Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby Mozzie » Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:03 pm

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[Fire Rose]

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Personality:
Fire Rose is fierce when she is standing her guard. She is very tuff and would not be the one to back down from a challenge. Fire Rose is also very sly and very sneaky. You never now if she is following you.
Likes:
*Guarding her territory*
*Hunting*
*Sneaking around, eavesdropping*
*Being as best as she can be*
*Training others*

Diskes:
*Being beaten*
*Failing*
*Letting her guard down*
*Being sneaked up on*
*Letting others down*

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Short Story:
Fire Rose was born to be one of the great Fire Guardians. She let nothing get in the way of her training and never gave up. When she was older she had to protect the dens.
"Fire Rose, take the North side of the dens," Apollo growled before turning and barking orders at the other wolves.
Fire Rose quietly trotted over to the North side of the dens. She sat down at the post and stared in silence into the darkness of the forest. Suddenly, a twig popped in the forest.
"Who's there?" Fire Rose snarled, jumping up.
Two shiny yellow eyes sparkled, staring at her.
"Who are you?" Fire Rose slowly walked towards the creature and as she neared it, it disappeared.
With the radience of the moonlight, she saw light brown fur running further into the forest. Fire Rose sprinted after it, her claws grappling up the earth as she ran. Suddenly, she halted to a stop. The creature was gone! She circled around and looked for the animal, then panic surged through her. A sharp, violent laugh tore through the night.
"Hyenas!" she whispered in fear.
Turning faster in circles, she tried to choose which direction the camp was. It was no use, she couldn't find her way back. All night she ran and at dawn she finally reached the camp.
"Apollo, hyenas are out there!" she howled as she bursted into the camp.
The camp was completely silent and no wolves were in sight. The smell of blood drifted to the camp.
"Apollo!" she howled again, sprinting to his den. It was empty exept for claw marks digging into the earth leading out of the den. "I-I'm to late..." she whispered, horrified.
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"Fire Rose, wake up!" Kamo barked.
Fire Rose opened her eyes and shivered at the cold breeze.
"We gotta move, fast!" Kamo said frantically.
Ever since her pack was murdered because of her, Fire Rose was taken into a small pack of six. Kamo, the explorer of the pack, was a black wolf with white, yellow, orange, and blue markings. He was the bravest and most courageous. Jaydie, the pup of the pack, was white and purple. Skylar was Fire Rose's best friend, she was blue and had yellow spots. Scanter, the hunter, looked like an oversize racoon. Coppper, the other explorer, was a copper color with red eyes.
"Wait, were are we going?" Fire Rose asked, standing up.
"There's a twister coming toward us- really fast." Kamo backed out of Fire Rose's rock den, followed by Fire Rose.
"Were are the others?" she asked.
"Over by the cliffs, hurry!" Kamo ran faster than a cheetah to the others but Fire Rose stopped.


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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby luthor » Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:21 pm

Just edited my form with his art. but it may take awhile to see it. it needs to be aprroved by a mod again cuz it has pictures on it : P But here is the forum so you can see it now if you want : viewtopic.php?t=1043738
P.S : my art might not be very good o3o i do all my oekaki with a mouse. xD
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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby T u m b l e » Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:23 pm

Dont worry ^^
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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby Palaye Royale » Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:29 pm

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Short Story:He grew up on a small farm in the contry, with his brothers and sisters. He was born in a shed, because the owners of the farm didnt know they were there. So when the farmers did find them, they got taken to the zoo. But the zoo found that these were not normal wolves, so they used them as gardians

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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby T u m b l e » Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:45 pm

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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby gailagj + doglover » Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:48 pm

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Number 6 of course, the one and only I fall head over heels for <3

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She is very calm and understands everything. She is smarter than most her age, and she is always proud. She despises kleptomaniacs, and has always wanted to be in the police force. She is very brave, curious, and strong, and she wouldn't give up to anyone. She loves to hang out with her friends, and she also wants to be a teacher.

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Prologue! :D

"How could you!? You told me that I-" The aggressive canine was cut off when the wolf snatched her up pushing her into his grasp. 'Oh great wolf spirit, why did you lie to me? You told me I would be ok. But I'm not. Mother hates me and Father is dead. Does that sound ok to you?' Gwyneth thought to herself her head dropping and her tail between her legs. She remembered her father's wise words. ' 'When fear seizes change what you are doing. You are doing something wrong.' But what did I do wrong?' Gwyneth limped on through the sand her head hung low.

