Re: Batch #730

Postby mango marmalade,, » Fri Feb 24, 2017 2:13 pm

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Re: Batch #730

Postby legendari » Sat Feb 25, 2017 7:33 am

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must have this bab oml <3


dropping ;-; good luck everyone! <3
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Re: Batch #730

Postby Snuggle_Bean » Thu Mar 02, 2017 9:43 am

Bump Ends Tomorrow, Will Extend 1 Time If Anyone Needs To Finish?
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Re: Batch #730

Postby legendari » Thu Mar 02, 2017 3:07 pm

i'd love an extension <3 i'll be busy this week, maybe until the weekend?
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Re: Batch #730

Postby Snuggle_Bean » Thu Mar 02, 2017 5:35 pm

It will be extended to the 4 of march!!!
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Postby lunala. » Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:15 am

      ▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓ Taytum ▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓


      Username : Eve & Kait

      Name : Taytum

      Gender : Bigender, but leaning more towards male self. Although he feels feminine at times.

      Likes : Adventuring
      Weird smelling objects
      Walking
      His family
      His family name
      Butter Cake
      His wooden bear Oakley
      Nature
      Outdoors
      Classical music

      Dislikes : Cleaning his bedroom
      Meeting new people
      Staying indoors
      Disobeying rules
      Cold drinks
      Mainstream topics
      Socializing with new people
      Being not taken care of
      Lemons
      Seafood

      Personality : Taytum is a pretty curious little one who loves to go and explore the world around him. Although he doesn't break the rules. He’s more of a rule follower and a goodie-goodie. Taytum will never disobey his parents because he knows that he’ll receive consequences which he doesn't want. Well, he’ll feel rebellious at times and will break the rules occasionally. Other than that the thing he cares most about in his life is his family. He cares about his royal bloodline and wants the kingdom to be in good hands. Taytum doesn’t have that many friends, and is really shy when meeting new people. He won't open up to them until he feels comfortable being around them. Also, Taytum enjoys playing with anything or anybody that he can find. His favorite toy is his tiny wooden bear named Oakley that his brother Anthony gave to him as a gift for his birthday.

      Story : Chapter : 1 - A bit about my life
      It was a foggy winter afternoon, quiet for the post part. Nobody was outside in the forest; only workers. Life was hard here in the clouded and river wood forest, not everybody earned a profit. Although the king and queen (a.k.a my parents), made life fair for everybody; making sure that nobody suffered from poverty. Everybody had a roof over their head, warmth, and people who loved them. It was beautiful, although my parents aren't going to stay forever. Somebody needed to inherit the throne when they're time is up.
      My older brother Anthony, was a wood carver, typical occupation for almost everybody here. Hey, they made a lot of currency to. He made fascinating pieces of wood, his little wooden bears were my favorite. Anthony always wanted to try something new, something that someone has never done. His dream is to make something that somebody here in the forest will benefit from. Something that will change life here. I believe in him, but of course that's going to take a while- not trying to be negative.
      When I was finished eating brunch, I decided to go and pay a visit to my brother. Heading out the castle gates, and making my way towards my brother's tiny little workshop.

      Chapter : 2 - A woodcarver
      "Hey Anthony!" I said, entering the workshop looking around for my brother.
      "Hey Taytum!" Anthony said. He had his work googles on, so that means he was really getting into something.
      "What'cha doin' there?"
      "Nothin' new, just tryin' to carve another llama out of this plywood I have here." He showed me his stack of plywood. The stack was all scattered across his feet; looks like a splinter hazard.
      "You should really try something new." I said.
      "I'm tryin' to think, but I just can't think of anythin' right now. Why don't you go back to the castle and go play with you're little wooden bear?"
      "Hey Anthony, why did you step out of line to inherit the throne?" I said, ignoring what he said before."
      "Umm... don't really want to talk about it."
      "BUT PLEASEEEEEE TELL ME"
      "Ugh, fine. I just thought that it was all pointless to... you know... be the next king. It just- doesn't really interest me. I'm more into engineering, not living that royal lifestyle."
      I understood his reasoning. It's a full commitment to become royalty. "Well, if that's what you think. Then that's what you think." I said.
      "Yeah, it took me a while to come to a conclusion. Anyways, go back to the castle."
      "Alrighty!" I said, and walked out of his workshop, heading to the castle.


