[~Nonexistant]

I have a few questions...
1-If you have lots of art, does that increase your chances of winning?
2-Could you order art from someone to add to your form (as long as you say who really did it) to improve your chances? I want someone to draw the WoI Im going for with the armor I made up.
3-Should I PM questions to someone or post them here?
EDIT-also, what are the traits of #6?
[Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail]

[Offended Cockatiel]

Uhm...is it aloud by any chance that I can change the gender of #6 for my story? Like if I win,not saying that I am gonig to but IF I do,can I make her into a he?
If not that's alright. Thank you for your time.

No changes will be allowed on the character, including design and gender.

Alright. Thank you.
Runaway: Thanks.~<:

[Offended Cockatiel]

Number of the pup:6
Name: Noxes Comero
Short Story:
As I staired over the cliff a feeling of ilusion was cast over me. An invisable cloak that didn't seam too troubling just yet. The wind blew over the blue grass and the sky dawned a brisk morning color,even if it's shade itself was dark. My fur played with the wind as I staired,just staired. The land and it's beaty. It was untouched over this ledge. This towering peak. No one could feel the sence of the battles my ansestors had faught. Not up on this peak. The ledge of our slightly red tinted montain top. You could breath the safe air,and see the trees underneath our paws,towering over no one,up here,it felt protected. A lie,but the aura it wasn't a lie,the cold chilling aura of the battles never dimmed. The noises of battle,could you maybe here them if with concentraition? Tch...I hate this sometimes. Our mountain homes,it's so lovely. But,it'll never be a safe haven,with...thouse creatures. The Kronadors. Hideose creatures. I prapose,and everyone will agree on that word. With there disturbing eyes,horns and canines not being the worst of it. There size ranges so much better then ours. For a trainee did I know too much? Yes,I guess so. Though I am a quick learner,and no starter. Not a five month old pup,i'm older. I'm ready,I will show how I can take my own weight into account.
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Is it wierd how i've learned so much? I was usually the quick learner in my family,my siblings would be bundling to fallow. It seamed as there little paws grew mine were already past that stage. "Take it slow,it's better to see the world before it's gone." That quote may not have gotten me too far but it always seamed to be in my mind. Maybe because I never got it. Why would the world disapear? Was there something I wasn't fermilear with? All in all it just made me quicken my pace untill I am there,staring at the peace,the mountan top wear no one disturbes. No one will seek for missery. Atleast it feels so much like that. It's stupid to think this world will be gone just because I go faster then the others. And I know that. Knew that. I thought that. Not anymore. "Mama!" The beauitfull she wolf that was my mother strode over to me and smiled her ever gentle smile. But don't doubt her,she is brutal as much as she is elagent and suave. "Yes dear." Her voice was sweet but I didn't stay on it for to long. "Can I go into the forest yet?" My imatience grew with each month of waiting. I was still a tranee and yet I was so anxiose to go into that dagerouse forest and fetch myself amazing armor. "Noxes it's dangerouse out there. Your only a small pup." I huffed. "Mama! I'm already doing better then the others,why can't I go?" She chuckled and shook her head fur waving softly. I wanted to go so badly. The fiery feeling inside me filled with determination ran through my blood to my head sending whispering voices into my mind. 'Go on ,do it alone,be your own. Show them. Prove it.'...prove it. Prove that I was ready? Hmph,they should have sean I could do this. I didn't need to slow down to see the world beauty,I was fine going faster,doing better and passing more,the every one else. But I wasn't leaving,the truth is that stupid forest scared me so badly.


