« literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Join or create fan clubs about your favorite things!

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby morris. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:09 am

      @ariadne: it looks freaking amazing. very elaborate, and clean. I love it. however, some of it isn't lined up? I don't know if that's just my computer or not.

      @chag: I think is looks absolutely lovely, but if you feel it looks strange,
      maybe you could try replacing the corner decals with something else for the center box that contains all the text? maybe something simpler that won't distract?

      @beatus: you have the right idea with the first one, it is very lovely, but it's plain. maybe you could add some veer fonts to liven it up?
      the second one is lovely as well, but maybe you can find an image that is a bit taller so that the form all lines up with it?

      I need a little critque for a form as well. I have no idea how I feel about this form.
User avatar
morris.
 
Posts: 6607
Joined: Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:47 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby alexandra. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:21 am

      I want to be a stalker!
      username: Andromeda-
      profile: x
      I am a ..... [ strike out ones you dont do ]
      • roleplayer
      • coder
      • tumblr lover
      • Chocaholic ;w; <3

        #stalker

Hi hi! ;w; You guys can call me Andro uwu.. I sincerely would like some critiques in a very near present on some forms as I'm still learning the art of coding ;w; And I also kinda admire you all.. so yea uwu </3
User avatar
alexandra.
 
Posts: 820
Joined: Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:37 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby solstice. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:27 am

      @chag; honestly i think the form looks great.
      i can't see anything i'd really change cx
      @beatus; i rather agree with reason about the text
      for the first one, and morris for the second one.
      @morris; i honestly can't see anything wrong with it
      in fact i am rather amazed at how lovely it is. cx
User avatar
solstice.
 
Posts: 3282
Joined: Wed Dec 11, 2013 11:50 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby solstice. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:34 am

      woop, i've got a question myself...
      which style do you like better from me?
      this one or this one?
      is there anything i could work on?
User avatar
solstice.
 
Posts: 3282
Joined: Wed Dec 11, 2013 11:50 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby reasonable. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:38 am

      @mor; the formatting is amazing all in all,
      but on my computer the top and bottom things, i
      don't know what you call them, add one more because
      it's a bit off, it's so hard to explain urgh but if anyone
      else see's it and know's how to explain let them ;u;

      @liss; the first one's my favorite one c: just
      as my opinion

      also, i need critiques on this since it's the first time i've
      done something like that ;u;
User avatar
reasonable.
 
Posts: 3533
Joined: Sun Aug 18, 2013 2:28 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby spiff » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:41 am

@ariadne aww ty, I'm really flattered! I agree with mor, btw; it's very symbol-
heavy, but it's wayy cleaner than the jumbled mess I'd come up with uvu

@chagrin I love the way you layered his name! personally I think it looks great,
I mean I guess my computer's different from yours bc the two sections aren't
exactly side by side, but other than that I don't see a problem

@bea I agree with reas and mor about the first one, I'd just throw in a veer
font image

@mor dude I think it's awesome ;-; one bit of advice, though: for the symbol
that you're using to make the box around the image, I'd have both of the
vertical ones aligned to the left. I'm sure it looks perfect on your computer,
but the line on the right is too far to the right on mine, and if you have them
both aligned left that ensures that they line up *in my experience, at least;
correct me if I'm wrong* not sure if that made any sense... feel free to ignore
me

@liss personally I like the one with pyson ;o for the one with emerson, I think
the image with his name is too small; you'd do better to break it up into two.

@reas it looks awesome, but imho I think it'd look better if you just made the
pink symbols black. I mean they kind of come from nowhere especially since
the reference pictures are black and white... that's just me, though :U
User avatar
spiff
 
Posts: 12076
Joined: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:46 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Postby chagrin » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:45 am

      thank you guys for all the comments,
      i'll see what i can do with it

      @lissome: hmm, i like both of them really.
      aesthetically i like the second one better
      but the first one is easier to get around
      since you have all the important stuff on the side and everything
      #sorryifnoneofthismakessense

      reasonable. wrote:@mor; the formatting is amazing all in all,
      but on my computer the top and bottom things, i
      don't know what you call them, add one more because
      it's a bit off, it's so hard to explain urgh but if anyone
      else see's it and know's how to explain let them ;u;


      @mor: oh yeah, i though my computer was just playing with me or something.
      and i'm not sure but i think the whole last line is off on the left side?
      or is that the way you want it? xD lol, sorry

      @reasonable: it looks neat and all,
      but maybe change the color of the borders around the name or whatever those are called?
      it looks good anyhow :D

User avatar
chagrin
 
Posts: 5542
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:11 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby morris. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 7:18 am

      okie dokie. I think I figured out a way to fix the problem for people on other screens? blah. I think it worked? I have no idea.

      @liss: tbh, I love both of them. but, the second one could definitely be improved. instead of having both his first name and his last name, you could just have his first name above the ref picture that way you could make the font bigger. but seriously, love your style. very pretty.
      @reas: ahhh, finn the better twin. I love him ;u; anyways, I think it looks very lovely. very unique, clean, and vurrrrry pretty. I do not see any problems with it c:
Last edited by morris. on Wed Jun 04, 2014 7:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
morris.
 
Posts: 6607
Joined: Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:47 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Postby chagrin » Wed Jun 04, 2014 7:31 am

      @morris: it fixed it for me :)
User avatar
chagrin
 
Posts: 5542
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:11 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: « literate aliens » eating earthlings since 2013

Postby solstice. » Wed Jun 04, 2014 7:35 am

      alright thanks so much for the feedback guys.
      i'll try and work around with things a bit more.
      @morris; honestly there was no change for me.
      it already had looked fine on my screen cx
User avatar
solstice.
 
Posts: 3282
Joined: Wed Dec 11, 2013 11:50 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: GoogleBotOther and 9 guests