Klain wrote:A
I just realized that I start every paragraph with I. It annoys me. I'm really trying to start with another word, but no. Ugh. Do you have the same 'problem' sometimes? What are you doing that this sin't happeing (to much)?
- Like Winged said, it doesn't matter in the first draft, but when you're trying to revise and redraft, then you should definitely pay attention to the little stylistic/flow things. Just think of all the ways you could rephrase a sentence without making it sound weird--a sentence like "I punch the table" could be adapted to "My fist smashes into the table" but not "Into the table punches my fist". Just be aware of it, and you'll do fine.
I alwys trying to change the sentence but it turn out to this "Into the table punches my fist"
It's not ready yet, so I guess it's not such a big problem c:
Do you write a lot of fanfiction? What kind? How does it affect your other, longer writings?
I wrote them when I was a kid. A very lot. Lol. Now I don't do it, it's just doesn't my thing anymore