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Royal White Fawn

Postby Benathorn » Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:38 am

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Valdus

Owner: Tyasi
Gender: Male
Breedable: Yes
Type: Royal White Elkrin





A Rarity Among Rares

To see a Royal Elkrin among any of these elegant beasts is a rarity of it's own. But to see two Royal Whites that are twins is unheard of! This is has never been document before and even though this is certainly during a time of merriment, it is still quite a sight to see. A Royal White stag was last documented 200 years ago before the great extinction of it's kind. It seems that the Royal's genes have been passed down through these two siblings who bear snow white pelts and the purest of hearts. This little male has golden hooves and antlers to proclaim his right to his royal blood. Soft blue eyes tell of a past long lost but born again. These two will need to be taken great care of and watched closely. Any Royal, be it crimson, white, or blue, are precious to the Elkrin species and it means that the Elkrins are starting to make a come back now that the Royals have begun to emerge once more.


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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby Sable. » Fri Feb 15, 2013 7:38 am

:Form:

Name:

貴重な or Kichōna
It means 'precious' in Japanese. She was named for the colours on her, they are like precious metals.

Breedable:

When he is older, yes,

Short Story:


{told in his point of view}

Hello there! I'm Kichōna, call me Ki though. Like the word 'key'.
This is the story of my name, and how I picked my rider.

As a elkrin, the humans are always trying to get up to the top of the falls to find us and 'bond' with us. They say they wanted to help, but I didn't believe them. And being me was a special danger, I wasn't aware but I was very rare specimen. I could make the bad humans lots of money, I think that's what they call it.

The day I went away from the falls was a grave mistake. It was just a gorgeous warm sunny day, I was frolicking in the grass and flowers. There was this one butterfly; brilliant orange and black. It was so pretty, I was playing chase with it. What I didn't notice was the fading thundering of the water fall and the setting sun. When I did lose the butterfly, it was almost dark and I was lost; the falls far behind me.

It was cold and lonely here, just a field of grass. I curled up in the grass sadly and fell asleep. While I was dreaming, a human spotted me. She was studying me, which scared away the group of hunter humans away.

The next morning the human was still there. It was one of those 'rune bearers' my mama had told me of, they look after some rune dragons. Like the riders mama told me about but with dragons. It said hello, but I got scared and ran away. This was the evil humans cue as soon as I was away from the girl human. They chased after me for ages, with shiny objects in their hands and cainine creatures at my heels. But I soon grew tired and fell, so the wrapped me in nets and dragged me away.

Lucky for me, the girl human had been following.

That night the evil humans and their scary pets where asleep by the fire, I couldn't sleep. I was overtired from trying to escape the net, and sore form them dragging me along the hard floor. My side was covered in cuts form the rope nets and grazes from stones on the floor.

But then there was rustling in the bushes, and the little rune dragon from before popped out! Then the girl human! The girl cut the nets off of me with a sharp knife-thing and pulled them off me.

I was still too tired to walk, so she carried me for a very long way back to her home, and tended to my wounds. She gave me food and water. While I stayed wary, she never put me in nets or try to trade me for human moneys. I decided it was time when she was willing to try make her way up the falls to get me home.

I pulled at her clothing, and refused to go.
I imprinted with the human, and tried to get her to ride me. Just like mama had told me. At first she refused, but soon warmed up to the idea. She still says she won't ride me until I'm stronger and a little older, but she is my rider now.

And she gave me my name. It means 'precious'.
And that, is my story.
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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby R0be0 » Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:38 am

:Form:

Name:

Champion of the Sovereign God (Sovereign or Champion)

Breedable:

I guess? (It doesn't really matter.)

Short Story:

WIP
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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby maluruloki » Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:45 am

((Form re-posted))

:Form:

Name:

Fitzroy - Old French, "son of the king"

Breedable:

Indeedy.

