by Skoomacat » Mon Sep 11, 2017 8:16 am
Entry one! I tried to format the title like the adopts
Packing List
• standard silicone shell | #ffffff
↪ • long ears
↪ • long tail
• 1 full package tea| #f3f4d8 to #1f33a1second color
• 1 set skeleton supports |#eaa4e1
• 1 set eye stickers | #ff00e1
★ 1 package mixed size pearl boba (in legs) |#9a128a
• 1 levitating pearl boba | #9a128a
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Common babusagi | 4pts
Copied and pasted the example packing list and will be editing for this one
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by Neon sparks » Tue Sep 19, 2017 1:27 pm
great job on the backing list so far, as well as using the pixel brush.
there are some improvements you can make still though.
try blending the white and blue together more, the gradient tool is a good example of a color mix.
as for the colors, even tones work better together. these are a little over saturated and im not sure the yellow fits with the pink blue and white if you ever have trouble with colors check a color wheel, the color directly across and the colors next to the color you choose are often the most pleasing combinations.
as for boba, try and keep them from clipping over the edge of the filling, pushing the closer together and even ocationally having two overlap gives a better seance of depth. artists will also add a layer behind the boba, adding solid color, darker boba's to make it look like there's more in there.
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by Skoomacat » Tue Sep 19, 2017 1:29 pm
Lieutenant sparks wrote:great job on the backing list so far, as well as using the pixel brush.
there are some improvements you can make still though.
try blending the white and blue together more, the gradient tool is a good example of a color mix.
as for the colors, even tones work better together. these are a little over saturated and im not sure the yellow fits with the pink blue and white if you ever have trouble with colors check a color wheel, the color directly across and the colors next to the color you choose are often the most pleasing combinations.
as for boba, try and keep them from clipping over the edge of the filling, pushing the closer together and even ocationally having two overlap gives a better seance of depth. artists will also add a layer behind the boba, adding solid color, darker boba's to make it look like there's more in there.
Thank you!
The next one I'm making I will take into consideration what you've told me
This one was supposed to be a layered drink though :3
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