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by thaliana, » Mon Dec 05, 2011 9:05 am
Heheh. I guess stalkers with good intentions are alright - it's not like i'm out to stalk you stalk you... *blink* Anywho, I agree with your view on the last paragraph, it did deteriorate slightly, but I stand by with everything beforehand being engrossing ^^. Yay, updates! And yay, we get to meet the guy with the yummy picure <3
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by ShoeShoe » Thu Dec 15, 2011 4:49 pm
-would like to become an official stalker-
This is fantastic!!! Are you sure you're not a writer already? XD Your detail and use of imagery makes everything tie together quite nicely. Keep up the good work!!!
One note, in the last line of Chapter 5, it's course, not coarse ;]
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