      Chapter : 3 - Mother and Father
      As I walked inside of the castle, I saw my mother and father. They were talking to each other, not sure what they were talking about though. I walked towards them. "Hey mom, hey dad!"
      "But then they're won't be-" my dad suddenly stopped speaking to my mother as soon as he heard me shout hello to them. "Hello Taytum, how are you?"
      "Good evening Taytum." Said my mother.
      "I'm doing great! Thank you for asking." I replied.
      "Excuse us Taytum, but we're a bit busy right now. Could you please head somewhere please?" Said my father. He looked anxious.
      "Um, all right..." I said slowly, wondering what they were talking about.
      As I walked up the stone stairs into my bedroom I grabbed my tiny wooden bear, and jumped onto my bed; laying face up. Was it something I did? I thought to myself. Or was it something that Anthony did? I kept wondering. What were my parents talking about?
      Evening was the time now. The sky turned purple, ready to rest for the day. I napped for a couple of hours, feeling rested and ready for another day. My tiny wooden bear was in my paws. I got up from my bed, and placed the bear on top of my nightstand. After that I headed out of my room, and down the cold stone stairs. As I got to the last step I saw my parents saying goodnight to all the workers we have here at the castle. Well I guess it's time to go to sleep… "Ah, Taytum. What have you been doing all this time upstairs?" My father said.
      "I was just- playing with my Oakley! Yup, that's what I was doing." I said nervously, hoping that my parents won't realize that I was napping this whole time. I never nap during the day, so it would seem odd to them that I did.
      "Well then, it's a bit past your bedtime now. Let's head up and tuck you in." Said my mother, sounding tired.
      "O-okay..." I said nervously. We all headed up stairs now.
      As soon as we entered my room I jumped onto my bed and laid down, trying to be in a comfortable position.
      "Well, good night Taytum." My mother said, giving a kiss to my forehead.
      "See you in the morning, Taytum." Said my father, running his paw through my head.
      They headed out the door and closed it. I laid down in my bed until I heard no more noises. As soon as I heard the last door close and saw that the last candle was put out, I got up. Not sure what to do, I grabbed Oakley and started to play with him; just moving him across my bed as if he was alive and moving.



