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|The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:25 am

WARRIORS
The New Destiny
The Newcomer
By #aLtErNaTe~ReAlItY#



ALLEGIANCES

THUNDERCLAN
LEADER Angelstar - Long furred silver she-cat with dark blue eyes, white paws, and a white wing-shaped dash on her chest
DEPUTY Weaslestep - large black tom with ginger patches and dark amber eyes
Apprentice, Raggedpaw

MEDICINE CAT Honeysplash - delicate golden tabby with blue eyes
Apprentice, Hawkpaw

WARRIORS
Windshadow - pale gray tabby tom with yellow eyes
Eclipseheart - ginger tabby she-cat with black stripes and amber eyes
Starfire - white tabby she-cat with black stripes and pale green eyes
Aprrentice, Milkpaw
Skyblaze - gray tabby tom with blue-gray stripes and yellow eyes
Oceanwave - small tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Echowhisper - silver tabby she-cat with white paws, belly, and ice blue eyes
Furzetail - black tom with long, spiky fur and amber eyes
Apprentice, Fleetpaw
Rustfur - rust-colored tom with dark green eyes
Apprentice, Larkpaw
Fernwish - dark gray she-cat with lighter gray flecks and blue eyes
Pinestep - lithe pale tabby with amber eyes
Chirptail - black she-cat with white patches and green eyes
Whiteleg - ginger tabby tom with white legs and chest, yellow eyes
Apprentice, Nightpaw
Hazelfur - pretty tortoiseshell she-cat with pale blue eyes
Brackenfoot - golden tabby tom with matching eyes
Lionmane - thick-furred golden she-cat with neck fur than bunches up and orange eyes
Apprentice, Mosspaw
Tawny-owl - tortoiseshell she-cat with gray eyes
Tallfoot - black tom with long legs and amber eyes
Apprentice, Kestrelpaw

APPRENTICES
Raggedpaw - scruffy gray tabby she-cat with torn ears and green eyes
Hawkpaw - reddish tabby tom with large yellow eyes
Milkpaw - small white she-cat with green eyes and long fur
Fleetpaw - golden tabby tom with blue eyes
Larkpaw - fluffy gray she-cat with dull green eyes
Nightpaw - very dark gray tabby tom with red eyes
Mosspaw - tortoiseshell she-cat with orange eyes
Kestrelpaw - gray tom with brown flecks and gold eyes

QUEENS
Olivegaze - small golden tabby with olive green eyes (expecting Whiteleg's kits)
Dapplefur - pretty tortoiseshell with amber eyes(mother of Weaslefur's kits; Moonkit: pale gray she-cat with yellow eyes, Blazingkit: russet tom with amber eyes)

ELDERS
Brokenleg - scraggly gray tom with one leg that dangles uselssly and orange eyes
Ratheart - tabby she-cat with green eyes
Duskpelt - ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes
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Re: |Warriors~The New Destiny|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:31 am

SHADOWCLAN
LEADER Beetlestar - large black tom with gray eyes
Apprentice, Mallowpaw

DEPUTY Russetflame - reddish-brown she-cat with a white belly and amber eyes
MEDICINE CAT Cinderleaf - long-furred gray tom with green eyes
Apprentice, Petalsine

WARRIORS
Blackclaw - black tom with long claws and blue eyes
Seedwhisker - shaggy tortioseshell she-cat with curling whiskers and orange eyes
Goosewing - gray tabby tom with yellow eyes
Rushsong - tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes
Talonbird - hawk-colored tom with blue eyes
Apprentice, Lakepaw
Moonflight - long furred white she-cat with huge yellow eyes
Smudgepelt - brown tom with darker brown splotches and orange eyes
Badgerfang - white tom with black patches and gray eyes
Apprentice, Adderpaw
Robinflash - brown tabby she-cat with a ginger chest and blue eyes
Ryestripe - golden tabby tom with yellow eyes
Creekfeather - silver she-cat with striking pale blue eyes
Apprentice, Summerpaw
Shadowflight - solid black she-cat with holly green eyes
Driftflake - gray tom with white patches and orange eyes
Bittensoul - scraggly white tom with one blue and one yellow eye
Silkpelt - long furred tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes and white paws
Apprentice, Fallenpaw
Lunarstrike - black she-cat with white patches and gray eyes
Oddtail - tabby tom with amber eyes and a bob tail

APPRENTICES
Mallowpaw - pale tabby tom with green eyes
Petalshine - pale gray she-cat with white patches and blue eyes
Lakepaw - gray tabby tom with amber eyes
Adderpaw - tabby tom with amber eyes
Summerpaw - white she-cat with ginger stripes
Fallenpaw - pale tabby she-cat with heather blue eyes

