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My entry

Postby sylvauna » Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:19 am

Please critique! Tell me what I should add or change!
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Re: My entry

Postby sylvauna » Sun Jan 05, 2014 2:14 pm

Oh forgot to say that in the middle of the ties on her wraps are emeralds, and, being the color of her eyes, each contain a part of her personality
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Re: My entry

Postby Tea_Leaf » Sun Jan 05, 2014 2:18 pm

Ooh! I love the spots and the accessories! They're so neat!

A word of advice though: I do suggest that you make the moon a bit brighter. A sort-of silvery gray would be good.

But you don't need to change anything, this already looks amazing!
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I'll wither,
So peel away the bark.

'Cause nothing
Grows when it is dark.


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Whoa-oh-oh oh
Cover your crystal eyes
And feel the tones
that tremble down your spine.


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Re: My entry

Postby sylvauna » Mon Jan 06, 2014 1:47 am

Thanks! I'll do the moon ASAP, but I'm on my tablet right now.
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Re: My entry

Postby Pyromaniacal » Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:31 am

All right, stuff from me:

I think that the overall design is just too simple, like most of my entries. You should add a lot of complication to the design and more items.
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    ✧ ---------- PYRO - HE/ANY ---------- ✧
    STATUS: Cringe and free.x
    ANIMAL: Wukongopterusx
    GAME: Terra Nilxxiixxxxiixi

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    FriendTradesSimas
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    IF THE WORLD CHOOSES TO
    BECOME MY ENEMY, I WILL
    FIGHT LIKE I ALWAYS HAVE
    !

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Re: My entry

Postby sylvauna » Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:33 am

Sno Leopard [v.2014] wrote:All right, stuff from me:

I think that the overall design is just too simple, like most of my entries. You should add a lot of complication to the design and more items.

Ok will get right on it!
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Re: My entry

Postby sylvauna » Mon Jan 06, 2014 8:21 am

Ok, I added wings, more gears, a collar, and tiger stripes on the tail
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