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by Nacht » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:10 am
Hi there everybody!I haven't posted here before but I was wondering what critic you have on This sketch I just finished?I couldn't really get the head shape to work out and The nose and ears fail so any help would be appreciated.It's my first time drawing a weasel so I need a bit of help with anatomy.And feel free to red line if it will help you explain things.

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by CaptiveLegacy » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:15 am
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Thank you for the link, its really helpful!! c:
I really like the drawing, its lot better then what I can do (:
Well, im excited that im getting a tablet soon, but im also excited since there is going to be a early foal to be born soon at the barn! So I decided to draw a little picture of a foal. This is my first attempt at drawing anything remotely close to a foal, im actualyl pretty pleased with it c:

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by Mr.Milo » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:43 am
carrie911 wrote:@Nex
Thank you for the link, its really helpful!! c:
I really like the drawing, its lot better then what I can do (:
Well, im excited that im getting a tablet soon, but im also excited since there is going to be a early foal to be born soon at the barn! So I decided to draw a little picture of a foal. This is my first attempt at drawing anything remotely close to a foal, im actualyl pretty pleased with it c:

congrats getting your new tablet!^^ but i think your horse looks very good though the body should be a bit longer as well as the neck but its very good for a mouse!
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by DojiMiko » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:50 am
Anyone good with hands that can help me???
@Nacht- I think it looks pretty good! ^^ Once I find my tablet pen [LOL] I'll red line it for you!
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by wickedpup » Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:58 am
@ Carrie ;I hope you get a good one,do NOT cheap out on it. Try to get a bamboo or wacom if you can,they're very sturdy. C:
With the foal,the legs seem a bit stiff,try look at pictures and giving the body some freedom. It'll look 100% better if you give it a sort of "motion" in the pose. I suck at horses though so not much I can do. ^^;
@ Pastel; I like the pictures,especially the corgi! C: The 2nd ones position is a little bit awkward though. Try drawing a line to keep the feet level,as the dog's left leg is too high up/short. I could do a redline if you want. C: The dog is also lacking a chest,it's not a cat you see so it has a big sturdy chest like so As you can see here the dog/wolf's chest is spacious,and fluffier. The head is a bit too large,but that's very easy to fix digitally. x3
@ Savannah; Want a redline? C: I can whip one up real quick if you want.
I'm looking for some harsh critique/redlines on this anthro(Warning,furred nude). It's supposed to be an old fursona of mine redone so yeah the design sucks. x3
Also anyone here done iScribble? I want to sign up but it doesn't want my email address. :|
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by DojiMiko » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:00 am
@laelia Your colouring is AMAZING! 0.0 I want to be able to colour like that! What type of tool do you use, or just the regular brush tool?
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by wickedpup » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:06 am
Applejack wrote:@laelia Your colouring is AMAZING! 0.0 I want to be able to colour like that! What type of tool do you use, or just the regular brush tool?
Why thank you! :D It just takes a lot of practice.~ I use paint tool Sai and use many layer of overlay,luminosity,and multiply. The brush I use is just labeled Brush on my version and I set it to about 70% opacity and put pressure sensitivity to detect opacity,blending,and size. C: On this one I used a light desaturated pink for the shadows,and just white with varying opacity for shine. It takes me about 10-15 minutes to shade.
@ Savannah; Okay,I'll get right on it! C: Also,messaging. ^^
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by DojiMiko » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:12 am
Nacht wrote:Hi there everybody!I haven't posted here before but I was wondering what critic you have on This sketch I just finished?I couldn't really get the head shape to work out and The nose and ears fail so any help would be appreciated.It's my first time drawing a weasel so I need a bit of help with anatomy.And feel free to red line if it will help you explain things.

Here's my redline...I'm not very good at rodents though. LOL I think it looked better originally, sorry if this didn't help D:

@laelia Your welcome, you deserved the compliment! Thanks for telling me :D
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