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"Is it determination? Why stop wear we stand, when were at the top? Go outside the cave, fly to the heavens. But don't lose yourself. In the green." Don't be greedy. I am better so I deserve more. I was taught to never beleive that. My father a noble warrior,standing tall and proud,muscular shoulders casting a shadow onto his paws. He told me everyone deserved a chance. And some a secound chance. He taught me to be kind and noble,yet some how brutal,and that mattered to me,because when the moon shined in an ever lumanesent way,and deep blue grass sarounded me in the darkness of fruitfull trees nothing else could protect me from thouse bright eyes and lovely little killing instincts our enemys the Kronador persieved,except the skills my father has brought me. He showed me everything I needed to know,and I was speacle,I got to learn more from him then my siblings. I still want my skill to be as high as they can get,but why stop there? Though greed is a putrid thing. What really judges us,and makes us better then anyone else? "Father teach me more." I was panting,body haunched,sweat trickling through my fur and extreamly tired. Augh! "That's enought for now Noxes." His voice was firm but warm. I knew I shouldn't have kept on though I did. "Please father!" I took a big breath and bounced infront of him as my siblings did per usual when they wanted something. Being all giddy and bouncy,though we were soon passing that age. "pleeeeeease!" I made my chaws clench maw circling out more as I whined. With a sigh he smirked. "Noxes you never give up. Do you?" I shook my head "No!.Of course not father!" Soft grin grazing my maw now I got ready to pounce. "Legs more crouched,back legs a bit straighter Noxes." With a swift nod his orders were fallowed and soon we were walking in a circle,across from each other. Stairing my father straight,I xould see his grey eyes sparkling with something,an emotion I couldn't see just yet. "Now remember-" I huffed cutting him off. "-Keep close with the eyes but don't let them look you right in the eyes,or they'll know were your aiming." My father took a moment before letting the now trembling silence come over him. I should really learn to shut up sometimes,I thought to myself in a scolding sort of way before baring my canines and getting back to usual. Father had already made his way closer wile I was distracted. Take the oppertunity. Well he was taking it pretty nicely. I leaned even closer to the grass,catching the unmarkable scent of morning on that grass on my snout. Were mostly shrouded in darkness,morning is such a sweet thing to sence. To smell,to see,to hear and to taste. It's such a perfect thing to come across in Isket. The perfect land,the dawning beuaty and the way we can all get along. My father pounced rolling me onto my back. "Noxes you need to concentriate." Letting me up he grimanced. A frown grazed my muzzle. "Yes father." And with that we started walking in a soft silence though we bouth smiled weakly,as if sencing that we were thinking of the same thing,the sad fate of Isket. How it could never be...perfect.

"Lie for the better." Hah..."Noxes!" My brother chidded towards me and I came tumbling over,ashamed with of many times I had tripped over in exitment. "Yes." I pressed. Mother had pushed me to play with the others more. And so why not? "Were going near the forest wanna come?" I couldn't get my mind clear as he asked the question but as the lustly words grazed my ears I smiled. "Sure!" Maybe this was my chance. If I could sneak into the forest I could show them,that I am brave enough,good enough. That I don't need to grow anymore so I can get my armor. That they shouldn't have doubted me! An unimaginable sort of happiness washed over me. "Lets go!" He grinned over at me and started to fallow. But before I could enjoy the soft blue grass tuffling my paws gently and the soft cool shade of the Isket trees mother called to us. "Wait you two." The wind played with my fur as I turned my head,squinting to see through my endless dancing dark fur I sighed. "Yes mother?" I was urging. The others were probably already there,and I didn't need them to come back and then we all wouldn't go for some stupid reason,cause I doubt we'll go there if they all come back. "Becarfull now. Tell your brother and sisters that."Alright!" We bouth called back over our shoulders. We had bouth started to run at the sign of dismissal,and I couldn't help feeling a bit of guilt for it. Somehow this was turning out to be a guilty plesure. To go so near a forest. When my parents would worry so badly. Maybe they won't know,maybe i'll be back in time...that maybe trick isn't working as it always does,but as I fallow my brother over the chilling path close to the forest,strong lush green trees popping up and protective gray caves dissapearing almost compealtly,I felt a sence of adventure wash over me. Maybe. Just maybe,this would go right.



