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Design = finished. Form = Finished

Postby Jones. » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:38 am

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Equidius name:
Calla
Origin: Greek name
Meaning: Beautiful

Gender:
Mare

Age:
9

Size:
15 hands high exactly.

Rank:
Defender.

Personality:
Calla (or Call (K-a-l) as her friends call her) is kind, caring and understanding. She is a great listener and loves to be around other animals, without them she is lonely and sad. Although, she is not needy nor clingy, like me she just loves company and would rather be around others than on her own. Her friends are her family, and hardly nothing would stand between her and the ones she loves or care for. Calla, can be serious and usually makes good decisions, she is not always fun and games. However, Calla is fun loving, and loves to laugh. Most of the time she can make someone laugh or at least smile, also she loves to play with foals. Whenever she isnt having fun, she is watching others do it for her. Calla is very adventurious and sometimes the phrase 'curiousty killed the cat' will come into play where she is concerened. She is fairly fiesty and doesnt like people annoying her.

When it comes to defending she is almost perfect for the difficult skill. She is fairly small, very speedy, and very flexible. She is a fierce defender and only fights when her job is needed.

Story or history:
One, two, three,I counted the strides before I lept the slanted branch the hung in my way. My back legs scraped it slightly, I knew it was too big, and it would be hard for me to jump it. I continued to canter through the dark and twisting tunnels that led through the underground. My ears were foward and my canter was eager. The tunnel swerved, violently, to the left, I adjusted my large and smooth stride to a smaller and bouncer model. I turned swiftly and spun round the corner. I slowed to a soft trot and neighed to the three other Equidius who were talking quietly to each other.
"Calla! Its about time you got here,"snorted the smallest mare. "We were thinking you wouldnt show."
I flicked my ear in annoyence, "im here, im here," I snapped a little to quickly for the other mares likeing.
"Dont you dare talk to us like that!"
"Fine,"
I replied simply before breaking into a high-stepping trot and breezed past the other Equidius into another tunnel."Stupid horses,"I muttered to myself before seeing the Equidius that I called my friends. "Hey guys!"I neighed to the others that stood there.
"Whats up Calla? You seem agitated,"a small grey mare said to me "Was it the elders again?"
I nodded, "They just think they know everything because they are the eldest,"I rolled my eyes and began to walk towards them.
"Just remember Calla, you need the elders approvel to pass your defenders test. If you get all snappy at them they will fail you."
I flicked my ear again and sighed "they are just so annoying!" "Anyway, lets have some fun now."
"Tunnel racing?" Adonia suggested.
I smiled and nodded, I was one of the fastest out of these mares but Adonia would always be close on my tail. I nodded, once, twice, three times. Then, we were off.

Our hooves thundered through the soft tunnel sand, our fur covered bodies twisted and turned around every corner and our slim, agile legs carried us fearlessly. Eventually, me and Adonia were level with each other. It had been a long race and both of our stamina was wearing down, I snorted and gave an extra burst of speed. So did Adonia. We turned the corner at the exact same time. Giving the elders no chance to run. We neighed loudly and attempted to slow to a halt, but we had gained so much speed it was hard. We crashed together in a hoof-tangling, mane-curling fashion and we all ended up skattered across each other. The elders were pleased.
"You call yourself defenders! You couldnt defend an egg!"
I snorted and felt all the anger that I possessed coming to the surface and before I could stop it, it came out. "You call yourselves elders! Your supposed to help us, not shout at us. We were only having a bit of fun, you shouldnt be shouting at us for an accident."I smiled at the elders shocked faces.
They gulped."Calla, you have always been the most promising defender we have ever seen. We wanted to push you, to see what you could do, and you have succeded. We wanted to see if you could stand up to the ones that held your future in our hooves. To tell us what we were doing wrong, you are now a defender."
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Re: WIP

Postby Verdana » Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:48 pm

Ooh, I luurve this design!
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Re: WIP

Postby Jones. » Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:09 am

Thanks, she is a blue roan tobiano <3 I based her off my friends pony. I will edit the markings as time goes on x3
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Re: Design = finished. Form = WIP

Postby Verdana » Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:13 pm

Please try to get your story done! I really want to count this entry.
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Re: Design = finished. Form = WIP

Postby Jones. » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:40 am

Verdana wrote:Please try to get your story done! I really want to count this entry.


Sorry, im working on it now. When will it finish? What time?
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