Avilda

Postby Corvuss » Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:06 am

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Name
Avilda

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    Story
    [750/750]

    Avilda’s life was tough from the start. Her father was the one who helped her hatch from her egg, and she was told later it was because her mother disappeared. Her father woke up one morning to find her gone, her egg cold, and no trace of where she had gone. Her father raised her the best he could but they were constantly on the move, and she hated it. Her father refused to answer why they were moving and she lost many friends and wished more than anything to just know the truth about things. As she reached a year old she still felt sheltered from the world and it infuriated her. Avilda believed she could handle anything the world could throw at her.

    One rainy afternoon, she stormed through the forest. Her and her father had another big fight as tensions rose between them. She laid down on a log after forcing her way through the thick shrubbery. She dozed off, but was awoken by approaching footsteps. A dark blue viscet with strong orange eyes stood before her. He looked intimidating, but his eyes had a look of understanding she couldn’t understand. “Use this well,” he spoke with no explanation. “What-” her vision cut to black before beginning to fade in again. She saw herself in the past. Her view was from a distance and she could tell by looking at ‘her’ paws that she was seeing through the blue viscet’s eyes. She was in his memories. She watched events from her life play through the viscets eyes before it suddenly cut to black again. When her vision returned to the present, the viscet was gone. She took off toward her temporary home. She wanted to use this to find the truth.

    Avilda ran toward the den they had been staying in. Her father sat sulking near the back of the cave and hadn’t paid attention to her approach. She stared at him intently, focusing on the questions that crowded her mind through her entire life. ‘Why are we always running?’ ‘Where is my mother?’

    Her vision once again faded into a scene in which she saw through her father’s eyes. She saw a viscet in front of her that she knew had to be her mother. Her gaze seemed loving and accepting. She recognized her instantly although she had never seen her before. She tried to force ‘herself’ forward wanting to call to her and finally meet the mother she had longed to have her entire life. Instead, she dove for her with one of the most frightening growls she had heard in her life because it had felt like it came from her own throat. She felt her mother's throat in her jaws. She tried to let her go and get away but she couldn’t. A few moments later a yell sounded behind her and she felt her mother finally drop from her jaws and her view was forced behind her. Viscets stood in the doorway with horrified expressions. They chased her father from the cave and she was forced to follow. Her emotions got so powerful that they snapped her from the vision. When she saw through her own eyes again her father was in panic attempting to comfort her. She quickly stood up and shoved him away. “Get away from me!” She stood to face him. “You killed her! She’s gone because of you and they want you dead!” Her father looked shocked, confused, and even a little scared. “How do you know that? Are they here?” He looked around wildly and bolted. She pursued him for a while before finally letting him go. From then on Avilda had no family.

    Avilda traveled for a long time until she came across a large group of viscets in a makeshift camp. When looking into their history, she noticed many of them came from similar places. One stood out to her. She too had only grown up with a father she didn’t get along with. Avilda liked how strong the group appeared, and that traitorous acts weren’t tolerated. She observed until she found a viscet whose memory shocked her. He had killed their previous leader after he had been so close to him. He became the new leader after framing someone for his murder.

    Avilda boldly approached the leader when he was alone. “I know you killed him Chrome. You need to listen to me now.”
    Chrome's snarl turned to a look of shock. He complied.

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Corvus
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belongs to me
Datura
(the viscet who also only had a father)

belongs to BluKitty53
Chrome
(the leader) belongs to BluKitty53
(his design is still waiting for approval)
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Re: Batch #998

Postby Shadow Striker » Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:12 am

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Name:Delta
Gender: Male
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The blood pounded in my ears as I ran away from the viscets I once considered friends. No, wait, not friends, more than that. These viscets were more like a family to me. Quickly, I ducked into a small cave, attempting to catch my breath, but I knew I couldn't stay for long. My pursuers stopped, their breathing labored as well.
"Where did he go?!" An all too familiar low voice growled. My heart sank, realizing Vega was leading the hunt.
What happened? What did I do? I trembled in confusion and fear. What could be so bad that my Vega has turned against me?
"Vega, we've been in pursuit all day. My men cannot continue on like this. I don't care if you are in charge of my army. I am calling the hunt for today, but we will find him. I will find him." The king's voice rang loud and clear.
"If you don't mind, sir, I am going to continue looking. This viscet, you know him. He's sneaky, cunning. Take my army home to rest, but if I don't catch Delta tonight, no one ever will."
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Re: Batch #998

Postby G1 Sunstreaker » Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:24 am

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Re: Batch #998

Postby dzo » Sat Jul 01, 2017 7:21 am

Username: ~Prophecy~
Name: Zakiyah
Gender: Female
Story:
Zakiyah loved her home in Dogruiter, a very small town that mostly is a few day stop for the many passing through. It was a place where she felt relaxed, and she took pride in her home. To viscets just stopping there and not knowing anyone, Zakiyah was seemingly no different than the other viscets there. Put on a smile and being up a cheery attitude to go to your tiring job as a gas station cashier and no one stops to think about you, just getting their stuff and moving on to their destination. But everyone in the town always asked how she is doing.

