Entry 10-Vaudeville Milk by cambion

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Entry 10-Vaudeville Milk

Postby cambion » Thu May 04, 2017 3:36 pm

Packing List wrote:
•//1 standard silicone shell | #f4bebe
•↪ long ears
•↪ long tail
•// 1 full package milk tea| #363636 to #FFDFDF
•//1 set of skeleton supports | #fee2ff
•//1 package single round boba | ]#f8dbe7]
•//1 Levitating Bubble | #f8dbe7
•//1 Set Eye Clings | #a2fec3 and #4e0f30
•//1 Above Chin Hairpiece| #ffe8ef // hairclip #2c2c2c
•//1 One Feather Boa// #ca0040
Standard Babusagi// 0 pts
    A •simple•, •cute• babusagi based
    of the 1920's flapper aesthetic.
    I loved the 1920's.
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    Critique is welcome and appreciated!
    Feedback is really nice because then I can get
    advice and improve!
Last edited by cambion on Fri May 05, 2017 1:45 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Entry 10- Pink Milk

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu May 04, 2017 3:44 pm

I really like this entry! My only critique is that having the hair be the same color as the filling, with lines almost as light as the hair itself, makes it really hard to see the edges of the hair. Maybe you could try darkening the lines a little, or the hair by a shade or two?
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Re: Entry 10- Pink Milk

Postby cambion » Thu May 04, 2017 3:47 pm

Weeping_Angel }Y{ wrote:I really like this entry! My only critique is that having the hair be the same color as the filling, with lines almost as light as the hair itself, makes it really hard to see the edges of the hair. Maybe you could try darkening the lines a little, or the hair by a shade or two?

    i changed it, what do you think?
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Re: Entry 10-Vaudeville Milk

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu May 04, 2017 3:52 pm

It's definitely easier to see now. And I love it. It's super cute!
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