[Snuggle_Bean]

Phases 2 Adult^^

Owner: Mint Chip (Example User)
Name: Mel Mel (Example Name)
Gender: Female (Example Gender)
Post: (XXX)

Lay Day: 11/8/17
Hatch Day: 11/11/17
Mature Day: 11/18/17

Mother

Father

Neyla

Mikleo

Mother | Father

Uncommon Minor Mane - Inherited
Uncommon Unicorn Horn - Inherited

Criticize Is Welcome I Would Love Feedback!!!!

[dragonstars]

Lovely <3

[Snuggle_Bean]

Lovely <3

Thank U ^^

[Mint Chip]

Alright so the combination is pretty good considering how tough this mix actually is (at least imo). I'm a little unsure where the darkness to the green/teal and lightness of the pink came from. Did you overlay, multiply, or use an effect? I'm just curious honestly because I'm not certain where it comes from is all. I think the actually design aspect, the markings are fantastic and worked out really well. However I think the color combinations could use a little adjusting, the greens and pink are a little off-putting together. I think maybe going with the white from the mother as the base and then using the darker green/teal you made, use the brighter yellow from the father, and then make the mane more of the mother's colors straight out instead of mixing the two and it would have meshed better imo. But again this pairing is not an easy one by any means, you did a good job with what you had to work with though and you showed a lot of creativity with this entry. The mutation edits are pretty good too all in all. I usually use pen thickness 5 when I'm drawing on the oekaki (smoothing at around 40-50%) for my edits and that usually gets it around the right thickness for the viscet lines. c:

[Mint Chip]

Very nice update! I can see you've adjusted the design a bit and it shows. I think this is definitely an improvement overall and thank you for taking the time to make minor adjustments and for pming me to let me know! <3 It's hard when color picking to find all the right colors and the right apps or websites to use. I tend to use this one for all my color picking but I'm sure there are plenty of other websites others use as well!

[Snuggle_Bean]

Very nice update! I can see you've adjusted the design a bit and it shows. I think this is definitely an improvement overall and thank you for taking the time to make minor adjustments and for pming me to let me know! <3 It's hard when color picking to find all the right colors and the right apps or websites to use. I tend to use this one for all my color picking but I'm sure there are plenty of other websites others use as well!

Thank You so much for the advice and yes i can definitely see the difference from first one and the updated one!! thank you again for the link i will definitely use that one to in the long run!! ^^