Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python by .lucifer

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Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python

Postby .lucifer » Thu Mar 09, 2017 10:44 pm

AAAAHH I have too many design ideas so im gonna,, start throwing them into artist entries.
This bab was based off of albino burmese pythons + blue because I love pastel yellow/white with blue accents.
I kinda wanna keep them im,, so happy with how they turned out!!

They have standard shine edits, common hair + tail, uncommon ears, fur and eye edits!! the sparkles are an accessory,, aha.
Feel free to post as harsh of critiques as you feel this deserves! I want to get better at designs!
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Re: Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python

Postby Kyar » Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:18 am

Nice edits! I really like the concept for this but if I'm gonna be totally honest - the background is so bright I have to zoom in to see any details on the design. Which isn't even like. A design issue so much as just that the whole image is too bright for me. But I also have kinda bad eyes so.

I really love the shades of blue you used for the eye/shine - personally I don't think I would've gone for the pink pads or I would've made it a softer pink so they didn't stand out quite so much. I think you (from what I can see lol) did a really great job with the markings on the body though.

Overall I mean it's pretty sweet - I can see why you'd want to keep them - I would too!
So like yeah the background (again which isn't even design relevant) is all that's giving me trouble right now. I think this is really really well executed and you've definitely got a great eye for how much design to add to balance out the "white space."
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Re: Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python

Postby .lucifer » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:17 pm

Thank you, Kyar, for your input! I, too, in the light of day found the background to be way too bright, so i adjusted it to a soft blue, which hopefully doesn't clash too badly with the orange lineart and soft yellows in the design.
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Re: Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python

Postby sashiyaki » Fri Mar 10, 2017 3:00 pm

    I really love the design but the yellow is a bit too bright and a little hard to see for my eyes almost, but that's just me! i think altogether it's an amazing design though if i turn down my brightness. haha
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Re: Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python

Postby cakepopcat » Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:06 pm

I love it. Super pretty. Honestly this is really beautiful dear :'0 I would try out for this,, so hard
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Re: Kalon Artist Comp Entry- Albino Python

Postby .lucifer » Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:23 pm

sashiyaki wrote:
    I really love the design but the yellow is a bit too bright and a little hard to see for my eyes almost, but that's just me! i think altogether it's an amazing design though if i turn down my brightness. haha


ahhh thank you!! im sorry that its hard to see for you though </3

gunpowdercat wrote:I love it. Super pretty. Honestly this is really beautiful dear :'0 I would try out for this,, so hard


eep, thank you gun!!! im glad it looks good, aaaa
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