[Offended Cockatiel]

Willi finish soon it's near time to sleep here.
What do you think so far?

Well i'm almost finsh,mite add something,like an animal charm,color the nose,a spiratual "shadow"(animal) Oh and need to clor in her scarf,after I fix it. Right now kit looks osrt of awfull,even the sketch mite look better then it.

Anywas the thing on his side is a skelaton hand. I'm sorry for the wings being placed in a sort of odd place but they didn't look good,closer to the back on this pic. Under the wings is a magma like fume,and the grey wing like,things is smoke,that makes that same form. On his shoulder it's like a magma spider web stream.

[Prince of Awesome]

Nice, did you see mine?

[Offended Cockatiel]

Yea you'rs is really nice.

[Prince of Awesome]

Thanks, so is yours, good luck.

[Offended Cockatiel]

You too. I really think you'rs is goning to be first place.

[Eren Jäger]

This is great! also one of the top five. Those detailed markings really ensnared me, especially the ones on his head. :3

[Offended Cockatiel]

Oh well thank you. ^v^ I really am glad you like it. I will draw the wings and add more of whatever is wrghten on the first page but he is practicaly done,well almost any suggestion on what to fix and how to make him better?

When is the last day for this again?

[Eren Jäger]

August 10th. I don't tell people what they are able to add/fix, if they think they need to they can. It often ends up better anyways, without crit. xP

Either way, you can always make another if you want.