Short Story:

(Word count = 1,468)
A Weakness for Chocolate... wrote:It was an unusually warm early-Spring afternoon, with the sun shining brightly and the pigeons cooing softly in the eaves. They clucked and spun, all fluffed up with amorous intentions.

Matteo frowned at the “love birds” as he passed beneath the shadow of the awning. He was tired of it all.

All the pastel colors that the upper class were wearing. The pervasive perfumes that wafted through the air, singularly lovely but now a cauldron of cloying fruity nonsense. Bouquets of flowers were being handed off left and right into open arms from both florists and significant others. All of the shop windows were strung with curling paper streamers in every shade of red, from palest shrimp-pink to the darkest maroon, the color of a fine red wine.

Matteo kicked a rock into a puddle at the side of the cobblestone street and grumbled.

He was alone today. And it sucked.

His Rune Dragon, Muse, had elected to stay inside and with good reason; her gorgeous reddish color scheme put her most at risk for being sighted on this one day of the year. No one would ignore her on Valentine’s Day. It was like she was asking to be stolen off his very shoulder.

So like I said…he was alone.

His reflection glared back at him from the glass window of a confectionary. The table inside featured a wide array of fine chocolates, all nestled in paper mache and aligned neatly within themed boxes. There was the Sweetheart Box with white chocolate and champagne sea shells. There was the Romantic Box with dark chocolates filled with cherry ganache. He leaned in closer as one particular box caught his eye: the Lonely Box. Inside was a single piece of chocolate about the size of his palm. It was shaped like a jumping deer and he could just read the tag: “Eat this sweet for luck and love will come to you in a leap and bound.” Snorting, he smirked and walked away, brushing away the curiosity blossoming within.

He was back a moment later, palms pressed against the glass. How much was it…? Oh. That much. He reached into his pocket and sighed. He had just enough.

Maybe Muse would eat part of it.

The shop keeper gave him a judgmental once-over but the exchange went smoothly and he left the store with package in hand. Immediately, he brought himself up short because there was suddenly a crowd on the sidewalk! He looked left and right, wondering what on earth could have caused such a sudden clumping of humanity. The women were twittering, the men were jostling elbows, and children shoved between the voluminous skirts to reach the street. Matteo rose up on his toes, trying to see over the barrier of piled hair-dos and wide-brimmed tea hats. A parade?

Oh yuck. A Valentine’s Day parade…

Matteo flicked a dismissive hand at the gathering and turned for home, unknowingly following along the same route as the parade. Little snippits of conversation reached his ears.

“…not seen in hundreds of years!”

“..wonder how he caught it. It’s not legal, I bet.”

“Oh, he’ll get away with it. These foreign princes always do.”

Matteo paused on a corner where the crowd was sparser. That last comment got under his skin suddenly. If there was something that really irked him, it was upper classmen abusing their privileges. Tucking the parcel firmly under his arm, he took a step into the street and craned to see.

It wasn’t a parade. Well, not really. It was a procession with a man on a white horse leading the way. A smaller creature was tied to the horse’s saddle and Matteo squinted, trying to figure out what it was at this distance.

“A Royal Elkrin.” He looked down to his right to see a small child standing there, happily enjoying a small square of pink-flecked chocolate. “Firs’ one in a long time. The man’s mean though. See? It’s afraid.” Baffled, Matteo turned and looked again. The much-smaller white deer-like creature did seem to be acting skittishly and quite nervously around the crowd. His heart panged. It was just a baby then, with barely a set of antlers arcing back from its skull.

“What a jerk…” Matteo muttered, pulling his cap lower on his head. The small child beside him nodded. “I hope it gets loose.” He saw that the other lane in the street was clear and decided to sneak across before the procession got closer. He made it about halfway when a horse-drawn cart suddenly came careening around the corner. Only a quick backwards skitter saved him from being stomped into the stone street by steel-shod hooves and he ended up falling hard onto his back. He gasped hopelessly for air, only half hearing the horse driver’s vile cursing, and rolled onto his stomach. Getting the wind knocked out of you is so god-awful, he thought as he finally got a full breath. Wincing, he got up onto one knee and realized that his chocolate package was missing!

