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BrokenRose (MODS PLEASE MOVE TO COLORED IN!) by ; ; Galaxy

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Artist ; ; Galaxy [gallery]
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BrokenRose (MODS PLEASE MOVE TO COLORED IN!)

Postby ; ; Galaxy » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:38 am

Name-BrokenRose
Nickname- Broken or Rose
Gender- Female
Pack/Tribe- N/A
Mate(s) - Flame (Deceased) Hunter (Current)
Pup(s) - Tok (Deceased) Laka (Deceased)
Theme Song - Killing floor - BSC
Story-
Broken was first raised in the Black Forest pack, she was the lead hunter and fighter, she was deputy, and had pups and a mate. One day a pack that lived nearby, attacked. This was a long and brutal battle. When Broken finally called victory, she realized that some wolves had broken through into the camp, she had foolishly left unguarded. A female who had tried to protect the pups was overwhelmed with wolves and was nearly killed herself, walks over, her head down. "I'm sorry, I could not protected them." Shocked, and angered by the death of her pups, she ran to find Flame, to tell him of their pups deaths.
As the she-wolf walks over to where her wounded mate lays, fear floods through her. "He is dying" Flames cuts ran along his side, under his throat and down to his belly. She sighs, and lays down beside him, her own wounds stinging, but her heart aching.

In the morning Brokenrose's eyes flicker open. She looks over to Flame and listens. Silence Tears fall from her cheeks, Flame is dead. She licks the tips of his ears, and stands up, looking to the horizon in the sky. "What am I doing to do now?" she whispers to herself. "Every thing I loved is gone. My pups, my Mate, my pack." A small voice sings in the back of her mind. Run. Broken shakes her head, "I must going crazy" But again the voice sings louder Run! She sighs and starts walking back to her nursing den, which was nothing but a place for grieving. She closes her eyes, and flexes the wings on her shoulders, Spreading them out, teasing her Muscles, then relaxing. The voice Yells This place is nothing but a waste land! Go! Run and find your peace! Something drove her feet forwards, first she walked, then started troting down the hillside , Soon she was running full speed to the unknown, where love, pain, and peace find her.

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Cliffhanger!!!


(Should I continue with her story? Comment's would be awesome!)
~Silver~
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Re: BrokenRose (MODS PLEASE MOVE TO COLORED IN!)

Postby Calla*Ren » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:49 am

awesome story buut was wondering if she could be adopted
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Re: BrokenRose (MODS PLEASE MOVE TO COLORED IN!)

Postby ; ; Galaxy » Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:08 am

Um probably not. Sorry ^^'
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Re: BrokenRose (MODS PLEASE MOVE TO COLORED IN!)

Postby Shadeslayer243 » Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:46 pm

Amazing story :) Will you continue it at all? I hope you do, it sounds like a rather interesting adventure. Did you do this picture yourself? It is AWESOME and waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better than mine... That's coz I can't draw though XD But Rose is definitely a strong character, I wonder what it would be like to actually meet her?...
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Re: BrokenRose (MODS PLEASE MOVE TO COLORED IN!)

Postby ; ; Galaxy » Mon Jul 09, 2012 10:27 pm

I wish I did this Drawing. No, I found this Lineart and had to color it it. And yes. Currently I am making up a more detailed version of her story, with a few changes due to some idea's I had between the time I made this, and when I started the more Detailed version
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