Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby starry--knight » Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:21 pm

Why thank you^^ another one should be popping up in a week or so ;)
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby Queen Vivane » Wed Feb 15, 2012 6:34 am

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R.A.W. name: Silence

Gender: Male

Personality:
Silence will flirt mercilessly with either gender and enjoys doing so with great pleasure, the flirting is a facade a wall if you must to stop anyone from knowing how he really feels. Every so often the walls will drop ever so slightly and you get a glimpse of the true Silence a kind and loyal wolf who would do anything for his friends

Story:
The pain haunts me I remember it everyday and feel the burning of the metal against my heated body the dried blood covering the very top of the artificial foreleg that had been attached in place of my crushed leg. I sigh and turn away from the window watching the snow fall only keeps me entertained for so long


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List Five facts about R.A.W.:
Rain causes the metallic parts of any wolf to lose function
Their minds are like computers so re boots can occur causing the wolf to remain immobile for some time
The newer an experiment is the more artificial parts it has making it more artificial then the older experiments
Pups are not born with metallic parts like the parents, the metal pushes out from underneath the skin an extremely painful process which has a high mortality rate and low survival rate
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby . ME » Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:13 pm

RULES:


Don´t touch the watermark, I have my reasons, why it was on the wolf!
DON`T REMOVE WATERMARK ! ( new since 29th june, 2011)
Do not use it in contest!
DO not make a own Base on for more color in!
DO not remove the BASE lines or the SIGNATURE!
Do not sell it in your shops!
Do only use it here on Chickensmoothie!
Do not take it as your work!
Do not use it for your own buisness (means!Do not color for other people + don´t take payment for it!)
Do not touch scetch layer!
DO NOT make a WIP (Work in progress) if you only show a blank lines like pic! I did a " USE IT FOR WIP" LAYER!




You was allowed to put it in your signature or Character thread on CS!
You was allowed to color for free!
You was allowed to send it to Chickensmoothie "THE AGENCY" or "WORMIS Adoption" but NOT on ADOPTABLE OEKAKI!
You was alloed to remove the eye bow and the name/Owner text.


TheWolfsgirl90 ( Maker of line-art ) said NOT to make adoptables out, only if you send it to THE AGENCY, or WORMIS Adoption.
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby starry--knight » Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:18 pm

I thought it would be okay, concidering it was in colored in, and I've seen a few other people who have colored in these lines and adopted out the design. Im sorry if i broke any of the rules.
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby . ME » Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:35 am

Yes, But if you check back on the line-art, someone commented saying " I've seen people making adoptable out of this for free, and I wondered if this was against the rules...

To thewolvesgirl90- hi, I have noticed alot of people make free adoptibles in the colored in section....is this allowed? I'm sorry, the rules were unclear to my feeble,simple minded head



Jasper-pup wrote:To thewolvesgirl90- hi, I have noticed alot of people make free adoptibles in the colored in section....is this allowed? I'm sorry, the rules were unclear to my feeble,simple minded head



If you're talking about me, I understand ^w^ Since I made 2, but I stopped when I re-read the rules which said "no using as adoptables". So, I created my own lines and now I'm making my adoptables with those. :3
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The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby starry--knight » Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:37 am

Alright I understand. Sorry about that. Should I stop the adoption all together, or may I adopt her out, then not use the lines again for this purpose. Thank you for your time.
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby . ME » Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:58 am

You should just use someone else's lines. Sorry If I seemed rude, I just wanna make sure that rules are followed.

But I understand if you didn't really understand the rules, I had to read them over a few times to understand them :3
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The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby starry--knight » Thu Feb 16, 2012 5:19 am

Totally fine, I'll just transfer over the design on the new lines, which I was just informed were finished. Sorry about the confusion and thank you for letting me know ;)
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby Squishy Fishy » Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:12 am

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R.A.W. name: Sheva
Gender: female
Personality:
Sheva is a rather hyper female, and is extremely aggresive towards thosse she dosen't like. She is a compolsive
lier and she is a bit spoiled. She loves to explore and take stuff like nice, shiny rocks back to her den.
The thing she hates most is rain.
Story:
Sheva padded down the river bank. The pebbles she walked on were amazingly warm. "Another day of sunshine!"
she called, feeling rather delighted. Her pupilless eyes scanned the shoreline. She was in search of a rock to put in her den.
the wind sofly ruffled her soft fur. She saw a glint in the water. She walked towards it, and dipped her head down to try and reach it. She managed to get the shiny silver rock, and happily padded home. There she curled up and took a nice, long nap
filled with warm, delightful dreams.
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List Five facts about R.A.W.:
1. When pups are born, they have no metallic parts. As they grow, the metallic parts come.
2. More intelligent then an average animal
3. They are able to speak english
4. RAW's were created by scientist who hoped to make the perfect pet
5. The newer of an experiment, the more metal pieces one has
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Re: Experiment 007- First Adoptable R.A.W.

Postby MusicalMoony » Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:32 pm

I'm finally getting around to it!