“Pardon me, but you’re in the way.” Matteo looked up to see the man on the white horse giving him a gimlet stare. Even the horse seemed irritated, laying its ears back. Matteo immediately went on the defensive and chose not to move, feigning a need to catch his breath more. He placed a hand on his chest and heaved a few times. “I asked you to move, boy.” A ripping sound made Matteo look up to see the little white deer getting into a box of chocolate – HIS CHOCOLATE!

“HEY!” The little white deer just took a huge bite of the confection and looked benignly up at him with the biggest blue eyes Matteo had ever seen. “That’s my chocolate…” he said half-heartedly as the creature took another huge bite, the chocolate now staining his lips.

“Not anymore. Now MOVE, YOU SLUM-SPAWN. You’re making me LATE.” The man jerked hard on the white fawn’s noose and it choked, coughing up a piece of partially-chewed chocolate.

Matteo saw red.

Before he had really thought about it, he had risen to his feet and grabbed a hold of the horse’s reins. The horse immediately tried to shy and shrieked, but the young man kept a strong hold. The man couldn’t control his horse, hold the length of rope and grab his sword at the same time. He chose to drop the rope and there was suddenly the sharp end of a rapier at Matteo’s throat.

“Get your dirty hands off of my horse, you half-bred twit,” the man spat. The rapier’s tip seemed to brush against his skin then and Matteo very slowly took a step away, cursing his quick temper. “Someone get the authorities! I want this man in chains!” A gentle nudge to Matteo’s side made him stumble away, flailing a bit. The white fawn was following slowly after him now, its hooves making tiny ringing sounds on the cobblestone. “THIEF!!! HE’S STEALING MY ELKRIN!”

“SILENCE!” The voice rang in the street and even the pigeon ceased cooing for a moment. Matteo couldn’t stop staring at the tiny fawn. It was leaning against him now, like a large dog, and nuzzling under his limp hand. “You there. This Elkrin claims you?” The young man looked up to see a member of the city authority, but wearing a uniform unfamiliar to him. Instead of the usual blue, it was bronze-gold. Matteo stuttered, holding both hands up placatingly. The taller man smiled beatifically. “I guess he does then.” A purring coo seemed to come from the fawn, who was now cleaning the excess chocolate from Matteo’s pants.

“Excuse me, but who do you think you are?! That creature is MINE!” The man on the horse was now quite angry.

“He will never be yours, Duke Eldrige. The Elkrin choose their Own. I suggest you leave before I fetch a higher power.” Matteo could feel the hard stare between the two men, but it was Eldrige who backed down first. The Duke gave him a venomous glare before gesturing and the entire procession turned to leave.

“You’re lucky. Both of you…” the man murmured as the crowd began to disperse. Matteo gave the empty chocolate box, now crumpled and muddied, a forlorn look. When the man realized what he was staring at, he began to laugh loudly from his stomach. “Oh-ho-ho! They got you!”

“What do you mean?” Matteo said, now thoroughly confused.

“Remember the tag?”

And Matteo did. He looked down at the Elkrin fawn and sighed.

“Another mouth to feed… Come on, Fitzroy, you bottomless pit. It’s dinner time.” The white Elkrin fawn did a coquettish circle of leaps around Matteo before settling at his left side once more.

So much for a lonely Valentine’s Day!

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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby Tyasi » Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:51 am

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:Form:

Name:

Valdus
The name Valdus means powerful in German, but I for see this little fellow not to be powerful physically, but powerful in ideals and pure in choices. Strong with words and calm-headed with zeal. He is the start of proud and powerful beginning with the new dawn of Elkrin and should help be part of its symbol.

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Breedable:

Yes

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Short Story:

After another more small revision the story has now become 1,497 words. ^^

Manonvilla a town that was in the joy of a celebration with lanterns and baubles hanging from rooftops and lampposts, streamers of pastel shades entwined to make patterns as they met from across the street. Within the town square where all the commotion was with music playing and dancing occurred in the masses.

