[NeverLand.]

phenotype: Chocolate and tan wild boar
genotype: LL / Ee / kʸkʸ / bb / cᶜʰcᶜʰ / DD / AᵗAᵗ / mm / sᵖsᵖ / TT

Correct me if i'm wrong, but I tried my best.

Little backstory
This gorgeous boy was sent to the wrong home.
He was picked on by the other dogs in the home,
and treated as a toy by the children who lived there.
The owners soon decided to put him up for adoption,
since he was to small, and didn't meet their requirements.
And thank goodness they did.

☆ Entries `

☆ 1 ` Long haired Double dapple (merle)
☆ 2 ` Wire haired Chocolate tri
☆ 3 ` Short haired Lilac tri
☆ 4 ` Long haired Blue tri
☆ 5 ` Wire haired Black dapple (merle)
☆ 5 ` Short haired Red

[eleutheromania]

minus everything posted on your first entry, ( geno/pheno/ color corrections )
your tan points are wrong, try looking up
pictures of dachshunds with tan points.
the triangle is on the chest and doesn’t exceed
into the shoulder. the muzzle is not fully tan,
underfur is not generally tan unless in a longhair,
the tips tend to fade to tan. tan should not exceed
above the knee joint in the rear. tan at the bottom
base of the tail and upper rear thighs. tan shouldn’t
connect between the leg points and thighs.

in the case you referenced this off a chocolate tan
wild boar showing tan points, you’d need to add in the
sable in correct areas to give the dog the grizzly look
in the case of wild boar, the A series would be Ayat
chocolate and tan wild boar

don’t forget to color the pads and nails,
since it’s chocolate, the pads and nails
and nose should be liver and not black.
chocolate dogs also have “green eyes”

[NeverLand.]

minus everything posted on your first entry, ( geno/pheno/ color corrections )
your tan points are wrong, try looking up
pictures of dachshunds with tan points.
the triangle is on the chest and doesn’t exceed
into the shoulder. the muzzle is not fully tan,
underfur is not generally tan unless in a longhair,
the tips tend to fade to tan. tan should not exceed
above the knee joint in the rear. tan at the bottom
base of the tail and upper rear thighs. tan shouldn’t
connect between the leg points and thighs.

in the case you referenced this off a chocolate tan
wild boar showing tan points, you’d need to add in the
sable in correct areas to give the dog the grizzly look
in the case of wild boar, the A series would be Ayat
chocolate and tan wild boar

don’t forget to color the pads and nails,
since it’s chocolate, the pads and nails
and nose should be liver and not black.
chocolate dogs also have “green eyes”

No. The markings aren't spot on because it's still a wip.
I'm now done. If this is still yet to meet your expectations, then don't count my entry.

[eleutheromania]

are you trying to do a boar or normal
chocolate and tan? the neck represents
that of a boar based chocolate and tan
versus regular. you’re entries are fine
as long as the phenotype and genotype
matches them. that’s all i’m correcting,
you still need a full geno on both your
entries. .