"See things from bouth persepctives,good and bad up and down." Everyone oppinion is different,what you see and what you believe. I knew that but...it took a little persuasion to be able to trully see it,a chalenge. We were nearing the forest when the others came in towards us. "Hey!" my other brother chidded and the others echoed him,in there own little ways. For a moment the sweet sunny air was filled with soft voices,each different and speacle. Thank God the sun was still out,or the forest wouldn't be an option. Mother would have turned it down,quiet quickly actually. Though with the sun's giddy flitting she let us go. The air,breathing it in,it felt so...undeiscribable,free and lush as the blue grass and plants,so protected like the darkness,that usually wraps around us and so happy as the morning itself. As we all pad closer to the bundle of rocks near the forest intence the shadows grow wich each passing stone,then finally were near the looming shade of the trees,shacking slightly with the winds force. Now how was I sapposed to sneak away from my siblings? This wouldn't be easy,would it? But like father says,I never give up. And as I pondered one of my sisters pounced. "Woah!" She giggled softly. "Come on Noxes." Alright. I should atleast play a little with them. "Fine." I pushed on her shoulders sending us rolling over to the others,untill we were all a bundle of tired laughing pups,sprawled on the grass,trying to regain ourselves. I guess playing with them isn't all that bad. Though we all do have our differences. I grinned wildly over at them as I stumbled to sit up. "Come on guys!" With swift legs I hopped up onto a soft gray,with a hint or red,rock,and down,I staired at them bravely. They cocked there heads before giving me the same kind of wild grin. "Let's explore!" I was more fun then I ever thought it would be,to toddle around and be at the same level as them.
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"Fear in the hands of unkown protection and yet have no fear when your enemy is protection known."
I never got that. What? The quote itself seams to make no sence nevermind the meaning...Be scared of protection that is unkown,but as your enemy becomes protection that you know have no fear. We were chasing one another and practising our battle moves when I finally got my chance to sneak over. Closer to the forest. It was slowly getting darker and so I hid in the cool shadows of rocks and trees untill I was finally in the shealter of dep the forest. Now...wear to go? I guess it's just straight. Wasn't something like straight and never look back? With a quick hefty sigh I started on my way. A quick rustle from behind me sent me jolting foreward hurridly. Don't look back,don't look back,don't look back! "Noxes." A voice seamed to drion over the tree tops. Now,now I was just losing my mind. Just relax. With another sigh to close to the other one this one tiring and drained I started walking gently through the path,not stairing back once. If I staired back,what would this be for? Though I was just eight months,that's close enough. Close enough,though if so I still needed to become an apprentice. What was I getting myself into?Another rustle sent me jumping as high as the trees. I was panting,body quivering,heart quick as I tried to regain myself once again. Though slowly I closed my eyes listening to the soft lull of the wind as it brushed against my fur cooly and made the deep blue grass wave. It sent a feeling of ectasy over me,up my spine untill I was shivering,body tense and relaxed all at the same time. "Hello?" I gulped. Don't turn your head back. I didn't have to. As a creature near my age made it's way from the underbrush to infront of me,my quivering body dulling slightly. Then a soft crunching and my blood rose suddenly. It was it's feet moving,hitting against the green blue leaves on the reddish rum ground. My mouth opened but nothing came out. He,it was a male,he was looking just a bit older then me,still bigger and much to my suprise only a bit less confused as I. His eyes,dim but real,showed soft flecks of fear against the bright green. It shined,what you mite call a neon color,his eyes. Deep and watchfull,inspite of itself. Curiosity was a big thing of course. Again I opened my mouth,saliva tenderising my throut just slightly "he-hello." Voice dry and so hourse it embarest me. My snout brought itself slightly higher as I staired him straight in the peepers,my own green eyes,speckled with woven secrets wavering for a moment of firey fear. I knew had the same sight in my eyes,the same look. Of fire dancing in the air. It's flames faulter then lifting. Not knowing how high in a place I really was,or how close to the ledge I had my body,when I could have fallen,or flown,maybe just a soft skip,who knew how low this ledge of the mind was. Metaphoricaly speaking,I was on a ledge. And he was on one too. Bouth not sure how to react to one anothers company. And the air cooled,it chilled my body and dampered the aura to a sullen peak.
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Not gunna be able to finish but a little bit of the plot: She goes deeper into the woods,is found by a Kronador,who she thinks will harm her,they some how don't,someone comes to save her,attacks the 'enemy' and well then she stops them...and well~ I know...terrible explanation. But I will finish it and make it better{cause it will be better then this description sounds} if I get her.
"It's not always good to trick your mind into perfection."
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Havn't you ever herd? "no one apprecaites what they have,yet only go after what they want."
~`


"Sometimes it's better to know less." When I understood this...it seamed to late. Was it always this way? It was hard to belive you realised this when not too late.
~`




Art:



http://i1017.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... 0934PM.jpg Lirre gave it to me. She said she's dropping out for #6 and if you don't belive me,ask her. Thank you Lies -cuddles-
Heres a sketch of the armor: viewtopic.php?f=30&t=872477

http://i1017.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... 0923PM.jpg Another sketch,i'm thinking of mixing them a little. Cause Lirres one is cute though I think I can fit it more into her personality if i get her,armor that really fits.

Say three things about the WoI:
There land usually has more night then day
Kronadors will not leave the WoI in peace
They have three varietys of tails and three of ears

Theme song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=z49EqVmNdK4
This is MY idea: In my eyes there are not specks,but the happenings of my life,like a shodw of what i wish to have never sean
Needs more action as it is more thought process
There is a lot of description there, but you need more of the actual character, rather than the background. The character is the one you're going for after all, eh c: Though you have got some opinions and ideas in there c;

`~WIP`~

[Nimrod97]

Number of the pup: 3
Name: Dharma
Short Story: Dharma was always a calm and collected pup, always looking at what she saw with an open mind. She loved nature, when ever she ventured out doors she felt like she could stay there in that moment for the rest of her life and be happy.

One day while out playing by a stream she heard an odd sound. She poked her head through a bush and saw a group of fairies. She watched them with a look of complete wonder in her eyes. She was fasinated by the way they glittered and shown in the sun. The fairies were busy gathering berries so they didn't notice her, that is until a little caterpillar tickled her nose and made her sneeze. The fairies looked at her in suprise, they had no idea someone had been watching them. They all dropped what they were holding and flew up into the tops of the tallest trees.

Dharma walked out into the clearing, calling for them to come back. They kept a long hold of silence until one of the children flew down a bit farther to get a better look at her. Dharma looked at it anxiously wanting it to get in the sun so she could see it shine again. The fairy soon came closer until it was a breathes wisp away. They studied each other awhile and then the fairy started to speak.
Fairy, "Whats your name? Mine is Natallia.".