QUEENS
Crescentmoon - pretty blue-gray she-cat with yellow eyes (mother of Beetlestar's kits; Peonykit: ginger tabby she-kit with blue eyes, Solarkit: gray tom with amber eyes, Fairykit: small silver tabby she-kit with green eyes)
Amberfur - ginger tabby she-cat with white face stripes and yellow eyes (expecting Smudgepelt's kits)
Snowblossom - pure white she-cat with long fur and blue eyes (expecting Bittesoul's kits)

ELDERS
Springstep - long legged ginger tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Palefoot - cream colored tom with dark brown tabby stripes and amber eyes
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Re: |Warriors~The New Destiny|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:32 am

WINDCLAN
LEADER Crimsonstar - reddish brown tabby tom with green eyes
DEPUTY Sheepfur - white tom with curly short fur, black paws, and amber eyes
MEDICINE CAT Appledash - tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes and a crescent shaped dash on her front left foreleg
WARRIORS
Inkfur - solid black she-cat with soft brown eyes
Runningpelt - lithe tabby tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Opalpaw
Windfury - gray tom with white patches and orange eyes
Kinktail - scraggly white tom with a bent tail and blue eyes
Gorsethorn - solid reddish she-cat with long claws and violet eyes
Sand-ash - pale ginger tabby tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Fluffypaw
Thrushflight - gray tabby tom with a white chest and blue eyes
Moorstripe - small tabby she-cat with gray eyes
Owlfeather - gray tom with brown and white flecks and large yellow eyes
Goldenclaw - honey colored tabby tom with brown eyes
Eagletalon - dark brown (almost black) she-cat with green eyes
Rabbitleap - white she-cat with brown patches and amber eyes
Brownfur - powerful brown tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Frostpaw
Slatestep - solid gray tom with pale yellow eyes
Timberfall - mottled brown she-cat with strange blue eyes
Grasswhisp - dark tabby she-cat with bright green eyes
Copperfoot - copper colored tabby tom with amber eyes

APPRENTICES
Opalpaw - pearly white she-cat with violet-blue eyes
Fluffypaw - long furred gray tom with white flecks and amber eyes
Frostpaw - silver tabby she-cat with lavender eyes

QUEENS
Irispetal - small blue-gray tabby she-cat with green eyes (expecting Thrushflight's kits)
Elders
none
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Re: |Warriors~The New Destiny|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Mon Dec 20, 2010 10:32 am

RiverClan
LEADER Troutstar - tortoiseshell she-cat with a graying muzzle and green eyes
DEPUTY Wolftail - dark gray tom with a bristly tail and yellow eyes
MEDICINE CAT Horseleg - long legged tabby tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Ripplefall

WARRIORS
Hailpelt - pale gray tom with darker gray spots and ice blue eyes
Honeydrop - golden tabby she-cat with a white belly and amber eyes
Thistlefur - black tom with a spiky pelt and yellow eyes
Reedsong - pretty tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice, Flamepaw
Shadeheart - dark gray (almost black) she cat with bright green eyes
Morningblossom - ginger tabby she-cat with green eyes
Ashcloud - pale gray tabby tom with blue eyes
Apprentice, Volepaw
Featherfur - gray calico she-cat with amber eyes
Birdflight - long furred tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Shellpelt - mottled gray tabby she-cat with green-brown eyes
Apprentice, Willowpaw
Briarfoot - tabby tom with amber eyes
Leafblaze - calico she-cat with blue eyes
Minnowstreak - beautiful silver tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Redstripe - red tabby tom with green eyes and white paws
Berrytail - cream colored tom with blue eyes
Rowanheart - solid chestnut colored tabby she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice, Mousepaw
Fawnleap - tabby she-cat with amber eyes and white markings

APPRENTICES
Ripplefall - silver tabby she-cat with a plumy tail and yellow eyes
Flamepaw - ginger tabby tom with brown eyes
Volepaw - white tom with brown patches and blue-gray eyes
Willowpaw - pale gray she-cat with blue eyes
Mousepaw - small pale brown cat with matching brown eyes

QUEENS
Aspenmarsh - pale ginger tabby she-cat with flashing green eyes (moter of Redstrike's kits; Clovenkit: dark tabby tom with a white front and green eyes, Wildkit: blue-gray tom with blue eyes, Poppykit: ginger tabby she-kit with amber eyes)
Dewdrop - pale silver she-cat with long fur and gray eyes (expecting Briarfoot's kits)
Cloverleaf - small calico she-cat with amber eyes (permanent queen, mother of Berrytail's kit; Snowkit: pure white she-kit with blind blue eyes)
Swallowfeather - tabby she-cat with a white chest and paws and amber eyes (expecting Hailpelt's kits)

ELDERS
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Re: |The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Wed Dec 22, 2010 3:58 pm

CATS IMPORTANT TO THE PLOT
Swiftriver - long furred black tom with yellow eyes; StarClan cat (ThunderClan)
Dawnstar - cream tabby she-cat with green eyes; StarClan cat (Shadowclan)
Cherryheart - red tabby she-cat with amber eyes; StarClan cat (WindClan)
Lynxstar - mottled gray tom with blue eyes; StarClan cat (RiverClan)
Soot - small pale gray tabby she-cat with soft blue eyes; loner in RiverClan area