Chapter 1
The old ways

Grass blew in the winter winds as autumn was soon to come. Flowers no longer bloomed in the sunlight but withered in the cold. Wolves were migrating and hunting season was over. Though not just hunters lived in the harsh cold of the tundra. In the deep times of the Eskimo people they were no hunting seasons. But the Eskimos were changing.... the Eskimo children were shipped away to go to school. The people had guns now. The ways of giving the spirits to the spirit world and celebrating a kill for what it was were over. Now they wolf packs, the seals, the caribou, and a culture was being taken down by white men. Racist white men. Now that nothing could peacefully search the world it was over. The white men will take down every species of animal and experiment on every species of animal so many times everything will go extinct and the world will be taken down by man made monsters. What has our universe come to?

Chapter 2
The whelping den

Deep in the horizon near a pond was a wolf pack. They had their own grass field to wonder and play in. There were six pups and four adults. Zachary, the alpha's serious partner as Eskimos called them, Amaroq, the one and only alpha, Sky the mother of the pups, Naka, the omega, and the pups, Miyax, Gwyneth, Jello, Sister, Daniel, and Kapugen. The pups were old enough to walk and speak and still ate regurgitated meat. The puppies had slept in their den now for weeks. Their den that they cherished, their whelping den. The den was dug out from a tree hollow, a large one at that, to be used for when Sky would have her puppies. The puppies were born there and would stay there until the family moved for the winter. The pups would also need to be old enough to catch small prey and eat real, true meat. They had been eating meat from the wolves belly-baskets. Inside the belly-basket was all that meat. They would stick their muzzles into the side of the wolf's mouth causing them to regurgitate food. They would also touch the other wolf's chin to show love and friendship. They had their stances, postures, and positions all saying what meant what.

Chapter 3
The agency

"Why do you want my children? And what might you trade for them?" The mother wolf whispered with a scared smirk. She was sly and sinister, she was more selfish than most wolves, trading away her pups for something like a caribou. The pack was being watched closely yet only Sky knew. She wouldn't tell the others or she would be brutally murdered. The agency was three very high ranked wolves of a different pack. One had brought their son, Giro along. The wolves were huge, and they were all brown and grey. They needed the puppies and were willing to make a trade. They had a trading system such as humans in the old days did. This pack was known to go out and trade, or sometimes even swap, anything from meat to children. A lot of times the wolves brought along their children to teach them their ancestors ways. These wolves always won and some were left penniless. The agency would sometimes lie to take everything or trick the mind into thinking the deal was good. Anyone who refused was murdered.
"We told you. We want them to take them back to our camp and treat them like real wolves." Giro's father, Clyde, told the mother. But his words were a lie. He only wanted to take the pups to have them become slaves, omegas, to be beaten and treated horribly until death. Some were starved and some even went insane, no wolves had ever gotten out alive when dealing with this sinister pack.
"They are my children! But uhm... what's in it for me?" Sky asked her eyes narrowing.
"Huh. That's what I'm talking about. Here's the deal," Clyde began, his tail flickering back and forth, Giro watching his father closely as he spoke, "I can take your pups, all six of them or just one of them-"
"How about just one? I have a puppy I do not exactly want...." Sky said turning away in dismay.
"Do not interrupt me!" Clyde snapped nipping at her nose. This signal meant he was boss. Sky cowered her head down and her tail between her legs.
"Yes, sir." Sky replied calmly her legs shaking.
"You give me one pup, and here. I will trade you mine. One pound of fresh," Clyde smirked his tail flicking once as he pushed Giro closer to Sky. Giro's expression looked as if he almost were to have a heart attack. But he knew better than to protest so he just shook his body in fear. 'Why is my father so cruel?' He thought to himself.
Sky's eyes went wide. 'Would he really do that?' "No, keep your pup."
"What do you want then, madam?" Clyde asked with a smirk.
"Protection. Protect us from hunters. And meat. Any kind of large game." Sky demanded stomping her paw.
"That's a little pricey for one pup, give me them all." Clyde said a serious look on his broad muzzle.
Sky hesitated for a moment. "Four. I will give you four and keep two."
"Deal."