      Chapter : 4 - A blue lisp
      About ten minutes pass with me playing with Oakley. A noice crept through my room, almost as if it was a whisper. "Hsppppppp....." said the voice. I wasn't sure what it was, so I looked around the room. I saw nothing. "Hsppppppp....." the noice whispered again. I got scared and put Oakley down. "Hey, hey!" The voice grew louder and I hid under my blankets. "Hey, Taytum!" The voice was coming from in front of my, so I looked over the blankets covering my eyes. It was Oakley speaking! "Hey, Taytum!" Oakley said once more. "I have something to show you!" He said, lifting his finger tip. A blue lisp then appeared! "I know you're frightened right now, and you shouldn't be. Although this is important!" Oakley said.
      "O-okay..." I said nervously. Wondering what he wants me to do.
      “I want you to go and follow that lisp for me, please?” Said Oakley. “It’s not going to do you any harm.”
      “Hmm. Alright!” A surge of confidentiality raged through my body.
      The blue lisp then began to move around mysteriously, rocking back and fourth. It soon then made a quick dash out of my bedroom, and into the staircase. "Please follow the lisp Taytum, I'll come with you." Oakley then jumped into my paw. "Go on, quickly!"
      I was confused at first, but then I made a determined face and got out of bed. I lightly held Oakley onto my paw, still gripping onto him so that he wouldn't fall out. Heading out of my bedroom I saw the blue lisp. It was heading towards the front castle gate. It soon went through the gate and outside the castle. "Oh boy..." I said, and then began to run down the stone stairs.
      As soon as I got to the floor I looked up at the gates; a bit of frost was starting to spread on the metal handle. I then let out a sigh and carefully opened the gate, trying to not wake anybody up. When I opened the gate I felt a brush of air slap me on the face, and then went on the other side of the gate and slowly closed the front castle gate.
      When I turned around, I saw a winter wonderland. I've never been outside the castle gates during the night, mother and father say it's dangerous, especially at this time of year. Snowflakes we're falling, and there was at least an inch of snow. My feet were covered in snow. Hopefully I don't get sick.
      The lisp then appeared in front of my face, scaring me. I flinched backwards, almost hitting the castle gate. It then flew towards my left, heading into the deeper part of the forest. It was much darker than my home area. I was scared to go through.
      "Don't be afraid." Said Oakley. "I'll always be with you during your journeys."
      I nodded my head, and ran towards the lisp, hoping that I won't lose track of it. It started to get darker and darker, almost to the point where I couldn't see anymore. It also started to get colder. I could just fall straight to the ground and struggle to get back into my feet. It was that cold here in the deeper part of the forest

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      Chapter : 5 - The cottage
      After chasing after the lisp for a while I saw that it had stopped. It stopped right in front of a cottage, a small comfy cottage. The lisp then disappeared in front of my eyes. Looking at the cottage, it had flowers and small boulders in front of it and looks abandoned. I stopped running, and headed towards the front door. "I'm not sure about this..." I said to Oakley.
      "Nonsense, it's perfectly safe. Trust me." He said, trying to boost my self confidence.
      I reached my paw forwards towards the knob, and my paw started to shake. I then closed my eyes and reached forwards connecting my paw and the knob. Turning the knob I opened the door, and saw the inside of the cottage. It looked as if it hasn't been cleaned or taken care of in years. There was a bench, and a small table in the center. Along with longer narrower tables around the edges of the room. The tables were covered with stone objects. Some of the objects consisted of keys, handles, and- crowns? Why would there be crowns here? My curiosity grew, and I then started to go around the room, looking at at the objects. An object that I was fascinated with was this stone key. It was small, and was the color grey, and little cracks on almost every corner of it. I picked it up, and rubbed my paw on it gently so I wouldn't break it. After looking at it for a while, I put it back, hoping that nobody would notice that it has been picked up. Turning my head towards my right I noticed more stone objects, but none of that picked up my curiosity. Growing bored of this place I turned my head towards the center of the room, there stood a pedestal. It was engraved with roses, and topped off with a small thin pillow. On top of the pillow stood a silver crown, it looked old, and hasn't been cleaned in a few years. Dust and pollen have covered the silver crown.
      Suddenly, I then heard a knock on the door which made me jump. I jolted my head and faced the door.
      "What are you doing here?!" It was my brother Anthony.

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      Chapter : 6 - Busted
      "Answer me!" He demanded.
      "I-I-I was just... exploring..."
      "Exploring? This is dangerous Taytum! You could have gotten yourself hurt!" He sounded worried.
      "I'm-I'm sorry, I was just running through the forest, and stumbled across this small cottage. I was curious, and decided to go inside of it."
      "Wait-what's this?" Anthony said. He walked towards me and towards the pedestal. "Why is my crown here..." he said softly.
      "Wait, that's your crown?!" I said. I was surprised to hear that that silver crown was my brother's.
      "Ugh... yes, it was mine. Until I decided to not take the throne. It was then kept here all this time. Probably waiting for you..."
      "Waiting for me? But why?" I asked, I grew curious.
      "It waited for you, probably because it hoped that you would take the throne." Anthony said, reaching his paws out towards the crown.
      "But why me?" I asked.
      "You because you might be the last piece of mother and father's blood to take the throne. They would like to keep their blood ruling over the grand forest."
      I was surprised. Me? The last one to take the throne? My eyes began to water. I walked towards my brother and put my paws on his forearms. I still had Oakley in my paws, and held him as well. Slowly, I moved his forearms until his paws were parallel to the top of my head. I then lowered his paws so that the crown would sit on top of my small head. Surprisingly, it was a perfect fit.
      "Taytum, do you really want to do this?" Anthony asked, he had a nervous tone to his voice.
      "Yes he does." Whispered Oakley, still in my paws.
      "Yes, yes I do." I said confidentially. "Can we go home, please?"
      My brother let out a sigh. "Yes, yes we can Taytum." He gave out a smile, and hugged me.