Moving forward with Althaea at her side many people continued their merriment until Althaea sneezed at the sickening sweet scents of the perfumes dowsed on all the women.

The music halted, most of the people turned their head at the foreigner and especially her Steed. As the awkward moment continued a hearty deep laugh erupted from the beer barrel tables. Thundering over to them, a large robust man with soft gray-blue eyes and a fire-tanned face dirtied with soot with onyx hair and gnarled beard.

“Welcome!” he cried out with his swig sloshing out copious amounts of lightly fermented berry-juice. “I may bea blacksmit’, but I can be a great one man welcome!” he guffawed. “I can’t believe word gotten out so fasta tha’ even Elkrin Ridahs came for our wee new holiday!” he chortled gruffly. Althaea found the large human the new highlight of her attention as she neared the bulky mass of muscle. Stretching out her neck to sniff his charcoal scented body, a pair of large callused hands began to gently stroke her pink head. “Aye, never thought I would meet one of these lassies,” as he continued to stroke Althaea’s fur. “Ah! Glad you came through our town first and not that accursed Solice City!” he concluded with a slight aggressive tone at the name of Solice City.

The other townspeople grumbled at the mention of the name and tried to cure their displeasure with their party. The music started up again and the citizens finished where they left off previously. The blacksmith had returned to his seat and beckoned Tyasi over with Althaea already approaching him. Taking a stout stool next to him, Tyasi gave small smile and asked about Solice city and this celebration as she didn’t remember any holiday like this on her calendar before.

“Solice city is the neighboring town on the other side of our feuded area. They aren’t a city eitha, just ‘nother town that has a city-standard ego. Both our towns are just old farming communities under our lords. They were granted all this land over a hundred years ago by the king and started that share croppin’ system. Just the land in the middle of our towns has no real owner and has been a battlefield for our petty war to see who it rightfully belongs too. It’s still inhabited by people and often suffers crop-damage from our battles. We owned a doe and Solice had two stags to prove nobility. Weren’t royals though, just some pale furred ones. None of those Elkrin had riders and just were fo’ show, but an anarchist from Twili Village just snuck in one day and released the lot of ‘em! Our doe apparently coupled and later was found in labor in a farmer’s stable and gave birth to a boy of the moon during the wee a.m. hours and a girl of the sun during midday after some complications in ‘tween. Then one day the mother ‘posedly abandoned them, but Farmer probably just took ‘em. Twili gave us the moon boy and the sun girl to Solice as peace tokens to buy out their independence. Today is the day we all get to see the lunar joy.” he explains in a slow tone.

Suddenly fanfares busted through the party and feet paused and faces turned with attention towards the stage that had a penned in fence appearance. Out came a plump man, with rosy cheeks and a silver top hat and with him an aged withered woman in matching apparel, presumably his wife. “Here is the Fawn you’ve been waiting for, Cheers for the end of the war!” he stated. Clearing his throat once more became the cue to let the Fawn out. A thin, frail creature that seemed to be well groomed bleated in depression. Refusing to stand, it laid on the stage, ears fell back in fear. Murmurs through the crowd slipped through and many started to clap not really knowing or caring if the poor thing was well or not. Feeling angered by their ignorance, Tyasi wove through the crowd wanting to protect the infant. Althaea following in response to her master’s sudden movement and once getting closer to the stage, the fawn made eye contact with this woman. She carried an air far greater than the humans around her, her aura and scent seemed similar too his mother. Perking up the white fawn wobbled up, steadily taking baby steps toward the edge of the stage, often stumbling along the way.