Chapter 4
The trade

Sky had been told to go down into her camp and bring the pups back to them without anyone knowing. So Sky pretended she was taking the pups to go search for lemmings. As if it was their first hunt, their first try to taste meat. And even if it was... it would have been their last. She reached the three wolves and their cub. The six puppies looked astonished. "Good, good." Clyde smirked.
"Just take the four." Sky said pushing all the pups but Daniel and Kapugen towards the wolves.
"Mother what are you doing?" Asked Jello cocking his head in fear.
"Don't hurt them!" Sky called. Clyde smirked pulling out human materials. He slid the collars over the pups necks. The pups were all connected by a rope on their collars, that Clyde would use to pull them. All of the sudden one of the large brown/grey wolves slid under Sky pushing Kapugen and Daniel towards Clyde. Clyde slipped them into the collars quickly and smirked. "What are you doing!?" Sky screamed before noticing what was going on. Her scream attracted Naka, Zachary, and Amaroq.
Amaroq bared his teeth, "Who do you think you are?"
Clyde smirked pulling the puppies. "Ouch! Hey! Stop!" They all chanted something different. "Mother what did you do!?"
"Get them." Clyde gave the command. And soon wolves popped out of trees and jumped out to attack the four wolves. Sky's trade gave them protection, no one wants dead wolves, and they did give her large meat. 'She should have been more specific.' Clyde thought with a smirk. "Giro. Get over here mutt." He called to his son who scurried over. He slipped a collar on his son. "Useless mongrel." Clyde grabbed the rope jerking all the little bodies that were looking back crying for their murdered pack. He walked on, taking the other two whom came with him leaving the pack to be eaten by the starved attacking wolves.


Chapter 5
The journey

'How could you!? You told me that I-' Gwyneth's thoughts were cut off when the wolf tugged on the rope.. 'Oh Great Wolf Spirit, why did you lie to me? You told me I would be ok. But I'm not. Mother hates me and Father is dead. Does that sound ok to you?' Gwyneth thought to herself her head dropping and her tail between her legs. She remembered her father's wise words. ' 'When fear seizes change what you are doing. You are doing something wrong.' But what did I do wrong?' Gwyneth limped on through the sand her head hung low. The pup's paws ached and her paw pads were bleeding. They had traveled away from their camp on the tundra and away from the grass and snow to a place miles away where there was almost no water and the sand was like soft snow. The temperatures were so hot the pups felt like the could have melted. They had only took small sips of water twice on the trip, and haven't eaten the entire day. 'Where are we going?' Gwyneth thought. Also she thought about her mother. She thought her mother loved her but now she just truly despised her mother. Why would her mother give them away? One of Clyde's clan mates was pulling the leash now, and tugging at the collars. Gwyneth was in front of Giro who was in the back and behind Jello. Giro looked more confused and disappointed than all of the other puppies here. "What's your problem? You don't have a reason to be sad. You know where we are going you murderer."
Giro looked up. "Me? A murderer? Psch, yeah right. In case you hadn't noticed I am not supposed to be on these reins like you. My father hates me and-"
"Oh your father hates you tough luck both my parents were just eaten by starved wolves," Gwyneth said rolling her eyes.
"Not alright. I am going to be sacrificed or starved like you guys. Make me do all the dirty work until I fall over and they 'finish me off'," Giro said rolling his eyes.
"What. Sacrificed? Starved? Slaves? Is that what they are doing with us? Impossible!" Gwyneth snapped in disbelief. She refused to listen to him and what he had to say. She ignored what he said after that her paws aching. She wanted to scream and complain but yet even she knew better. She had no strength left in her.
After almost another full day of walking she say this... camp. It had walls made of pointed logs, and there were small smoke line coming from spots. There was a large gate that was shut tight. The place was like an enslavement group for wolves. As if no wolves could be free. She heard howls of pain as they got closer... what exactly was inside these walls?


Chapter 6
The camp

WIP. I might only finish if I win but this is soooooooo omg fun lol. U guys like it? Want me to finish? I will if u wants :DDD

This is saying as if the wolves were just wolves and I was inspired by the book Julie of the Wolves


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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby T u m b l e » Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:51 pm

Some people are getting confused, short stories can be as long as you want! i did a form for a pup i wanted a while ago and look what i did. viewtopic.php?f=32&t=940391&hilit=start%3D10&start=10#p24492920 you also dont have a limit on the story. the longer it is and the more detailed it is the better :3
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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby .jaskier. » Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:56 pm

Eh?! Ugh I fail at forms!
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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby gailagj + doglover » Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:00 pm

Yeah Painted stop killing us all with your awesomeness xD
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Re: • Fire Guardians. •

Postby T u m b l e » Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:01 pm

no you dont, you have till march to do this so get your game on ;)
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