      Chapter : 7 - My destiny
      We left the deeper part of the forest, and
      returned to the kingdom area. The snow had stopped, and the ground was covered with at least an inch and a half of snow. Arriving at the castle gate, we opened it and entered. We made our way up towards our parent’s bedroom. Anthony and I then went up the stone stairs along with Oakley still in my paw. The three of us passed our bedrooms, and made our way to our parents bedroom. We opened the door, and entered.
      "Mother, Father..." I said, trying to wake them up. In a minute they slowly started to crack open their eyes, and sit up.
      "Taytum, Anthony..." my father said quietly. "What on earth are you doing-" he then made a sudden stop.
      "Anthony! Is that your silver crown on Taytum's head?" My mother asked, opening her eyes wide to see if that is what she said.
      Anthony chuckled. "Yes, yes it is my silver crown. Taytum was in the forest, and stumbled across the cottage you guys showed me. He then found the crown." He said. "I guess he wants to take the throne, to carry on our royal bloodline."
      I held a smile. "Yes, that's what I want to do. I don't want our family's royal bloodline to die so quickly, so I'll be the one to take the throne." I said confidentially.
      We then talked about the story a bit more to our parents. Soon enough, they held a ceremony tomorrow morning. Celebrating my coming to the throne when their time is done.

      hahah sorry for the last few edits, realized that I didn't write the whole story. I won't edit anymore I promise.
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Re: Batch #730

Postby grifforik » Sun Mar 05, 2017 3:14 am

What time are you ending this today? :)
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Re: Batch #730

Postby Snuggle_Bean » Sun Mar 05, 2017 6:40 am

THIS IS NOW CLOSED WILL ANNOUNCE THE WINNER IN A LITTLE BIT!!!! :clap:
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Re: Batch #730

Postby Snuggle_Bean » Sun Mar 05, 2017 11:35 am

Okay just to say this was very very hard for me to judge as there where great forums!! i had some help to help me decide, and i have came down to one person but first i would like to say some things <3

Grifforik- I Love how you express everything and how you described him and his hobbies, LOVE THE ART!! I also love the story with snow steele and Pie and the other two viscets. Added more to the story, and how he became who he is. Overall i really loved the forum Great Job!!!

wicke- I love the personality you gave her and along with the story and likes and dislikes, It really expressed her and who she is and what she does as her hobbies, Great job!!!

Eva and Kait- I love how you did your story and expressed his his personalty, and included his parents in the story!!! loved the dislikes and likes as the story, love how you did the little blue guy and how they meet , Also Great Job!!

Now for the WINNER!! Gonna say this again very hard to pick one as they where all great, if it was not for help i would not have figured out lol!!! So further a do i would like to announce the winner of this deer babe is.......................................Grifforik!!! Congrats and hope you enjoy Rinji.

If i could i would give wicke and Eva and Kati an HM but i cant but yall did great!!!



















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Re: Batch #730

Postby Vixen Luo » Sun Mar 05, 2017 11:42 am

Congratulations! I'll add you to the ref right now, and I'll update the info for you later on when I can. c:
    please stop asking me to give you my viscets. thank you!
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