The lord and his wife both seemed baffled at the little Fawn, his royal blue eyes with pure intent on being beside the warmth of this woman. As Althaea and Tyasi broke through the crowd and neared the stage, the pure snow Fawn’s eyes widen at the sight of Althaea. He added more energy to his goal and teetered quickly to the edge only to be obstructed by the tall wooden posts. “Maaaaaaaaaaoooom” he cried like a startled fawn distant from its mother. The fawn continued his cries as he tried to force his way past the fence, reaching out a hand Tyasi placed her hand on his snout to console him. Whispering sweet words in hopes he wouldn’t overexert himself.

Althaea leaned forward to meet the fawn. In quick response he managed to force his head through with a pop and created a new predicament. He was stuck, but calm. Nuzzling his snout against Althaea’s reminded him of the feelings of his original mother. The actual posts were loosely gummed down and with a little effort Althaea began pushing them apart with her head.

Finally breaching the divider the Fawn fell to the ground and quickly made way to hide under the legs of the doe. Quite confused by the presence under her, Althaea took a few steps back only to have the fawn return to his sanctuary. Tyasi knelt down to make contact with the fawn, but paused as a bony finger tapped her shoulder. “Leave,” creaked the voice like an unoiled machine. Turning her head slightly she looked up at the weathered face of the Lord’s wife. “YOU have ruined this occasion! You don’t even belong here, now get away from our town’s prize!” exclaiming with a raised high voice.

Althaea snorted angrily at the tone of the woman, but felt a hand touch her shoulder. “No, Althaea…she’s right. C’mon.” And with solemn glances back at the fawn both left the town square. Slowly exiting the town, both felt their hearts beaten and pummeled, speared and staked to the ground to shrivel in the sun for what they had done. They felt despicable leaving the little prince behind. Reaching outside the town they decided to take the forest around both these two mini-kingdoms. Before they took a chance to fully depart a familiar cry was heard again. “Maaaaaooom” called them to turn. At the summit of the hill the image of the blacksmith carrying the fawn like a doll with a heavy smile engraved on his chiseled face came to the trio. “Words from our lord be on this nota ‘ere.” he stated in a gruff, peppy tone and passing her a letter. Placing the little fellow down, he walked off waving with his massive hands in the air.

Skirting to Tyasi’s side the Fawn nudged and rubbed against the pants leg of her. “Ma” he bleated before he took a few steps towards Althaea and taking a spot right beside her nimble legs. Staring at the little fellow Tyasi shook her head in approval as she tore open the note and let her eyes absorb the message.


Manonvilla Lord Lunate wrote:I think this little one is better off with his Rider than as a town's breathing icon. You better take good care that royal buck! He's the pride of our little Manonvilla and should be treated as such. He’ll be a powerful ally for you in the future or should I say partner? Good luck to all of you.

PS. It didn't take long for my wife to decide to leave him with you, after hearing his sorrowful bleats her heart melted. Then again she is also a mother too.



“Powerful huh?” Tyasi mumbled out-loud. “A name for such a thought should mean powerful itself, no?” she questioned the little fawn playfully with his head leaning to the right side. “How about Valdus? Got a good head on your shoulders and have a pretty powerful influence too.” she continued while beaming. The fawn jumped at the sound of his new name as Tyasi repeated it once more. Taking a spot in between his moms he let them lead the way.



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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby Kirbylover901 » Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:54 am

Dropping out for the lovelace male... still love him though! <3
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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby Wifflebee » Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:21 am

    Oh. My. Gosh. ;A; Definite WIP!!

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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby Manx » Fri Feb 15, 2013 11:08 am

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Damaris’s warm sides pressed against my legs as we elegantly moved as one, my hips swaying to match her movement. I held my arms rigidly in the air next to me, determined not to use the touch of hand to guide Damaris. As it was, she was responding beautifully to my leg, obeying commands that would be virtually impossible for anyone who happened to be viewing us to see. In that moment felt a flush of pride for my dear friend, as now we truly were like the Elkrins and Riders of old. We moved as one, as equals, without fighting one another; exactly how it should be.