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R.A.W. name:
Meili
Gender:
Female
Personality:
Meili's coat gives her personality away. She loves being outdoors, especially in forests, as she can always find something to do and never gets bored. Even though she was too young to remember her birthplace, she often allows her imagination to run wild when forcing herself to believe that she was born in a forest. She is extremely quick and agile and one of her favourite things to do is just... run. It helps her clear her head but still have fun. She is often cautious around new people - you can't blame her if you know her history like I do - but once she trusts you, she'll be a fierce and loyal friend, so beware: if anyone attacks either her or someone she cares deeply about, they are in deep, deep, deep trouble!
History:
Meili's entire family was made up of strays that had banded together to tough out the cruel forest they dwelt in beside the slums of a poor city. When Meili was just five months old, her mother and father decided to up and move to a new and safer place. They tried to take all of their children but, seeing as Meili was the runt of the litter, she quickly fell behind and became lost in another strange neighbourhood. There, she tried her best to settle down and make a proper life for herself, but it was a difficult job; young children with no experience on how to handle animals tortured and abused her and she was attacked by other larger dogs who picked on her simply because if her size. I will skip the gruesome details, but for quite a while, she was teaching herself to totter around on three legs without part of a tail for balance. Finally, when she was only one year old, Meili chose to escape. She fled her captors and ran out onto the road before becoming stuck in the middle like a deer in the headlights, and young Meili was hit by a passing truck. The driver, filled with guilt, drove her straight to the vet. They were unable to do much for her and made the hard decision in putting her to sleep permanently, but at the last minute, a scientist arrived on her deathbed and offered to take her. He promised everyone in the room that he would make the last moments of her life special and comfortable ones... He lied. She trusted him, but he let her down. Almost as soon as she arrived in the lab, the scientist had workers scurrying this way and that to create another leg for her, but the new people frightened her with all of their cages and tools, and she smelt terrifying things on them. She wanted to run, to be free, to finally find her family, but she knew she had to act on her best behaviour so that the workers would be willing to make a proper leg for her. Several prototypes came and went, but she was eventually fitted with the one she has now, which has worked perfectly ever since. Though she was under anesthetic when anyone did any tests on her, she was well awake when they performed experiments on other wolves, and though they did not howl or cry out in pain - blame the anesthetic - she saw with her own eyes exactly what the scientists did during the operations. She has never trusted any humans ever since, and the only reason she is still trying to act tame and keep her scared side under control - though it has slipped through now and again (she glances evilly at the worker in the corner, the one with three fingers) - is because she knows that when the time comes, she can flee again and fufil her dream of finding her family
Story:
But little did she know the dangers of the road. She had already stepped out onto it, feeling the elated emotion of freedom claim her for only moments before a deafening honk echoed around her. She whirled on the spot, scanning the almost empty road for signs of the sound's source, before she heard a vroom, vroom, vroom noise racing towards her. With a feeling of dread, Meili felt time stand still. She turned, ever so slowly, to face the truck, which was now bearing down upon her like a massive overbearing thing...
The last thing she remembered from that entire moment was the feeling of pain as she attempted to leap right, out of the path of the vehicle, but the wheel had caught her leg and trapped it between the rubber and the concrete, spinning her around in circles as she heard sickening cracks resound in her ears and felt slices of agony shoot though her body whenever she tried to move-

Meili sat up sharply as a loud clattering noise bolted her conscious and shived her back into reality; a scientist nearby shot her an apologetic sideways glance as he bent to retrieve the scalpel. The wolf sighed heavily to herself as she stretched her stiff limbs, genuine and artificial alike, and forced awake her sleepy mind. Her vision was groggy at first but everything sharpened quickly as the blurriness rapidly evaporated. She yawned pointedly, flashing her large canine teeth as a warning, hoping the scientist would take the sign and flee. He did, scampering from the room as if he was a baby mouse being hunted by a large cat.
Meili smiled knowingly, rolling her eyes as if to say, 'You got off lucky this time'. It was true. She was usually a good-natured calm female that everyone would assume tame... That is, until something or someone gave her such a fright that her super-computer-like brain almost shut down. Then, blinded by fear, she would ravage anyone within a ten-meter radius. She couldn't help it, but the only thing she knew was that she now hated the title she had earned for herself, a plaque that now sat before her unusually roomy cage:
"Beware. Most unpredictable."
"It's not my fault," she mumbled to herself, her ears and tail drooping pitifully as she now glared disdainfully ay the card.
"It's not my fault."

Art:
You know I can't do art on Oekaki, Jedi, so I hope you understand and believe me when I say that I have decided to risk it label this one part of the form a 'work in progress' as I draw Meili by hand and then scan the picture onto the computer so that I can put it in the internet... A short but painful progress, and I don't want it to turn out like this (I want the whole picture!), but I'll risk it and I hope you like the finished product! I will post it here when I am finished :#
List five facts about R.A.W.:
- Robotically Advanced Wolves are capable of speaking the English language as they are more intelligent than the average animal
- When Robotically Advanced Wolves breed, their pups are not born with any visible artificial parts, no matter what their parents have. The litters can be made up of eight pups but only two or three survive the painful process of the metalic parts pushing up through the skin, providing the newborn creatures with a low survival rate but a high mortality rate, if they manage to live through it
- Robotically Advanced Wolves were the end product of scientists who dreamed to create the perfect wolf
- Observant of the obvious fact that Robotically Advanced wolves are 'fixed' with metal parts, these will rust in the rain like any other metal, possibly causing the wolf in question to lose the ability to use the now non-functional part
- Each Robotically Advanced Wolf's mind works exactly like an Artificial Intelligence computer's main drive, causing it to be (like I said before) much more smart than the average animal, but this ability comes with downsides as well as upsides; there are chances of the Robotically-Advanced-Wolf-in-question's mind rebooting at any time or place which disables the Wolf entirely, immobilizing it completely


(Edit: Will you be proud of me, Jedi, when I complete the art part?)
(Edit II: I'M FINISHED! CHECK HIM OUT! :3 )
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