Zakiyah had always been a shy viscet, one to never talk or butt in on anyone's business. She kept to herself, respected others, and never really talked to anyone. Once, when she was new to her job as a cashier she watched and helped a viscling who was lost, and stayed with her until her parents arrived. That's the sort of viscet she was.

But people change.

Pain had always been buried in this innocent girl, and eventually, she didn't feel like pushing it away and denying it anymore. It started with staying up late, even knowing she got up for work early. She would do yoga while she addressed her thoughts and accepted them. But then she set up a punching bag, and went fully at it until it hurt. Those nights, when she was actually awake enough to get to her bed and not sleep on the floor, she got the best sleep, being clearer of thoughts and generally extremely tired. She gained a lot of strength, and she loved not looking like this scrawny pansy. Though it began to not satisfy her: she was getting tired of punching, her paws were usually in bandages, and it just wasn't letting her get out her emotions as good anymore. Self defense was her next go to. Since she was in a small town, there obviously wasn't going to be someone to train her, so she watched videos and taught herself. She became good, and it really helped her as she could pretend to get back at those who wronged her and made fun of her for being a pansy, and she pretended she was fighting off evil, saving the town and finally being recognized for being strong- not just patient and good with lost visclings.

A darkness in her grew too, and it was like a whole other viscet telling her things, and it was easy for this darkness to reflect on her pain.

Nobody cares about you.
Nobody wants to be around you.
They don't really mean it when they ask how you are.

If someone annoys you lets punch them.
So maybe we can play some tricks today at work.
It would be fun.
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There was a day when she walked over to the window and watched the restless outdoors. Rain hammered down like hundreds of viscets falling from the sky. Then she saw someone in the distance, growing closer. It was Atalanta, who frequently stayed in the town. Atalanta was Zakiyah's only friend. She was nice to her, so Zakiyah always thought days with Atalanta were always the best. The two would hang around at the counter and talked when no customers were being helped. They would have deep conversations, but Zakiyak never expressed the things that she needed to get out: the darker things. Atalanta was like an angel, a gift from Heaven.
She barged in while Zakiyah still stood at the window, having a key to the front door. She was soaking wet. The two exchanged glances and read each others mind, each seeing into each other.
“What's wrong?” Both of them questioned each other.
Atalanta needed a place to stay until the storm died down and Zakiyah claimed that work was just stressful.
“Zack, I can tell this isn't about work.”
“Don't you try to get in my head, it's.. too dark.”
“Well now I am concerned.”
Atalanta gave Zakiyah a look of sympathy and care. Zakiyah looked to the floor.
“I'm not the pure, kind viscet you know anymore. I judge everyone. I think rude and mean thoughts and I can't help it. I feel like hurting everyone who gives me troubles… and well… just everyone in general. I feel entirely alone, except for this voice that keeps telling me to do bad things.”
“Zakiyah. We can fight this.”
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Re: Batch #998

Postby otis, » Sat Jul 01, 2017 7:24 am

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Re: Batch #998

Postby -Shaded- » Sat Jul 01, 2017 9:04 am

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Re: Batch #998

Postby Unleashed Squiid » Thu Jul 06, 2017 1:59 pm

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Re: Batch #998

Postby jolteon » Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:01 pm

due to a request, the maximum word limit has been expanded to 750. this also ends in about 24 hours!
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Re: Batch #998

Postby jolteon » Sat Jul 15, 2017 2:54 pm

and a request for an extension! the new end date is july 14th @ 11:59 PM!
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Re: Batch #998

Postby jolteon » Fri Jul 21, 2017 1:15 pm

sorry for the long wait guys! ;;

the winner is ~Prophecy~! i found the way her personality took a 180 very interesting, and the fact that Atalanta was willing to help her overcome the dark thoughts. congrats!

since its just a readoption i cant award HMs, but shoutout to sschw as well, i loved the idea! <3
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