We had come quite some way since I had first met Damaris, just over a year ago now. The meeting had changed me, not only emotionally, but also physically. Much to my surprise, I had noticed small, yet noticeable, changes in my appearance since that time. I had grown taller, slimmer, and my hair had become a shade lighter. Coincidently, I now looked as though I may have been born in the Oriental Isles; the very place Damaris hailed from. More than that, though, I felt the magic through my veins. Although completely unnoticeable on the outside, I could feel it within me, strengthening our bond only more.

My concentration was shattered as I felt Damaris utter a warning of someone approaching. Although I could see nor hear anything, I trusted she could do both far better than I. I gently lowered my hands to Damaris’ neck as she shuffled her hooves, feeling her nervousness; yet another change that had occurred over the course of time. To this I was not quite sure if Damaris’s so called communication was real, or simply me being over reactive to her own small reactions. Damaris was not capable of speech, however, I often felt as though I could feel her thoughts. They never came in the form of words, but rather as emotions that could be interpreted as words. Of course, it could very well simply be me becoming much more accustomed to the Elkrin’s body language, and then quickly mistaking is as an actual feeling. With magic involved, who knew?

“Sahana!” came a call, shattering the quiet day. I felt Damaris give a quick sigh of relief as we both recognized the voice. It was simply a friend of ours from my village, Adara, whom I had known since childhood. However, I felt a twinge of worry at the note of urgency in my friend’s tone. She was not one to scare easy or over react; if she was seeking me out like this, something must be wrong.

Adara burst through the bushes to our right, nearly doubling over as she gasped for air. “What’s wrong?” I snapped, alarmed now by my friend’s reaction. Damaris wheeled around to face her, refusing to still her ever dancing hooves.

It took a moment more for her to straighten, though it was still obvious her run had taken a toll on her. “A trader’s cart tipped over by the cliffs,” she finally managed to gasp, and my brow furrowed at the news. If that was all, wouldn’t it be much easier to reach someone from the village, which was far closer than I was? “I don’t-“ I began, but was quickly interrupted. “The trader was fine; he managed to get to safety. It’s what he was carrying that it is in trouble,” Adara continued, now regaining her breath. “Sahana, he was carrying an Elkrin fawn.”

I was both devastated and excited by the news. An Elkrin fawn? It was almost unbelievable. Although it was true I had succeeded in finding one myself, sightings of other Elkrins were still rare and far between. The fact that a fawn had been found only proved that the species was drawing back from the brink of extinction, and perhaps returning permanently.

“Where?” I asked, snapping from my thoughts. She responded quickly, and I immediately recognized the place she described. It was a treacherous area, one which I myself had had some extremely close calls on. Touching my heels lightly upon Damaris’ side, she sprang forward, obeying me without hesitation. We raced into the forest, clearing fallen logs and dodging trees with ease. My hands gently touched her neck, guiding her to the place Adara had described.

In minutes we cleared the edge of the forest, slowing to a rapid trot as we approached the fallen cart. A small crowd had gathered around the wagon, and the man I assumed was the trader was pacing along the cliff’s edge, running his fingers nervously through his hair. The crowd parted as we approached, allowing Damaris easy access to the wagon’s side. The trader looked up suddenly as he noticed our approach, relief etched across his face at our arrival.

“He fell down there when my cart tipped, and landed on a ledge,” he blurted as I dismounted, pointing urgently at cliff’s ledge. Leaning over a bit, I could just make out a white tail draped precariously off the ledge. By a stroke of luck, the fawn had managed to land on a small outcropping only a few feet below the ledge, saving him from a bone crushing drop. However, it was likely he would be frightened half to death from his fall, and wouldn’t likely come willingly to us.

I closed my eyes for a moment as I realized what would have to be done. Heights had never really been something I was fond of, and this area wasn’t exactly known for its stability. The elements had slowly worn away the rock in this area, leaving many places brittle and crumbling; not exactly a place you wanted to go rock climbing. Nevertheless, we couldn’t leave the little fawn here, so I resigned myself to the task at hand. Gritting my teeth, I leaned down to grab a firm hold on the ledge, hoping to swing down a little ways away from the fawn, and slowly work my way towards him. It appeared to be the most solid way, and the ledge was just large enough to walk along.

