[pia]

Im really hoping you like this, its one of the longest times i've spent on a entry. e.e
-my mom would so kill me if she knew i was working on this instead of school... xD-
Apparently keeping if not placed. >:D
see first one for story/background
Litterally spent over 5 hours on this, might work on it more.
I forgot to say, I changed the color of the horns and put achlemic marks on it, since they do live forever, why not add some of the souls background onto them?

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im putting the background/story/thing here.
Some people say its just a dog gone rabid, others say its just a lab experiment gone loose, and bad.
None of them actually know just how scary, how dangerous this beast is.
Being only knee height to a human, it has incredible speed and strenght, despite part of its bone structure prodruding out of its body.
They really dont know that its a beast from the pits of heck its self.
How are they formed into being? Once dead, the souls of the living go to... where ever, and on their way they need guards. These are the guards to the underworld... you don't want to see them once you pass on.
You can see them in the living world also, they have 'souls' themselves. They can't hurt humans.. badly, but they can end a living animals life, for thats what they need to live, is that animals life.
Most only come in Females, and there isnt very many of them.
They don't come in very unnatural colors, if they doi its dulled. They never have neons. They can have some unnatural markings though, but not many.
They usually wear the blood of their first 'visitors' on them. The more, the stronger.
They naturally can't die, since they are guards of souls. Seen mostly by the young and edlerly, some say its good luck for 'middle' aged people to see them. Only natural enemy are the opposing soul guards, the ones that take you 'up'. They are lighter colored and like their cousins, can be seen by the living. The Light vairity doesn't have wings or halos. They're just there to take you home.

[Oddly Shaded]

Hehe, naughty! I'm just lucky i'm on holidays! XD. I really like this, and the nice little design. Even though i was looking for a complicated design, this still has blown me away. I believe it suits the less design. The actual lines (beast) itself is just magnificant. I'll be making a chart on the main page in which shows if i like your work or if it needs work. This is what your getting

[pia]

I can add more design on to it, though I just don't know how it'd fit.. Ill try to make something work.
Haha, nice new wolf, It looks like your one mare!
I'm homeschooled, so I work on stuff like this instead of school...

[pia]

I tried adding more onto her, though I personally found her to look better with simple markings, but she looks good this way too. Please be as critical as possible. ^ ^

[Oddly Shaded]

Yes, i do like her at the moment. But the only way i'd give you a would be if you added a little more marking to the entrie head (you can just keep it simple still) and on a few or all of the legs. As well as maybe a little more bones, and maybe flesh if you think it would work. But it does need to work. You could even maybe add two more long tails. Or just one more. That would be good. But thats about all i'd say. OH you could add more the skull, just keep it symetrical so it's the same on both sides .

[pia]

if I can, I might add more on to it later, I just added what you just suggested.

[Oddly Shaded]

Very nice, but i'd still like to see a bit more. I'm really loving it though Pretty darn close to top!

[pia]

Added more onto it. I can add more, just give mre suggestions/ideas for what you would want. I just have no Idea at this point, im only limited to so many colors that can go with it, and I can't find any patterns that wont over do it.

[Oddly Shaded]

Oh hun. It sends shivers down my spine! It is just perfect. You've definatly reached

[pia]

Thanks. :]