[spookypuff]

ehehe. First out of like 20.

Rarity- Standart

[kiwipen]

Hey there, wonderful tryout you've got there! Here's a few pointers and critiques;
I'd like to see more variance of tones in the coat! I'd also like to see you make the markings stand out a bit more ;;; perhaps darkening the fur underneath the markings?
The color you chose for the shine is great!
I feel like the Accessory could use some work. Perhaps make it brown with green little trees etched on / sketched on? Something about it just feels a little unfinished to me.