Before I was able to do this though, something firmly grabbed my shirt and forcefully yanked me away from the cliff’s edge. With a frown, I looked up to Damaris, who was now standing over me with a stubborn glint in her eye. Dusting myself off, I sent her a glare which she promptly returned. “You can’t come with me; the ledge is much too small to support you, and this is the only way to get to the fawn. Unless you have a better plan?” I asked irritably, still glaring at her.

Damaris gave a snort, but she seemed to give in a little. Once again I reached for the ledge, but this time she made no move to stop me. Gathering my courage, I slowly slipped from the ledge to dangle in mid air, then released. My legs abruptly hit the small ledge, and thankfully, it remained solid. Releasing my breath, I heard a nervous snort above me, and looked up to find Damaris watching me. “I’m fine girl,” I murmured, slowly beginning to edge my way towards where the fawn had landed.

Within moments I reached him, and nearly gasped at the sight. The fawn had scrambled to his feet at my arrival, and was now glaring at me through ice blue eyes. His pelt was white as snow, and he stood with a look of nobility, despite the fact that he lifted one leg, which had apparently been injured in his fall. No fear shone in his eyes, but rather a look of defiance, as though daring me to get any closer. It was quite impressive, even though he was tiny. I slowly ducked my head, gently murmuring words of reassurement. The fawn gave a small snort, but made no move to approach me. It was Damaris that finally got his attention, as she bleated with worry. He appeared to be reassured by the noise of his own kind, and tentatively stepped forward. I took this moment to step forward, scooping the fawn into my arms. For a moment he thrashed, but stilled as he curiously looked at Damaris above us.
Within moments I hefted the fawn up to the ledge, and with the help of the crowd still there, was pulled to safety. Damaris curiously approached the fawn, and he struggled to his feet to greet her. The trader pulled my attention away from the meeting as he began to speak. “I had heard someone here had befriended an Elkrin, which was why I brought him here. I thought it would be better for him with his own kind. Apparently him and his sister were found and traded several times before he came to me…” He murmured, and then hesitated. “What now?”

I turned to him with a slight smile, cocking an eyebrow. “You said he had a sister?”


(( Left it as a bit of cliff hanger, in case I win him and the owner of his twin would like to continue it with a reunion. ^^; ))
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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby Dragonfire13 » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:26 pm

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Name:

Moon

Breedable:

Yes

Short Story:

Moon was born with his twin sister who was gold like the sun. Moon ha a kind heart and still does. But one day he got lost. He was playing in some woods with a rune dragon and was chasing after the rune. The rune flew faster and faster and higher tell he was out of Moon's sight. Moon stopped and looked around confused about where he was. Moon started to run faster in the way he came blindly but soon stopped knowing he wouldn't be able to get home like that. Moon soon wondered into a small town place where humans lived. They all watched him when he passed. Moon jumped when he heard a dog bark and thought 'Where am I?'

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Re: Royal White Fawn

Postby .:FarmGirlAtHeart:. » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:53 pm

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Name:

Scuba
I don't know why I thought of this, and it certainly isn't the most royal name, but, that's his name, and so there is no arguing.

Breedable:

No, I'll explain why in the story.