This is NOT an original idea!! I give all my credit to Erin Hunter, author of the amazing Warriors Series
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Re: |The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:54 am

This takes place seven leaderships after Firestar. The other side of the Thunderpath has been made into another Twolegplace and more twolegs started to pour in around the lake. The Clans had to mover further up into the hills. ThunderClan still inhabits forest, though it is more dense than the ones before. ShadowClan lives in a pine-marsh like the original territories. WindClan found rocky cliffs to live one, much like the mountains but more shrubby. RiverClan lives past ThunderClan territory, by a lush river.

The new Moonpool is the Startree. It's a silver willow that glows in the moonlight and is connected to StarClan. The new gathering place is an island in the RiverClan river.
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Re: |The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby Somewhere Cold » Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:18 am

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Re: |The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby Harlen and Company » Fri Jan 07, 2011 12:51 pm

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Re: |The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby Harlen and Company » Sat Jan 15, 2011 10:51 am

~P~R~O~L~O~G~U~E~


A cold wind blew through the black branches, rattling them. The moon, barely a claw scratch in the sky, cast a faint light down on the clearing below. All was quiet, until a faint rustle in the bushes broke the silence. The bracken came alive with sound and a large tomcat strode in. He was majestic in his stride and his long black pelt gleamed in the faint moonlight. He was followed by three more cats. One, a lithe ginger tabby, walked up next to the black tom and sat down. "You are sure that the time is right, Swiftriver?"

The black tom laughed, "My dear Cherryheart, I have never been more sure in life or death."

Anoter cat, this one a mottled gray tom, sat down too. "You're far to full of yourself, my old friend." He looked around with piercing blue eyes, as if searching for something. "Where is Dawnstar? I told her to meet us at moonhigh!" He stood up and shook his ruffled pelt before tasting the air.

As if made of shadow, a beautiful cream tabby slipped into the hollow. "At peace," she meowed in a rippling voice, "I said I'd be here, and here I am." She sat down on the other side of Swiftriver and began to groom her long pelt. Turning her emerald eyes to him, she whispered, "Are you going to speak?"

Swiftriver nodded and walked a little ways away. Where he stepped, stars glittered the ground. In fact, all four of the cats had glittering pelts. The stars seemed to melt into the ground, turning the grass to water. The water froze over, leaving a sheet silver ice. The powerful tom looked to his companions. "I brought you here to give you a choice. Something is coming that will affect all of the Clans." his yellow gaze sept over the cats. There were more than four now. The whole hollow had been filled with starry cats, leaning forward to listen.

Dawnstar stepped up to the ice. "If you don't mind, I would like to go first," she said to Swiftriver, gladly taking his nod as a yes, "Then, I give you the Black Clouds." Storm clouds filled the sheet of ice, as if mirroring the sky. Though, the skys were clear. She looked around at the cats. "You all know the prophecy: Silver Trees, Black Clouds, the Full Moon, and Autumn leaves. A she and a tom, decended from the Great Four, will join together to face the darkest of nights. Well, I give you my black clouds!" Two cat shapes appeared in the ice, almost identicle. Matching gray eyes peered out.

Gasps came up from the crowds. A grizzled black she-cat stepped forth, blue eyes blazing. "Yes, my grandchildren are good cantidates, but are they ready? Their ceremony was only a moon ago." Dawnstar stalked up to her until they were nose-to-nose. "I understand your concerns, Shadowheart, but I've made my decision." The grizzled old she-cat gave a barely perceptable nod and stepped back into the crowd of cats. Dawnstar looked up at Swiftriver and twitched her ears for him to come forward.

"Thank you, Dawnstar," he meowed in a deep gravelly voice. His long furred tail swept the grass as he padded up to the smooth sheet of ice. "It is high time for me to choose the fate of my grandchildren. They will represent the Silver Trees." Two silver tabby shapes appeared on the ice. Intelligent eyes looked out from a grove of waving willow trees, silver in the moonlight.

The collective gasps were a little quieter this time. A few jeers arose from the cats around Swiftriver. "You were always a hippocrite, Swiftriver!" one called. Another, a pretty tabby with white brindle markings, stepped forth. Her amber eyes blazed with anger towards the black tom. "You were meant to choose cats that are worthy, not your kin. That is selfish of you!" Swiftriver regarded her with a calm, somewhat irked expression. "Kestrelwing, I do not choose this on account that they are related to me. I believe, and so do my comrades, that these cats are well deserving of a responsibility such as this." He nodded, beckoning the old gray leader forward. "Lynxstar, it is your time to choose."
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Re: |The New Destiny~Warriors Mini-book~Book One|

Postby 11zoey11 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:21 am

it sounds good
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