. "I didn't steal it. The lady let me have it because one of you, Tracy, stole it from me. I had twenty bucks in there and I want it back." She steps back, looking offended. "It's - it's Jessie!" She's she screams and runs off, mascara streaked face and all. I sigh and sit down at the nearest empty table. I wonder how Leslie is doing, I don't even know where she is. "Hey babe" a sickening voice behind me scorns. "Hi Megs." I say without looking around. She walks around my table in that way that looks like she is trying just too hard. She glides into the seat across from me and laces her fingers together. "We need to talk." She says in that silken smooth voice I have learned to guard myself against. "To be quite frank you have made a lot of people angry today." She says in the tone she talks to misbehaving toddlers in. "Megs, I'm not a -" She cuts me off. "Uh-uh! I'm talking here. First me, when you were flirting with Leslie, that was quite upsetting to me, as you are currently in a relationship. Or have you forgotten so soon?" She has now shifted to the "therapist" accent. "I wasn't flir-" "Im talking!" "So am I!" "I am talking no-" "Shut up!" She snaps her mouth shut. "I think we're done here, as it isn't benefitting either of us." I say. "It's been interesting being with you, but I think I'm done." Unlike I had imagined, her face broke out into a grin. I hear the dreaded clop clop clop of the principals high heeled shoes in the silence that she had made upon entering the room. "Mister Ruggen, what is the meaning of this behavior?" She says in her ice cold voice. I look around at her, a questioning look on my face. "I'm sorry mam, I don't know what you're talking ab-" "Don't play innocent with me young man you have had failing grades since the beginning of the school year and now thievery? Come and talk to me in my office right away!" She said harshly, and walked briskly off.
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby Emo_Angel » Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:35 pm

Good so far ^_^
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby {belle} » Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:51 am

Next chapter were going to take a diferent approach.
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby bonjour. » Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:41 am

been reading since it started! have the topic bookmarked, and always looking forward to a new chapter.
really good, keep it up!
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby {belle} » Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:56 am

Awww thank you! I've been so busy and lazy that I left the next chaoter half done. Gonna go finish it now for you.
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby {belle} » Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:26 pm

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{ P.O.V. of Jason }


I had been having a great day, amusing if anything else, watching Meg's minions terrorize Chase (her-soon-to-be-ex-boyfriend) and some other girl his eyes had happened to brush past. Meg was protective like that. They ran out of the back door and I shrug before starting to my class. Before I reach the door Megan appears in front of me. I smirk at her. She puts on her most sweet face and stares into my eyes. "Hey sweetie!" She says in her Barbie-like voice. I play along touch her hair, the familiar feel welcome to me. "You are otherwise engaged." I say in a gentleman-like voice. She gives me a 'why should that matter don't you love me?' Look and flutters her eyelashes. "I just need-" I break in. "You always need something, don't you? Have you ever thought about commitment?" She blushes and spots back "well you're one to talk now aren't you? Mr "I can't keep a girlfriend for more than a month"!" I lock my jaw. She had just poked the wasp's too much. "You watch it, girl! If you want a fight with me, you will end up down on your knees begging for mercy." She half-smirks. "I doubt that." Turning on her heel, she marches away. A retreat. I go the other direction, regardless of class. Then I notice that the closet light was on. That closet with all those pictures. Someone was there. I walk over and tap lightly before walking in. "Anyone home?" I say softly to the girl in there. Leslie, I think. Or Jessica. Or Skylar. She looks surprised, like a startled bunny, and holds the camera close to her chest like I would try to steal it. I scooch in and close the door, so I don't get caught. "I'm Jason... Nice pictures." I say gesturing at the walls.
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Re: just . another . day .

Postby Emo_Angel » Thu Jul 18, 2013 3:15 pm

Its been a while since you've posted LuLu. I'm still wondering when you'll give us another master piece :3 I'm sorry for not speaking up sooner but I forgot to bookmark this and i never really have much time to be online anymore i mostly just check in and give some feedback on my usual topics. Please Continue!
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