Short Story:

It was a crisp Autumn day in Eldemore. The sun was shining bright, yet there was a chill in the air that would dig deep into your bones, even with a sweater. The trees were loosing there leaves, and the cold wind would come by and sweep them away, sending them on a swirling journey to who knows where. As you walked, you heard and felt the colorful Autumn leaves crunching under your feet, making it imposable to walk silently. In the usually quiet woods, it was if some magical hand had reached down, plugging in the power of the forest. You could see numerous breeds of runes darting here and there, preparing for the cold weather in which the dark nights and sudden gusts of wind would bring. Every once in a while, if you were very observant, you could hear the growl of a rare, lone Leone, or a pack of hunting Dire Wolves, watching you from some hidden place, although you could never see them. It was on this day, that I met my first Elkrin, and became the newest Elkrin Rider, even if the guy is still a baby. I was walking through the woods, wearing the worst possible choice of clothes. I was wearing grey shorts, thin ones at that, a white tank top, only coming down to my belly button, and a moss green, button up sweater. You could easily see how grubby I looked, my clothes dirty and torn, and my skin scuffed and scratched. I didn't care, however, and I felt like clothes meant the least compared to how one acted. Shivering, I pulled my sweater closed, letting the skin on my arms get exposed more. I was looking for what I had heard the night before. You see, the night before this one, while lying in bed, I heard the sounds of runes, drakes, ancients, and normal alike, Elkrins, Leones, and Dire Wolves. It sounded like the poor creatures were in stress, and calling for help. Just as I was about to give up my search, I came to a clearing. The clearing should have been happy, but there were cages, of all shapes and sizes lined up. I gasped, my hand dropping the sweater and flying up to cover my mouth. It was one of those illegal circus things! I quietly creeped into the clearing, weaving in and out of cages. I went to help many of the animals, but all of them seemed to be aggressive beyond belief. I couldn't risk getting mauled, so I continued on, making a map in my mind. I was going to tell the police about this, as soon as I got back. I continued on, my eyes meeting those of the frightened, stressed animals that were in the cages. Just as I got to a fierce looking Dire Wolf, my heart skipped a beat. “No! They can't have babies here! That's just to much!” I exclaimed out loud. For, to my purest horror, in between the cages of a Dire Wolf and a Leone, was the most beautiful, white, royal, Elkrin. He was just a baby, looking no more then a few months old. My brown, confused eyes met his blue, stressed ones, and I felt myself relaxing. In his eyes was all the knowledge of the world, and such an understanding, that it was clear he had lived many lives before being reborn into this one. I was just about to talk to him, when I heard feet, thumping and crunching on the frozen, leaf covered ground. It seemed my exclamation had alerted the owner. I turned and ran. The baby Elkrin stood up and made a low, crying, desperate sound as I left, and I knew he was calling for me to come back and help him out of his prison. My heart ached as I left him, and I knew he was the one for me. In that brief moment when our eyes had connected, we had formed a bond like no other, and we had been connected for life. Just as I heard the owner shooting at me, I reached the cover of the trees. I ran back to my house as fast as I could, and dialed the sheriff’s number. Later that day, under the cover of night, I returned with the sheriff to that horrible place. He instructed me to unlock all the cages, while he took care of the owner. I did as told, and soon the place was crazier then a bee hive being bothered. There where animals everywhere! I tried to keep track of the baby royal Elkrin, however in all the chaos, I couldn't. He was lost to my eyes in the mob of confused animals, and I had no choice but to move on. I had lost my best friend, my world. The sheriff came out of a little tent with the owner hand cuffed. I followed him to the police station, although my mind had stayed at the circus with that little Elkrin. I went back that evening, and my feet led me to his cage. His cage was empty and trampled, in fact, the entire clearing was. All the grass had been pressed down, and there was shattered objects everywhere. I heard the snap of the branch behind me, and I turned, afraid of what I would see. It was nothing bad, however, as looking back at me was the little Elkrin. “Scuba!” I yelled, “You're ok!” I don't know why I called him Scubba, but he responded, bounding over to me, and we started jumping and prancing. I played with him for what felt like no more then a few seconds however, before I saw a large, painful looking cut going in between his legs. I took him to the Eldmore vet, who said that he would be fine, but would never be able to breed. I set out to find his real Elkrin family, and soon did. Well, that is, I found his twin sister. It was amazing to see them together. Well, I suppose it all turned out ok, after all. All the animals were safe, Scuba got reunited with his sister, and I became my dream, an Elkrin Rider.
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