"My name's Dharma, nice to meet you Natallia.", responded Dharma.

"Thats an interesting name, um do you think you could tell me what you are doing out here?".

"Well I was out playing by the stream and I heard a noise so I decided to go find out what it was and I ended up coming upon all of you.".

"I see, you can't let anyone know that you saw us or there will be consequences you will have to face, do you understand?" the fairy warned.

"I uh, but I I don't know, well I guess, ok it will stay a secret I promise." Dharma stuttered.

Dharma was slightly alarmed so she started to get out of the clearing. She started to run, faster and faster she ran just wanting to get back home to her family to tell them about... wait, but I can't, I can't tell anyone one or or bad things will happen. She became very upset by this she started to wish she just hadn't gone outside in the first place.

When she finally returned to the den her father was out hunting and her brothers and sisters were playing in the main room. Her mother was fixing a pie that smelled like the most wonderful scent that had ever hit her delicate nose, she drolled in delight. Her siblings asked her to join in with them, she resented it at first but then thought it may just take the fairies off her mind. She joined in and started gumming her sisters throat. They ran around and yelped, having a good time.

Her father returned with a deer and a couple a squirrels. Squirrel was one of her favorite things in the world. The group of pups broke as soon as the fresh meat came in. They all jumped around thinking of the wonderful taste of deer and squirrel. After eating Dharma thought her stomach might just explode from all of the food she ate. She went outside and layed down with a curtain of darkness coming down over the sky. She soon dozed off with the smell of grass and pine in her nostrils.

She had dreams of walking through a beautiful forest filled with tiny mice darting under her feet and squirrels jumping from tree to tree while chattering playfully. She walked into a beautiful clearing filled with petals of every wildflower. She walked up to a lilac plant and inhaled deeply savering the smell when a group of fairies surrounded her. She jumped back in suprise ashamed that she was afraid of something so small and delicate. They started throwing questions at her demanding an answer to everyone. The questions flooded into her head making it hard to think. She opened her eyes in frustration just to see the grass holding her nose in the same spot she had fallen asleep in earlier.

She went back in the den and just sat there wanting to understand why she was having such weird dreams. While sitting there the same fairy that had spoke to her the day before flew in. She blinked wondering if it was just a vision, but when she opened her eyes it was right infront of her. She started to get hot with nervousness, wondering why the fairy had visited her. The fairy spoke to her stating that she was just there to check on her and see how she was doing, to see if she had kept her promise. Dharma shook her head in a hurridly yes. All she wanted was for the fairy to leave. The fairy took the response and flew out of the den. Dharma puffed a huge sigh of relief glad the fairy was gone.

She hasn't had any encounters ever since.


Art: Will put up soon.
Say three things about the WoI: They all have armour.
Only costums and alfa's can breed.
Warriors of Isket fight to find peace for the land of Isket, against the Kronadors.

[Lilian Nightshade]

I have a few questions...
1-If you have lots of art, does that increase your chances of winning?
2-Could you order art from someone to add to your form (as long as you say who really did it) to improve your chances? I want someone to draw the WoI Im going for with the armor I made up.
3-Should I PM questions to someone or post them here?
EDIT-also, what are the traits of #6?
[Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail]

Please, read the first post, the answers for the questions 2 and 3 were already written in the description. Also, I've just listed some answers there as well, including your other questions ^^.

[~Nonexistant]

I have a few questions...
1-If you have lots of art, does that increase your chances of winning?
2-Could you order art from someone to add to your form (as long as you say who really did it) to improve your chances? I want someone to draw the WoI Im going for with the armor I made up.
3-Should I PM questions to someone or post them here?
EDIT-also, what are the traits of #6?
[Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail]

Please, read the first post, the answers for the questions 2 and 3 were already written in the description. Also, I've just listed some answers there as well, including your other questions ^^.

O.K. and sorry. I read the first page, just not recently o_O

[Tisha-Nick]

I Have A Questions?

1. For the armor i have something simple right now but his real armor has some added stuff. I kinda want it to be a surprise but is that ok? Or do you want the full sketch of his armor? The Picture i has is to give you a idea of it.

2. Also Can he have say a friend like a bird or something??

Thank Tisha-Nick(:

[Lirrie]

Dropping out but Aysan1 has permission to use these pics. Only Aysan1 has permission to use thme,
Art:
Sorry its just a sketch

Armor Concept:

Here- This is just a concept

[Lilian Nightshade]

Guys, please, ask questions by PM, not here. This will make things easier for me, specially once judging starts -.-'.

[DecafBunny]

Number of the pup: #1
Name: Coming up woth (maybe lark)
Short Story:coming
Art:I shall work on it later
Say three things about the WoI:
1.