by sun struck » Sun Jul 16, 2017 12:55 pm
This is my first Kalon entry I've done:)
(Don't judge too much;; I did it with a mouse pad;;)
Inspired by Fire, Ash, Power, Explosive thoughts, and Lava lamps;;;
Criticisms are welcome<333
Edits:
Standard- Custom shine
Common- Custom hair(beyond the jawline when wet), Custom tail, Longer fur(chest, back legs)
Uncommon- Short fur(front legs), Custom ears
No rarity- Heterochromia(I think I'm spelling this wrong;;)
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by wishbone! » Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:07 pm
looks pretty alright!!
my first suggestion: keep a consistent style for drawing longer hair. the head's hair has no details, yet the tail's does. very good job on the tail, by the way! I really like how you drew it. my second suggestion: while your edits are pretty good, focus a little more on design. experiment with more complex markings.
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