[Fang+Zak(MOVED)]

Names Eragon
Eragon was once a strong prince.He had all the girls in his grasp.They chased him around wanting to be his princess.But Eragon could not choose his bride.So he went on a quest to find the Witch of the North.Who had the power to find the right girl for him.Along the way he faced dangers beyond explainitory.One was an epic battle.In which his leg was split open.It became troubling to walk but he pushed on.As he reached the Witches house he was confronted by a demon cast by the witch.The demon growled at him and then asked what he wanted with the witch.Eragon explained what he wanted and the demon disapeared.The door creaked as it opened and he walked in.The Witch laughed a horrible laugh and walked forward from the shadows.
"What do you want young prince?"She asked.
"I need to find my bride.Would you mind predicting it for me?" He replied.
"Well then.We shall look into the pot of fortune."
They walked to a old metal pot full of a green gue.She circled her hand around the top and the gue began to swirl.Then a young girl apeared in it.She had blue eyes with a white coat to shine with them.
"There she lies waiting for a prince,"The gue returned to its last form and the Witch looked at him."Now I will need some payment."
His smile turned into a frown."I have nothing to give you,Witch.Im very sorry."
The Witch gave Eragon a stern look."Then you will lose your soul!"
Eragon gasped "Please no!"
The Witch grabbed a staff and swirled in the air."I take the soul of who that takes thee for granted!"
Eragons eyes turned red and his beautiful white fur turned a very dark grey.Fangs sharpened out of his mouth and Eragon was no longer himself.He was now a souless demon.

[Nikki6Ashba]

I like the eyes

[Nikki6Ashba]

why is it all black?

[Fang+Zak(MOVED)]

I re-did it.I just remembered my old idea

[Nikki6Ashba]

oh okay

[Nikki6Ashba]

from what I can see I like, but do you think you could make the background lighter?

[Fang+Zak(MOVED)]

Of course