[elf_of_the_hollow]

And now I descend, screaming into the void as all of my pain and sorrows disappear and the few words escape my lips
"it's finally done"

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I'm sick and for some reason decided that this was the best course of action. Sorry if it looks weird??? I can't really focus on anything and I'm really tired,,,

Parents -- Val, Bellamy

Edits;
custom shine
standard hair
tail edits
custom ears
horns
teeth edits
heterochromia
longer fur
sclera color
short fur
custom pupil
custom tongue
halo
glow


entry #1 entry #2 entry #3 entry #4 entry #5

[whatswrongwithangela]

Those Line Edits Are Just Perfect!

[satyn]

Heya, thought I'd give you some critique. I'm sick too, haha.

I'll get to the point. I think the only thing I have to say about your entries is that I don't see a lot of color blending/exchanging in some of them. For example, entry two's kits are extremely similar to the respective parents, Anabelle and Ico.
With other entries, you used color blending, like entry one. But with the ones that you did less combining on, the kit(s) ended up looking a bit too similar to the parent. In my opinion, colors that take significantly from both parents or are a mix of their colors makes the kit more unique than mixed up edits of the parents because color is usually something we notice first.
I know mixing or matching parent's colors can be difficult, but it can go a long way for the kit's uniqueness. C:

Don't get me wrong, I love your entries. Your line edits and designs are lovely. Your colors match well too, so don't misinterpret my suggestion to be criticising toward your color matching. It's just the mixing that I'm critiquing.

Hope this helped, and sorry if it was confusing. I'm not in a great condition and my schedule will be brutal for the next few days. x.x