[starry--knight]

It could be a little more detailed, but I don't mind them having duel personality, makes it more interesting.

[Doglover37]

thanks

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[Spike20096]

Username: Spike20096
Name: Sereebo
Gender: Male
Pup #: 5
Personality: Usually happy, proud, strong, likes to make freinds, does not know the strength of its power, is closer to his mother than his father, hunts with his favourite brother Toroko , he is the youngest brother of the pack. Usally likes too eat Greebos.

Sereebo and his mum were hunting in a dark forest . there was a
was a medium size gap in between them. They could smell there pray but couldn't see as they just got there and there eyes didn't ajust yet. Then... WOOSH! Something about the same size as Sereebo went through the gap that they had between them . Sereebo could feel the air rush past his body a split second after the noise. His Mums eyes had ajusted and she Looked behind them and saw a dead Greebo, its three eyes bulging out of its small head that was still connected to its even smaller body, smallTeeth marks were on its forehead ( just made the greebo up cuz i dont know what they eat ) . The second she looked back to where her son was but he wasn't there. Sereebos mum went looking for him. She sniffed the air with sadness for what seemed like hours . Sereebos mum still couldn't figure out what had made the noise . She stopped looking around the area and looked in other places. She Threw her head back and Howled . A small howl howled back. She new that it was Sereebo, and the howl was pretty close. But then another howl crashed the silence of the dark forest , this howl was much the same and but much closer. Sereebos mum did not know that howl, but she could smell it now and it was in fact a young male wolf pup . Sereebo appeard from an undergrowth of trees, there was a smattering of purple snow on the dark green of there leaves. Sereebo also had a Greebo in his mouth that was dribbling with the Greebo's thick brown blood. His Mother had told him to go back to there den and eat there. Sereebo whined but obeyd almost instanly. As For the male wolf ; he was only a pup and he was whining for his mother . She took pity on him and decided to raise it her self . Sereebos mum went back to there den to get a warm greeting from her other pups and her mate. But then the other pup that she found popped his head out from behind her . Sereebo was first to approach, sniffing him and snuffling. After a while Sereebo crouched down in a playful stance towards the pup. And the pup ( the pup is Toroko) pounced on him playfully and they played the whole night. And Sereebo,Toroko and the rest of their famliy lived forever happy in there den that was always warm, cozy and forever will smell like The Wolves Of Cineon.
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PS: Better???

[starry--knight]

Better definitely, and since I don't have the information about what they hunt I'll let that slide. Though, techniqually they can't have family members that don't exist, but I will that slide as well this time. Thsnk you for applying^^

[zima.]

Who is winning so far for number two?

[starry--knight]

Yours, because at the moment the other form hasn't been worked on at all^^

[zima.]

Okay. Thank you. I still need a story.......

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